Jun-Sumu SS: AIHWJTL - COMPLETED on 11/12/13 till pg 5 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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waiting for the next update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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He laughed & sheided himself with both hands.

"Oww!!" he yelled, her hand had hurt his wound.
She imediatly stopd n blew over the bandages.
"Sory! Sory! Bohot dukhraha hai kya?"
he sobered up
"I missed U" was the reply.

Silence befell,
By the dim moonlight he saw it was around 2AM at his watch.
not much tym had passd since they arrived, but it felt lyk ages.

Suddnly he asked
"Sumaya, kya tum Shadi ni karogi?"
"Nahi! Jaha dil na ho, waha Rishta kya jorna! Tumse hi to seekha hai Jun!!"

"But lyk every teenager does, kya tum ni chahti koi romantic sa prince white ghore pe aye, aur Tumhe apne sath lejaye? "
she rolled her eyes
"Ye tum puchrahe ho Jun?? Pehli baat! Ye prince charming n Safed ghora dont exist, dusri baat, mai aise fattu sapne ni dekhti aur na hi kabhi dekhe hai. Waise bhi mera Prince to mere samne hai... I dont need a whyt horse!! Bytheway Jun!! Mai ab teenager ni rahi"

"Yeah! Now u're a young n beautiful lady, mai thehra boring sa budha, Tum to ab sharmaogi as a husband introduce karne se."
Edited by Sumu4JayD - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It took her a full minute to register what he said and when she did, her hand flew to her mouth!
"What!" She shrieked
Her antics amused him but he replied in calm manner...
He took both her hands in his and kissed them,
though it he pitch dark, he felt her blushing.

"Haa, So ms. Sumaya will you be kind enough to spend the rest of your youth with this broken old man?
Will u give him ur love as alms?
will u?"

Her eyes welled up and she sobbed, her heart ached with happiness... After such a long wait he was finally gonna be hers, this moment was magical...
she sprang on him and captured his hard lips in hers and knotted her fingers into her hair and kissed him deeply.
After the initial surprise he too responded and kneaded one hand on he waist while the other cupped her chin for better access.

from tender tuggings it became an urgent pulling.

After a while when both ran out of breath the slowly drew apart yet their bodies touching as they hugged tight...

Their raspy breaths mingled causing a sensation.

PTO
Edited by Sumu4JayD - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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"I Love U Sumu!" he whispered into her hair.
she slowly pulled back & cupped his face.
"like I do! Aur haa plz ye mere Arjun ko budha bolna chor do! Uski hone wali Biwi ko bura lagta hai."

He laughed at that & said "Biwi, huh? Itna pyaar karti ho?"

"Haa Jun! Bohot, par exact mesurement batana mushqil hai. Jun will u mine?"
"I'm already urs" he replied.
"Then be mine, I want u to make love to me jun!"
she whispered
"Are you sure?" he asked.
"100% and I wont ever regret this, phir agar maut bhi aajaye koi fikr nahi." she replied.
"Ssh!!" he quietened her & slowly replaced her lips on hers & engulfed her in his arms & what proceeded next was a night full of love & passion...

when she woke up next morning in his arms.
she found him still asleep.
She pecked his cheek.
"Thanx so much Jun! And I had waited just too long for this night. I love u."

"Love U too" he replied sleepily...


That day they returned to city, After a few weeks they married & lived a blessed life hence after.


❤️THE END❤️
Edited by Sumu4JayD - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awsuuummm Summuuu!!! Lovinggg d concept!! Listen now u gurl...Ur Shanaya Di wants a pm fr a next part!!! U will pm ur di na??? Plzzz Sumu!! I dun wanna miss dis story!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh Wow!!
Its done Finally!!
Was a very difficult one to pen down...
samajhte hi honge... Its not easy writing about this!
OMG! agar koi aur character hota toh it was nthing...
But Sumaya is someone else right?😉
Arre! Its me!

well coments tohbanta hai plz!
Itni mehnat se likha hai yaar!
Mai sharm se pani pani ho rahi hu ise to considr karo!
pleej!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aakhir kar Sumaya ko uski Jun milgayi.
It was truly a very lovely and romantic update.
Loved their romance.
Me blushing a lot.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i wish mai lappy se on9 hoti..
tb kisses ki barsat karti tumpe...
such a swwweeettt os!!!
really very cute...
ps keep writin more n more..
n reminder-pls raesha wala v update ..plz..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Waah re Sumu.. mast os tha !!!!! It ws sooo romantic and cute 😳 😳 beautifully written !!!!! Lovely.. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely start..awesome finish...
Beautifully penned...
Thanks for the pm..

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