$$@@BHAI KA DIL HAIN NA!!!@@$$ 28/5 CH-4 PG-14

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Prerna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

awesome update...loved the way zebbie teased sasha...

why don't the want to disclose about zebbie and sam's relation??????

can't wait to know...

waiting for arjun and zebbie's pehli mulakat...

continue soon...😊

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unisha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

nice yar thnks for pms..continue..

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Anika_VR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Amu...
It was a very super duper update...
Emotional bohut thha...
Really loved the bonding between Ayesha,Sameer and Zebbie...
Aww...
Sameer bhai really cares for me...
Mujhe huya kya hai yahaan pe?????
Cant really see tears in Bhai's eyes'.
Haww...
Bhai...
This is not good...
Choti behen ke samne hi romance...
Bad Manners,Bhai...
Bacche ke upar bura asar parega.
Lol.. :P
hehe...
I was teasing both of them...
Waiting for the precap.
It looks interesting.
Please,jaldi jaldi update karna...
Thanks for the pm.

Edited by zebbie0504 - 12 years ago

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NSohi13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Res...will read on Friday coz I have my exam tomorrow so sorry sweety ... :)

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priya

@priyaiam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

awesome update…
loved the convo btw rathore n zebbie
n loved the trio hug
waiting for the 1st meeting of arjun and zebbie
cont soon…
n thanks for the pm

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bebovirdi

@bebovirdi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Hello Dearers n Farers,,,😆😆😆😆

Me back for another chapter...

THIS IS FOR BRO-SIS RELATIONSHIP

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Trio comeout of their thoughts with a knock on the door...

UNKNOWN TO THEM THIS IS THE SIGNAL OF THEIR FUTURE... THAT WHAT WOULD BE THEIR FUTURE...

Trio exchanged worried looks that what is gonna happen now...

Because in actual they don't want to disclose the fact of zebbie n sameer's relation to anyone in this world...

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Chapter 3

Trio were confused what to do next...

Sa- ayesh!! aab kya kare??😕

Ze- (hitting his arm by his hand and acting in anger) bhai,, mein bhi yehi hoon,, mein apko dekhayi nhi detti jo aysh ayesh kar rehe ho...😡

Again Sasha start smiling seeing her antics..😊

There zebbie is somewhat back...

Ay- sam,, abb kya kare?? i think vo ageya hain..

Sam understood her meaning but zebbie doesn't...

Ze- kyun??😕

Sa- vo mera friend hai mere sath rehta hain,, abb jaldi kar vo knock kiye bina hi andar a jaata hai..

Ze- mein kya jaldi karo??😕

Sa- tum uske samne jaogi??? (irritated)

Zebbie got her meaning so now she turn to ayesha...

Ze- aab kya?? mein kaha jao?? apne ghar mein hi chor ban geyi?? kessa dost hain apka thori der ruk nhi sakta bhi toh meine apse ache se baat bhi nhi ki...🤢

Sam knows that she doesn't want to leave alone so he signal ayesha to do something soon before arjun can enter...

Ay- ze,, tu mere sath chal...

Ze- lekin kaha??😕

Ay- (irritated) mental hospital !!!!

Ze- (confused) waha kyun??😕

Ayesha hit her hand with the wall ...

Ay- hey bhagwan!!! kaha faas geyi??

Zebbie still looking towards her with lots of questions in her mind...why is she hitting her head?? why she is reacting like this??

Ze- baat kya hain?? tu apna sir vo tor for rehi hain??😕

Ayesha become more angry at her...😡

Sameer atlast unable to control his laugh so he bburst out in laugh...🤣🤣

But before anyone could say anything they heard a knock at the door...

Sa- (slowly n calmly) bache,, tu jaldi se ayesh ke sath ja...

Ze- lekin kaha?? mujhe mental hospital mein nhi janna...

Sasha rolled their eyes at her reply...

Ayesha pulled her aloongwith her to window n both jumped down...

Both vanishes in the dark...

Here sameer again heard a knock on door...

Sameer runs to open the door n open it n there he saw him standing his arms crossed against his chest...

