Ariya SS- Le Jaye Jahan Zindegi [ DC-note pg 33 ]

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Posted: 11 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen

told you na! No more mysteries here!
Ahaan so intelligent you anku😉! Yes she was Riya in the screen of projector.
You the only one could guess.
Thanks for the nice review. Your comments Always made me day .

Yayyy i guessed it right... It's the effect of biggest mystery queen...😉😆

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BitterBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#152

____________________________________________________________Chapter Four

Next Morning:

She twisted her body to the left side , pulled the blancket again and covered her face again, and here Aunty is trying to pull out it from her.

Aunty : Riya? Riya beta utho! Subhe ho gayi hai!

Riya : sone do na aunty! Har waqt toh sulane chali aati ho , ab opposite raasta kyun pakad rahi ho aap!

Aunty thought whats wrong with her . She wakes up early every morning but today she dont even wnat to get up from the bed.

Aunty : riya????

Riya : MV : har jagah wahi hoti hai jahan nahi hona chahiye! Ab mai kya karun?

Riya: bas 1/2 hour more ..pakka mai uth jaungi. Aur kabhi soungi bhi nahi ! Ho gaya? Aap jao ab!

Aunty : arre? Aaj kya hua hai tumhe? Mujhe hi bhaga rahi ho? Ajib hai?

Riya grumbled inside the comforter : Aunty?? Please.. Mujhe ajib kehne band kijiye. Jab aap bolti ho toh sach mai lagta hai ki mai pagal hun..

Aunty : ohh okk! Ja rahi hun.

Aunty sighed and walked out of her room placing her strong coffee beside the table lamp.

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Here inside room

" Haan Techie bolo, sorry wo aunty aa gayi thi ", she answered the person other side.

'' oh okay no problem! But please mail jaroor check kar lena "!! The other person spoke.

'' Okay Shree, bye "!: she kept her phone aside and sighed in relief as she was very much succeed in fooling aunty for the first time .

'' gosh ! Bach gayi aaj! Itni subhe isse mera number kahan se mil gaya! Huhh sayad aunty sahi kehti thi, ye police walon se na dosti achhi hai aur na dushmani. '' she thought and again smiled as she is saying such typical lines of aunty. How could she miss teasing her aunty. Umm thats in her daily routine.

She hurried up and directly went to washroom. It is very important day for her and also lucky one. Just previous night she was thinking of an internship and here she got a chance.

Shreekant Sen , the technical expert of the team , urf her just New friend informed her about something that they have talked before while returning from the ETF office. Though they are completely unknown to each other , still there formed a very warm bond in between these two. May be for the same passion of photography, instantly the considered themselves as friends. And for Riya, she thinks she could give him a chance to be friend with her.

Though she have lost her memory full , she had never been wrong recognising people. May be its in her senses that would make her feel any indifference , if there is any, with any person. And with Shree, she never felt this.

She walked out of the washroom after her daily routine work and setteled herself in front of the PC and opened her mailbox.

She opend the mail that was from Shree and a wide smile appeared on her face and she smirked. She could not miss this chance.

That was the appicant form for the internship in Forensic lab of ETF for a forensic photographer. And the dates are now ending. That drained her all smile from her face and she thought, '' how to convince Aunty, because she will never allow her''! But this time she won't let this chance go! She will have to talk to Aunty .

At the right time Aunty entered into her room with a hot plate of cheeze pasta, but she didnt show any reaction.

She walked ahead and tapped her shoulder . She was startled by her touch and looked up.

Aunty : kya hua beta? Mai dekh rahi hun kuch badli badli si lag rahi ho? Hua kya hai beta?

Aunty figured out her flushed face and she thought something is seriously wrong. She have never behaved in this way. It is her favourite , and she isn't paying any attention.

Aunty : riya? She shook her aain.

Riya : aunty aapne kal ke bare mai kya socha? She asked with anticipation her fringers crossed under the table.

Aunty: kya ?

Riya : auty, jan kar bhi anjan mat baniye? Mai janti hun aap sab samajh rahe hain.

Aunty : beta... Mai! Mujhe thoda aur waqt do? This time she is sounding so low. This time she was not the Aunty who always dominated her.

Riya: Aunty! Mai kuch nahi sunungi! Aap haan kar rahe hai ya nahi?

Aunty : riya tum..

She cuts her and said, '' Ek baar dekhiye toh sahi, this is the form! ETF mai kaam karna chahati hun mai. They need a forensic photographer!

Hearing the name ETF a shiver ranned through the Ladys body which Riya could figure. But that was as if an expression of relief.

Riya : aunty ? Ab toh boliye!?

Aunty: okay ! Toh tum sach mai yaha kaam karna chahati ho ?

Riya : haan! She said with a lot of excitement.

Aunty : pakka??

