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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ll_piya_ll

Update next part dr...

Coming dear😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: devildiva21

so sorry for the late comment momo...!!

plz don't kill me😆😳😉
the update was super duper awsum...!!
very beautiful...!!
love the way you have described arjun's pov...!!
so he is yet to avenge roshni's death???
and riya came and left?
and he realized his importance later on?
but why are they behaving like strangers? aise kay MU ho gyi dono ke beech?
continue soon...!!

it's okay divi😛
will not kill you tujhey toh tohmain tarpayungiii dushman😉😆😆
and thanka for liking update😳
will continue soon darling😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
coming soon😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks bell😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Aks13

Sorry for late comments dr.


BTW its a beautifully written update.

Loved Arjun's POV.

Riya cme in his life before Roshini.

Thn why he married Roshini whn he realised that he loved Riya??????

Wht happened btwn thm that she left him???????

He still has to avenge Roshini's death.

Wow nw thy r behaving like strangers wwhch made him reatless.

Cant wait to read more.

Continue soon.


it's okay..
Thanks Akansha😳
will try to continue soon😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Moumimon

it's okay divi😛
will not kill you tujhey toh tohmain tarpayungiii dushman😉😆😆
and thanka for liking update😳
will continue soon darling😳

haila tarpa ke😲 apne bday ka badla legi kya🤣
chal jaldi jaldi update kar😛😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
sorry mai bech mai to ni aayi na😲
aur agar aagyi to ab kuch ni ho skta😃😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Back With new Update hope you all liked it..here you go for Chapter 2...😳😳
know that i am too lazy..and relly sorry for so late guys..hope you all forgive me😳😳
Chapter 2:


Next day Morning..

Bai uss ladki ko bula rahi hain didi ji diddiji… uss ladki ko nind se uthane ki koshish kar rahi hain…

Bai: apko aaj office nehi jana..kal hi toh join kiya apne…late nehi ho rahii apko???madam jii…o didiji uthiye na….

Ladki bed se apne ser uthate huye : nehi late nehi ho rahi…

Bain : kiya keh rahi hain didiji?? Apko pata bhi hain 10 baaj gaye hain..aur apko late nehi ho rahi!!

Ladki apne chehre pe haasi liye: nehi ho rahi kanta bai jii…

Bai: Apko pata hain police ki noukri main deri nehi chalti…kahi apko eye bhari na pare..kal join kiya aur dusre din hii deri se ja rahi kaampe..wo log apko nikal na de…

Ladki: nehi nikalegi wo log mujhey…

Bai shockingly: apko kaise pata ki apko nehi nikalenge??

Ladki: kyun ki eye noukri eye post Riya Mukharjee khud chor rahi hain…….

Bai shockingly: kiya…

Ladki bed se utarte huye: haan..

Bai uske piche jate huye: app eye noukri chor rahi hain??paar kyun???

Riya: aise hii..

Bai: aise hii..apne kitni mehnat se eha iss mukam pe ayii hain..sabse larke aur abbb!!!

Riya: haan eha hamesha se pohochna chahti thi main..dekhna chati thi ki…phir bich main rukke..choro kanta bai..abb eye job main nehi kar sakti…and it's decided by god not by me samjhi????

Bai: pher app kiya karenge..??

Riya: ghar loutenge aur kiya??

Bai: paar uha toh..

Riya: kanta bai..jo hoga dekha jayega..paar eye job main continue nehi kar sakti…baas app mere liye nashta tyar kije bohot bhukh lagi hain…

Bai udas hoke: thik hain…


11.30 pm

Here in one office conference room where two men and ond one women doing chit chat…

One men to the lady: kal kaha thi tum??aise achanak chutti kyun??

Lady: wo shree...wo kuch problem main phas gayii thi yrrr…

2nd men : kitna kuch miss kardiya tumne pata hain??

Lady: aisa kiya miss kardiya yrr..

Chotu: bhul gayii kaal hamare eha naye officer join karne walii thi??

Lady: join karli kiya??

Shree: Nehi tumhare liye wait kar rahii thi..kaab tum ayogii aur use welcome karogii phir wo ETF join karegii…

Lady: Batao na kiya miss kiya yrr??

Chotu: bohot kuch miss kiya Aiesha..kiya entry mari naye officer ne…aur use dekhte hii humare Samjhey ya samjhun ki bolti band…

Shree: Socho Aiesha koyii aisa bhi hain jise dekh Arjun sir bhi chup ho jate hain…bilkul chup….