Arjun raise his eyebrow to enquire what is he upto??

Sa- kya hain?? bhagwan ne muh diya hain bol sakta hain tu...😡

Arjun push him aside n enters the room n start invstigating the room's condition...

(Thnx to god k room ki condition achi thi nhi toh kamine dost ka dammag bhi kamina hi sochta hain but what caught his sight is amazing...)

Ar- ayesha kab geyi??😉

Sa- vo...vo..vo..

Ar- vo vo kya kar raha hain?? abb tujhe bhagwan ne muh nhi diya kya??😆😆

Sameer was not in a mood to talk to him...

Sa- arjun mera maan nhi hain baat karne ka tu bahar ja...

Arjun can notice his weired behaviour but before he can come out of the room he atleast question him...

Ar- yeh kiska hain?? ayesha ka toh nhi hain???

Smeer turn his confuse gaze to the thing in his hand...

Sameer as got confused what to say to him..

Sa- vo..vo ayesha ka hi hain..😕

Ar- (in his stern voice) nhi.. abb tu sach sach bta..

Sameer in his mind kehi isne zebbie ko toh dekh nhi lia,, nhi agar aisa hota toh.. no.😕

Ar- abb bolega??

Sa- (snatching it from his hand) yeh ayesha ka hi hain😡

Ar- nhi yeh uska nhi hain..

Sa- aur tu yeh kesse janta hain??😡

Ar- (sitting on his bed) kyunki jab tum log vaha us chota dubai ko pakrne geye toh ayesha nhi saari pehni thi aur vo bhi pink color ki; abb samjhe ya samjhaun??😉

Sa- tu ayesha par nazar rakhta hain??😡

Ar- baat ko palat maat tu mujhe jawab de..

Sa- pehle tu bta tune sab kesse kaha..

Ar- kesse kaha ka kya matlad muh se kaha hain,, bhagwan ne muh diya hain bolne ko mein toh ussi se bolta hoon tera pta nhi...🤣🤣

Sammeer glares at him angrly😡😡

Ar- okk okk batata hooon,, meine tab ayesha ko sakshi se kehte hoye sunna tha k usse green colour pasand nhi hain; abb tum..

But before he could again use his dialogue, sam interprets him..

Sa- samaj geya dimaag hain mere pass...abb tu jayega yaha se mujhe plz akela chor de..

Ar- Sam tu ro raha tha na??

Sam knows arjun can easily caught he but he tries his hard to control the situation..

Sa- nh... nhi toh

Ar- jhooth tu ro raha tha!! teri ankhen bhi lal hain,,, baat kya hai??

Sa- sehi waqt anne par bataoga abhi plz jao jaha se...

Arjun knows he needs some time so he also start moving out but sam stops him...

Sa- abb isse kaha lekar ja raha hain??😕

Arjun look at his hand that is holding the thing about which rathore is talking about so he just winked at him..

Ar- teri ayesha ka nhi hain,, fikar maat kar kuch nhi karoga isse (looking at it)jiska hain usse wapis karoga, vaise bhi green mera favourite hain...😉

Sam tries to stop him but before that arjun close his door n disappear into his room...

Sa- abb jab vo uske baareme puchegi toh kya bataoga..

IN AYESHA'S HOME:

Zebbie was searching something here n there...

Ze- ayu vo kehi nhi mil raha?😕 abb kya karo??

Ay- chill babes kuch nhi huya ek dupaata hi toh hain na..

Ze- no vo mera favourite colour tha n favourite duppata😔

Ay- ok stop it soun jao abhi nhi toh na abhi mein sam ko call kardogi..

Ze- okk mein sone challi,, kaha faas geyi tu toh meri bff hi thik hain bhabhi kesse sambhalogi,, (looking at her) vaise bhai hain tujhe sambhalne ke liye...

After saying that zebbie run to the bed n hide her duvet...

Here when ayesha understood her meaning she turns crimson red...☺️

SCROOLL DOWN FOR MORE...

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bebovirdi

@bebovirdi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

ARJUN'S ROOM:

Arjun put the duppata not beside him but on himself...