Riya : pakka !! MV: asal mai toh mujhe in guards aur iss char deewari se chutkara chahiye!

Aunty : okay! She said normally.

Edited by Vampire-queen - 11 years ago

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BitterBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#153

Two Hours Later
In the ETF SUV
Arjun and Sam

Sam was driving the SUV and Arjun was on the passenger seat. Silent as always. But todays his silence expressing something else. Normally his silence made others feel peaceful, but here the person beside him being restless for his this kind of silence. Its not peaceful, but disturbing!

Without wasting any more time Sam directly asked, " Baat kya hai Arjun? Aate waqt se dekh raha hun ! Itna paresan kyun ho"? Kya hua? Kuch problem hai? Arre kuch toh bolo?? He yelled on him, later kept quiet as Arjun glared ay him.

'' bolo..bolo..bol.. Bolne ka mauka toh do "! : said Arjun shooking his head and again said, " Sam Road pe dhyaan do, warna ya toh koi saheed ho jayega ya phir hum miljul kar sasural jayenge"! He said with a forceful smile.

Sam retorted saying, " haha.. Not that funny okay, ab bata kya baat hai? "!

'' Mujhe kuch fayisle lene hai Sam!! And I am helpless"!! He said all in one word .

'' wait wait! Na aage ka na peeche ka,...kya fayislein lene hain"??asked Same a little confused, as if what happened now.

'' sam uska cousre khatam ho gaya hai! And now she wanna do job "! He spilled everything about the late night conversation he had last night still not convinced with the conversation.

'' toh phir? Tum kya chahate ho ''? He was confused as what to advise to his friend.

'' It doesn't matter Sam! The thing matters is, wo kya chahati hai "? He sounds so dull, as if this is the only wish he could never fulfil!

'' toh karne do usse jo wo chahati hai! She is an independent girl Arjun! Let her live her life as she wish "!! He spoke the unexpected.

'' kya? Tumhe bhi yahi lagta hai Sam"? He asked a little bit surprised at his reply.

'' obviously Arjun! Uski zindegi se dur hona tumhara faisla tha! Aur aajtak uske saare faisla tum lete aaye ho! Ab kya chahate ho tum?? ! Socho Arjun! Kahin usse bachane ke chakkar mai tum usse barbaad toh nahi kar rahe ho''? Sam pulled the gears in front of the ETF office and walkd out immediately pretnding for the urgencey but actually he did not want to argue with him anymore. And it was bound to happen. Some day he will have to make choice, then why not today!

And here Arjun was still pondering over what Sam said minutes before. He could not deny the fact that Sam is 100% right. But still his heart is not permitting him to make any desecion. He dont know how much time he took for compose himself but, one ring on his phone brought him back to reality.

'' haan Sakshi, mai pahuch gaya hun, tumhe jo Articles ke bare information mila tha usse collet karo... I will be there !! He cuts the call without listening her words further.

He came out of the SUV locking it , tucked the gun behind his back and put down his glasses inside his pocket.

He walked ahead towards the entrance and headed towards the elevator, but the blurred view of a figure made him froze on his track, and impatiencely he walked back to reception.

There she was in a denim blue jeans and a black sleeve less top, open hair , a laptop bag on her left side shoulder, one hand holding some forms and other one have a handicam. For a moment he could not his eyes off from her. As if the world around him never exist except the only person standing straight in front of the counter.

He could not stop himself from making his way towards her, but wait! Is he dreaming ** no he hardly do day dream**, or she is there ! The most charming smile of the world vanished from his face and a little frown covered his face.

But again the smile returned back to his face when he saw her turning back waving her hands towards flasing her deep dimples. She took small baby steps towards him, as if she is confused! He knew it, she must be struggling for something, the way she was observing her surrounding, as is very very excited or nervous. In her case she could only be excited. Later he smacked himself for losing himself for her like this! '' wait, what the hell she is doing! Control Arjun... 1 2 3 4 .. Breathe in.. Breathe out.. Shut up you dumb heart" !! He cursed himself again and later at the girl in front of him who is pacing towards him as if no one could stop her. She is the very reason that imbalance his whole metabolism some times...nope EVERYTIME!!

He saw her coming towards him.. She walked and walked and walked past him *phew*!!

'' she walked past me? Whom she is waving at them "? He turned his heel with curiosity and again a shock.

'' Shree "??? He wishpered as he saw Shree shaking his hands with her! And there is no way he could leave her hand. That again made his adrenalin rush ; gritting his teeth he paced towards them like a hunrgy lion.

Edited by Vampire-queen - 11 years ago

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BitterBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#154

But before the lion plunged on them, they were out of his view as he could only see the closing door of the elevator. **bang** he banged his hand on the door earning weird 😕looks from the people around and managed a i-didn't-do-purpously look😒 , giving a toothy smile.😃😆

The his phone started ringing again. '' Hello, Arjun "? The other side never finished,😕 he started his barking " Wo yahan kya kar rahi hai Maa 😡''??

