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Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Wow! Lovely OS😳

Plot was awesome...
Sakshi's back story was nice...

Poor Sakshi..had to go thru a lot of torture bt glad Arjun saved her on tym...
And at last Janaab muskuraye to sahi...😆

Awesome👏

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sashashyam

@sashashyam

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Well, Tina, this is really very well done, and best of all, it is not mushy or overly sentimental.The ending is perfect, just the dawn of a new life for Sakshi, or rather the new realisation that she is not at all alone in the world, as she had feared. Not, as i had feared, a sudden love affair between her and Arjun.

The harrowing scenes in the warehouse have been done with great versimilitude; they made my skin crawl. Of course, it is rarely that the victims are rescued in such a last minute, breathless fashion. Real life is far harsher and uglier.

This said, the TV Sakshi is acutely irritating, and would get the goat of a boss far less abrasive and impatient than Arjun. She is also very often idiotic. Her comment yesterday about 'dialects' in Tamil Nadu, Andhra Pradesh and Karnataka was a perfect example of this. EVERY language in India - Gujarati, Marathi, Punjabi, Tamil, Telugu, Kannada, Malayalam, Bengali, - has dialects. It is not something exclusive to South India.

And she thinks the 3 odd words in the tattoo would be enough to identify this ;dialect'? I do not know which was more foolish, her comment, accompanied by a trademark. silly grin, or Rathore actually commending it and talking of a language expert identifying the victim's VILLAGE from the tattoo!! Both were completely cuckoo.

And since when has Shree started doubling up as a forensic expert, and that too without any bodY? I was greatly amused to hear him asserting that the arm had not been in the water for more than 6 or 7 hours. How does he know that ?

Shyamala Aunty

Originally posted by: haruhi26
Part 3
After a few hours, they had localised the car and it's owner already. The car had last been spotted in an abandoned warehouse. They all got ready with their bullet proofs jacket and their guns and went to save their friend. They all prayed that Sakshi was still there, and still alive too.
In the warehouse

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JeeLeZaraa

@JeeLeZaraa

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

oommmggg... i was shocked at how real the story felt 😲 Those sick people!!! im glad arjun beat them up.. how dare they touch sakshi!! 😡 im glad arjun is nice to sakshi now... and sakshi got her family back in the form of ETF team

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fly.high

@fly.high

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

wow wat a lovely OS

loved everey bit of it

sakshi suffered so much

finally arjun found her

he no longer hates her...

awsm OS

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Tina di...
hehe luk i m here
ur writing made me crazy
drive me lol super crazy!
haye gorky sir ko ye script dedo
maja aa jae.!

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Totaly thrill...
i m amazed!
me jitni bar sochti hu cment na kru bt u make me!!
lol
take a bow di
awesumwa ekdam
grt title...

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Mishti,mish,mishtu, mt

@mishree

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Awesome,superb os de

Thanx 4 pm me

Plzzz update ur work I misss ur work

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Aaliya....

@Aaliya_Fizz

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Wow awesome tina👏
Kaash show me bhi aisa he kuch ho

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isha

@naughtykittyyy

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

its a nice one dear

keep wrght more os

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shona14

@shona14

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

sorry m late 😭
tina u r an awesum writer yaar...superb os
arjun k baaton ka itna asar ...and arjun to be honest i was very angry hw he was unaffected by sakshi's absence and he even dint want that anyone else shud talk abt her..
its gud arjun realised his mistake after commissioner told the truth..
and it surprised me alot that he was totally changed...m happy also..
poor sakshi suffered a lot...those creepy men
arjun saved her yipee😊and he evn care fr her..gud
lovely os👏👏👏