He was smelling it...

Something from it was attracting him towards it...

Arjun drift into the sleep with it covering his face...😛

(zebbie ka jaddo toh abhi se hi arjun par chal geya)

Morning in ayesha's house:

Ayesha n Zebbie were just done with the breakfast...

Ay- ze mein niklti hoon, ok bye..😊

Ze- okk bye😊

After ayesha left zebbie goes to kitchen to wash the dishes ...

After she pick her phone, she make a call to commisner...

Ze- JAI HIND SIR!!! ACP ZEBBIE RATHORE...

Co- JAI HIND!! Kaho kaha ho?? mil rehi hoon na aaj...

Ze- ji sir mein 1/2 ghante mein vaha pahuncti hoon..

Co- okkk, I'm waiting for u..

Zebbie quickly get ready n heads towards commisner office...

IN COMMISNER OFFICE:

Zebbie was sitting n waiting for him as he was bzee in meeting ,...

Commisner comes n she salute him n then he hug her tightly...

Co- how's u??

Ze- I'm good sir!!

Co- okk bahut acha laga k tumhara yeh mission bhi successful raha...

Zebbie flash her smile to him... (commisner n zebbie were so close to each other; in actual commisner was incharge of the acadmey from where she got her training)

Co- zebbie,,, I know rathore ne mujhe bataya tha k tum kya chahti hoon vaisa hi hoga,, tum dono ke bare mein, inactual yeh kaho k tumhare bare mein kissi ko kuch pta nhi chalega...

Ze- thnx sir,,,,but sir...

Co- mein tumshe iski wajah nhi puchoga... believe me.

Zebbbie just nod in yes..

Co- OK come to point we have selected u as a SEC-IN-COMM along with one person of ETF.

Ze- okk sir..

(zebbie doesn't know her bhai is chief of ETF,, she doesn't know anything about ETF, she was not in a connect with world from last 3 years...,, she was at an undercovr mission)

Both heads towards the ETF office but before reach there zebbie receive a call n she has to left so only commisner heads to ETF...

Zebbie reach at high mountain peak it was surrounded by water from sides...

One person was waiting for her , his name was vikas...

Ze- bolo kya baat hain??

Vi- mam, meine pta kiya hain app sehi thi aur uske piche puri ETF ki team bhi hain...

After listening ETF she understand why commisner want her to be there...

Ze- okk thnx

Vikas left her alone there...

Zebbie was looking at the water waves which are trying to touch to clouds...

Zebbie thought of her own life which is also like this...

Soon she comes out of her thoughts when...

Someone pull her b grabbing her hand...

She lost her balance n her chest hit his chest...

Both shared a cute eyelock...

Both were getting attracted to each other...

She came to her sences soon n then she twist his arm n in this way he spuns around n meanwhile she was able to get his gun from his back...

The guy realize that his gun is being pulled from his back...

Both thought of each other as criminals,,,... (so koi bhi apni jaan nhi khonna chahta tha)

He suddenly saw someone pointing the gun at them...

Before she could shoot him he grab her wrist n both jump into the water...

(arre gabrao maat dono ko swimming aati hain)

Meanwhile whole ETF team was there with Commisner...

Rathore saw them jumping into the water but before he could do anything the guy had already did his work...

Now the team was bzee in chasing with the shooter...

While in the water the guy was having his arm around her waist...

Both get out to the shore n team drives down to beach ...

As rathore saw them his anger knows no limit...😡 as he was worried for both of them...

But again before rathore can say anything all heard a sound of tight slap...(ouuch)

The guy was having his hand at his left cheek which is now burning...

The team alongwith the comm. was shocked...😲

Comm- oh...😲

Choree- uddi baba😲...(having their hands on their mouths)

Saia- omg...😲(having their hands on their mouths)

Ayesha- essi ki kammi thi😲...(hitting her head with her hand)

Rathore- DAMMIT!!!!😲

Zebbie's face was red as fire...😡

Ze- (grbbing his collar) how dare u toch me???😡

The guy knows no answer for her question his hand was still on his cheek...