Aiesha chillake : kiya!!pagal toh nehi ho gayee tum dono??kuch bhi bakte hoo…

Chotu: you don't believe us??

Aiesha: ehh nehi..!!

Shree: you don't believe na..okay than check this…and he handover his tab to her …

Aiesha: eye kiya hain??

Chotu: sawal maat pucho..baas eye video dekhte jao age tumeh khud pata chal jayega…

Aiesha wo video dekhne hii lagte hain ki tabhi Lisa Conference room main pohoch ti hain..aur piche se saabko awaj deti hain hey hello guys….

Aiesha Video stop karte huye: Hey lisa…

Lisa: kaisii ho aiesha??

Aiesha: main thik hoon..tum kaise hoo??

Lisa: me fine as always…waise kiya chal raha hain eha??

Aiesha shree ki tab haat main lete huye: lisa eye dono mujhey eye video dekhne ko bolrahi hain…kal Arjun Sir ki bolti band ho gaya tha aisa hii kuch bak raha hain …

Shree: Aiesha main sach bol rahi hoon..tum ek baar dekhto lo eye video…

Aiesha: nehi yrr..

Lisa: waise Aiesha eye specky toh hameshase hii galat batein karte hain...paar you know what aaj eye sahi bol rahi hain..Saach main nayii officer ko dekh arjun sir jaise bolna hii bhul gaye the yrrr…

Aiseha shockingly : Sacchi???Kahi mujhey beokuf banana ki tyary toh nehi chal rahi…

Chotu: ehh Aiseha bate na kar pehle ye video dekhto lo..phir samajh ayega sach bol rahe the ya jhut..dekho toh sahi….aur waise bhi hamare chief ki hone wali ko hum kuch bhi banaye beukuff kabhi nehi banayenge…

Aiesha: Kiya kaha…

Shree: wohi ki tum hamare Rathore sir ki hone wali patni jo tehrii hamari itni himmat ki hum tumeh beukuf banaye..kahi chief se kehke humain ETF se nikal na do…

Aiesha gussa hoke: grate jock shree..Agar tumhare chief meri baat sunte toh kaabka nikal diya hota…meri bate hii kaha sunte hain..hamesha damn it damn it karta phirta hain...mere taraf dekhne ki bhi phursaat nehi uneh aur meri baatein suneh…

Lisa: hamari chief..itni bhi pyaraii maat banao uneh…wo sunenge toh bohot dukh hoga uneh….

Aiesha: uneh meri wajahse dukh nehi hote…aur stop talking about your chief..warna main chali ehase…

Shree: nehi nehi nehi..okay hum aur kuch nehi bolenge hamare chief ke bare main…eye video toh dekhlo…

Chotu: haan aiesha dekho na….


Aiesha video dekhne hii lagte hain tabhi conference room main ACP Sameer Damsing Rathore aa phochta hain…

Aur unehdekhte hii saab ek saath khare ho jate hain…

Rathoe: kiya ho raha eha??

Shree: ku kuch nehi sir…

Aiesha: kuch nehi sir…

Rathore: toh kuch kyun nehi horaha..kaam nehi koyiii!!!waise Rawte kaha hain..eha naya case ke liye commissioner sir ne meeting bulaya aur eye rawte ….

Chotu: nehi sir..wo toh abhi taak aye hii nehi….

Shree: nehi chotu aye hain..maine kuch der pehle Arjun sir ko balcony main dekha tha….Paar Riya nehi ayii abhi taak…

Aiesha: eye riya koun hain??

Lisa: Aiesha nayiii officer….

Aiesha: oo…

Rathore: pher Arjun hain kaha abbb??

Abb saabki pichese koyii bolparta hain: main eha hoon…

Saab choukke uske taraf dekhte hain Rathore: tum eha hoo rawte..main tumeh kaabse…

Rawte: kyun kuch kehna tha???

Rathore : naya case hain..comissioner sir meeting bulaya hain..Puri ETF ko milne bulaya hain…

Rawte: thik hain chalo…

Rathore: Shree tum kuch kehrahe the??