'' Oh toh wo dikh gayi tumhe'', said his mother as if she never wanted , he would see her there😲 atleast not before the interview🤔.

"kyun ? Kya wo Miss. India ban gayi😳 ya phir mai andha ho gaya 😕 jo nahi deikhe "??**err..wrong punch**!! '' aapne jabaw nahi diya? Wo yaha kar kya rahi hai? 😡 he started again.

'' Interview ke liye gayi hai! Tumhare Forensic Dept . Mai, internship ke liye '' she said proudly. And he was like a volcano ready to busrt😡😡🤢''!!

'' kyaaa "??? He again yelled top of his voice😡!! '' Aapne mujhe ek baar pucha bhi nahi? Aur kyun? Hamari baat toh ho chuki thi na? 🤔 ''?

'' Hamari nahi, Tumhari baat khatam ho chuki thi😳... Ab mai usse nahi rokne wali hun! Usse apni zindegi jeene do Arjun "! She said maintaining the seriousness of the situation. 😊!

'' par maa, sab kuch jante hue bhi?? Aap kyun?" now he is helpless 😭.

"Mujhe kuch nahi sun na Arjun! Ya toh tum iss baat se raaji ho jao ya phir apni nakchadi biwi ko yaha se le kar jao😳😡!! That seemed her final desecion. ** hell I could not argue more**!!

'' ek aakhri baat Arjun, usse bachane ke chakkar mai kahin tum uski zindegi barbaad toh nahi kar rahe ho? Jara socho!! Mai aage kuch nahi kahungi! 😃". And she cuts the call.

Now he would have to agree to his mothers desecion ** err.. Not so easily😉**.

Yaha tak toh aa gayi Riya! Bas interview mai ab kya hoga, wo tum par depend karta hai!! He smirked as the devilish idea proped in his mind. 😈!!

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Precap :

I. Miss Mukharjee ki personal interview by Mr. Rawte😉☺️.

II. Riya : chcek him out Guards!! She said murderously looking at Arjun!!

III. Arjun glared at the guards !!😳.

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Ok , I dont know what was this.
Tragedy turned out to be comedy. And I have to admit, its too difficult to write a part without case for me.

Hats off to the writers , writing such wonderful pieces witout involving the case carp😃!

As stated before, this will be Rom-Com **hope fully not turned out as mystery**🤢😆!!

And one more thing? Any comments on the Emos😆? Sorry, thought try this one too. Comedy ka feel aa jayega🤣

and @zubiya @abna, @divi! Sorry guys for making you wait this long. Really busy these days.

Do tell howz this part.
Thank you.
Regards

Vampire-queen🤗.

Edited by Vampire-queen - 11 years ago

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Mdmadona

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Posted: 11 years ago

#155

Awesome update

Riya get along well with everyone

Liked samjun's reaction on riya's video they are quite surprised

She gave an important clue for their case cool

Haha riya made face on Arjun lol loved her childish antics she is so cute

Arjun is scared of riya's safety

Who is this Ryan now???

What are they hiding from Riya??? Why???

Aunty is arjun's mom, was a typical mother-in-law b4 omg

Then why is she accusing Arjun???

Precap is interesting & quite scary

Cont soon

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cuteariya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#156

vampu when u gonna update next chapter?😭😭

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devildiva21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#157

oops am very late... in reading the update😲

u can lobb me if you want.. full permission😉😆

the update was super duper awesome...!!!

aahan so riya in ETf and instantly formed a bonding with shree and chottu... love how the got the common topic to talki and got so engrossed in that forget ki riya waha kyu hai😆

and ye kya i knew wo arjun hai.. he n sam knows something.. but then why are they hiding about riya??? and what happened to her ki she lost her memory and now they want to protect her n not let her out??

atleast aunty is thinking about not stopping her.. thank god...!!!!

awww arjun admiring her seeing her pic haan.. love how sam was teasing him...!!!😉😆

and the way he almost blew his cover about not making her stay interrogation room... bal bal bache...!!!!

i love this riya..she was so happy.. exploring new place and stuff n getting a new person to talk to...

and the way she was teasing aunty .. nice...!!!

aahan... et mai job n riya gonna apply cool..

ab aayga mazza😉

continue soon..!!

am eagerly waiting😳

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Snehajain

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Posted: 11 years ago

#158

Awesome update...

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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rizwanaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#159

awesome update
Riya was superb
Sameer n Arjun convo was really nice
Arjun's reactions n mind talks
after seeing Riya were really nice
Arjun n maa's convo on phone was nice as well
interesting precap
thanks for pm
cont soon