Rathore can sense his anger getting rise,, he move close to them n pull zebbie away n he offered her his jacket...as her clothes were wet her body curves were vissible to all... he signal ayesha n ayesha ran to grab a jacket for her...ayesha hand over her jacket but her eye's were still stuck on him... she was fuming in anger...😡 she wears the jacket but doesn't turn her gaze from him...

(she was wearing this that sticks tight to her body

Sa- u ok raute??

(YES,, the guy was none other than ACP ARJUN SURYAKANT RAUTE😆😆😆)

Arjun came out of his shock when sam place his hand on his shoulder...

Zebbie was wondering why her bro was behaving like this...

Both's eyes were fixed on each other,...

Commisner came forward n introduce them...

Co- (to zebbie) he is ETF sec-in-comm ACP ARJUN RAUTE...

By listening ETF n SEC-IN- COMM, she got shock,...😲

(but abhi toh team ko bhi shock milna hain)

Commisner tries to continue his sentence but arjun interfere...

Ar- Sir,, yeh larki...😡

Commisner can understand his condition k aaj tak kissi ne bhi ACP ARJUN RAUTE se uchi awaaz mein baat nhi ki aur is larki ne aate hi usse thappar maar diya (ouuch)

Co- (continues) ik min raute, pehle uski intro toh sunlo...

Everyone look at him puzzeled including sasha that what he gonna say..

Co- (looking at whole team) She is Undercover agent ACP ZEBBIE (he stops himself ) now ETF SEC-IN-COMM ACP ZEBBIE along with ACP ARJUN RAUTE.

ZEBUN- (union) No way...😲😡

Comm- (Looking at both of them) Yes way...😛

Whole team in shock with their mouth open,...😲

Co- (turns to ze) tum yaha kya kar rehi ho??

Ze- (coming out of her shock mode) sir mein kisise milne aayi thi...

Co-(turns to arjun) aur tum ??

Ar- mein bhi kissi se milne aya tha...

Co- "vo kissi" ka koi naam toh hoga na??😡

ZEBUN - (union) VIKAS...

Shree- (to chotu) kya tunning hain dono ki jo bolte hain ekatha hi bolte hain aur vo bhi same; in dono ki khoob jamegi.,,,😆😆😆; kyu kya kehta hai chotu??

Chotu- (to shree) haan mujhe bhi aisa hi lagta hain, lekin tujhe kya lagta hain in dono ki banegi abhi abhi toh mam ne sir ke ouuch🤢 (placing his hand at his cheek) thappar mara; yr mujhe lagta hain aab hame bhi sambal kar rehna parega jo larki arjun sir ko maar sakti hain vo hamra bhi kuch kar sakti hain...🤢🤢..

Sakshi was listening to them n feeling jealous...n fuming in anger😡

Sh- yr pehle toh arjun sir aur rathore sir the aur abb yeh bhi...; hamara chote chote bacho ka kya hoga??

Before arjun can answer him rathore calls both of them...

Ra- chotu, shree tum arjun aur baaki sab ko lekar office jao, mujhe zebbie aur ayesha ke sath kehin janna hain...

Arjun tries to interfere but stop after notiicing rathore's angry red face..

PRECAP:
SASHA FIGHT;😭
RATHORE YELLS AT ZEBBIE😡
ZEBUN FIGHT;😆😆
ZEBBIE'S WORST CONDITION;😲🤢
WHAT HAPPEN TO RATHORE??😲

I know i missed chia romance but i'm gonna write different os on them because mera plot set nhi ho raha... SO SORRY

HOPE APP SABHI KO ZEBUN KI PEHLI MULAKAT PASAND AAYI HO

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Edited by ...amanvirdi... - 12 years ago

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unisha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

awesome.. loved it.. thanks for pms.. ye blank isliye tha kyunki mobile se aajkal comment karna muskil ho gaya hai.. comment box itna chota tha ki likh nahi pai is liye aise hi post kar diya baad mein edit karne k liye.. continue soon..

Edited by unishaz - 12 years ago