Shree: Sir Riya abhitaak nehi ayii..it's almost 12 now…may I call her…

Rawte: Shree wo bacca nehi hain..use pata hain office time..agar samay se office nehi pohoch sakti tell her to leave…

Rathore: Rawte control yourself..shayed kisi problem main phas gayii hogi..waise bhi apni job ki dusre hii din koyii jaanbujhke late toh nehi hogi na…

Rawte aur gussa hoke: Assa..phir late kisliye ho rahi hain…

Rathore: ohh come on Rawte..wo Mumbai main naye hain..shayed kisi prolem main phas gayii hogi….

Rawte: Dusre ko problem se bachane ke liye ETF main join karne wali khud problem main phas ke office ane main late hote hain..kamal hain…

Aiesha niche awaj main Shree ko: tum toh kehrahe the naye officer ko dekhtehii bolti band hogaye hain inka..eye toh aur bolne laga yrrr..mujhey na tum logope bilkul bharosa nehi hain…

Shree: sach bol rahi hoo yrr..eye najara toh kalse bilkul ulta hain…kal ka najara toh kuch aur hii tha…

Lisa: Specky sahi bolraha hain….

Aiesha: phir aaj kiya hogaya…

CHotu shockingly Arjun ko dekhte huye : kiya pata….

Rathore: Baas Rawte bohot huya..Shree call karo use aur bolo sidha commissioner sir ki office pouche..kyun ki hum eha hum aur wait nehi karsakte uski….

Rawte: nehi thori der aur wait karlete hain na kaab madam ayenge aur hum meeting ke liye challenge!!!Disgusting….

Shree: main abhi call karta hoo sir..

Eye kehke Shree apna phone bahar hii karte hain tabhi wo Riya ko Conference room ki darwaja ke paas dekhte hain...aur use dekhte hii Riya tum uha kyun khari hoo…sir Riya toh aa bhi gayiii….

Saab ghumke Riya ko dekhti hain…aur use dekhte hii saab shocked ho jate hain wo formal official dress code main nehi hain..salwar suit pehne huye hain…

Aur use dekhte hii Rathore: Itni der kyun huyii Riya…Aur eye kiya hain…

Riya: wo sir…

Phir wo saabko dekhte hain aur Arjun ko bhi..arjun ke akhon main akhe parte hii arjun uske akhe dusre taraf karlete hain….

Rathore: haan bolo Riya kiya bolna chahti hoo!!!

Riya: wo mujhey apse kuch kehna tha…

Rathore: late kyun huyi wo na..baad main kehdena…abhi commissioner sir ki office chalna hain humain meeting ke liye..

Riya: paara sir It's important…wo….

Abb Arjun chup nehi rehpate aur uski akhon main dekhte huye bolparta hain: we are already late Miss Riya…baad main keh dena jo bhi kehna hain…Samjhi ya Samjhayun…lets goo rathore….

Eye kehke Arjun conference room se nikal jata hain…

Rathore: Riya baad main baat karte hain iss bare main..team lets go….

Riya: okay sir…


Undono ki bahar chalet hii: Shree kiya yrr..late kyun kiya???

Riya: wo…

Lisa: wo choro..meet our one more team member Aiesha,rathore sir ki hoone wali….

Aiesha: lisa..shut your mouth…hey Riya…This is Aiesha..Aiesha kapoor…

Riya: hey hello..Aiesha…Riya here..Riya Mukharjee…waise lisa tum kiya keh rahe the rathore sir ki..

Aiesha thora sharmate huye: leave it riya..eye log kuch bhi bolte rehte hain..aisa kuch nehi hain…

Riya smile karte huye: assa..phir itna sarmana kyun….

Chotu: haan haan abb batao…

Aiesha: Guys..chalna nehi kiya..ya noukri gaoyana hain?? Let's go…

Shree: haan let's go…warna kayamat aa jayegiii….

Lisa: Riya tumeh baatmain saab bolte hain..pehle meeting ke liye chalet hain okay…

Riya smile karte huye: okay…

TO BE CONTINUED…………


Here is 2nd chapter one Souls separation hope you all liked it..I know am too late guys...and really sorry for that...give your feedback please..waiting for your most precious comments...😳😳😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: devildiva21

haila tarpa ke😲 apne bday ka badla legi kya🤣
chal jaldi jaldi update kar😛😉

Abb mujhey itna sataya uskai badla toh banti hain madam 😉😆😆
lo kardiya update😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: devildiva21

sorry mai bech mai to ni aayi na😲

aur agar aagyi to ab kuch ni ho skta😃😳

Tu toh hamesha bich main hii atii hain yrrr😆😆

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