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Posted: 12 years ago
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Haaayeee!!!! *blushin blushin wid cheeks full red!* piya tum likhte wakt blush kr rhi thi main toh padhte padhte hi blush kr gyi!! Suprb! Lovd it! Continue soon! :) ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Haaayeee!!!! *blushin blushin wid cheeks full red!* piya tum likhte wakt blush kr rhi thi main toh padhte padhte hi blush kr gyi!! Suprb! Lovd it! Continue soon! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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HOP U LIKE:-N thanks for the likes n lvly comments--


*Dil Se Duaa*
EPILOGUE


Scence-
Arjun shut up ..what r u doing..??
arjun giv evil smiles n says..
Are feel ker raha hoon hamare baby ko..
.
Shut up arjun,aap bhi na,
Now leav me..
Nooo abhi nahi he reply naughtly,
abhi to god morning kiss deni hai,
Arjun aap bhi na,she hits his shoulder playfuly n rest her head on his broad chest..
.
Baba what r u doing,
mujhe bhi god mor kiss deni hai,
A soft voice interept their conversation,she runs inside arJun n riya's bedroom,

.
It was ariya.. their small litle princess..
(she was three years old, trying to climbed Up the bed but not succed)
(Arjun n riya smiled
together,unki litle princess bed per chadne ke koshish ker rahi hai per chad nahi paa rahi ..)

arjun wanna to lift her but she stoped..
noo baba..
i m not a small kid..i can help my self,
or ab mujhe mama ka or chote baby ka bhi khayal rakhana hai,
samjhe ya samjhayon..
arjun n riya couldnt hold their smile any more..
both loughed to see her princess antics..
.
Bilkul aap per gaye hai,baba ke carbon copy..Riya said,
(stil resting her head on arjun chest)
.
Akhir bait kiske hai,Arjun reply proudly..
(Ariya in mind-baba or mama phir se shuro ho gaye,
finaly she succed her attemt)
she goes near to riya..
touched her belly with her small hand..
N leaned closer n kissed there..god mor baby..
H r u today..?
Ariya waiting for u long time..
how much time u will take to come out..
.
Ar-ariya aaj baby ne kuch nahi kaha..arjun asked her doughter..
.
Ari-vo bhi god mor bol raha hai,or usne kaha hai vo jaldy he aane vala hai,
.
A big smiled crept both arjun n riya,
Riya comes near




Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64

N kissed ariya forhead..
humm , baby aap se bahoot baat kerta hai..
.
Ariya smiled proudly..
n reply yess..
she goes near to her baba..
n also rest her head on arjun chest like her mother n closed her eyes..
.
arjun hold both tightly near to him n hide both ups not both three.. yes his unborn child to..which growing n living inside riya's body,
.
A long tears comes out his eyes..which fall down on riya cheeks..
Riya opened her eyes n looked up to face him..
.
Yes the strong acp is crying..(but those tears is the simble of happiness..)
Arjun kissed her forhead n say thanks to riya..
.
thanks riya meri life main aane ke liye or mujhe etani sari khushiya dene ke liye..
.
(She kissed arjun on his lips n reply)
U to arjun..Thank u to
for giving me so much happiness ...
for making me complete in all ways,
n again rest her head on his chest..
---
fb-doc comes out oT n informed -
Congratulation mr rawte..
App papa ban gaye..
apki wife ko ladki huye hai,
.
Sam u heared that..sam tune suna mai baba ban gaya..
.
Doc per riya..meri riya thik to hain naa..kya main usase mil sakta hoon,
.
Doc-aap thodi der baad unse mill sakte hain,
arjun hug sam tightly..
Sam aaj main bahoot khush hoon bahoot..
Arjun parted that hug n looked sam with teary eyes..
.
Sam say congratulation to arjun..
.
Arjun moved inside the room-
He noticed riya's eyes r still closed,
he steped inside n sit near to riya..hold her hand tightly n kissed her forhead,
.
N wishper thanks riya mujhe etani badi khushi dene ke liye,
tum nahi janti aaj main kitana khush hoon,
i know maine tumhen bahoot dard diye hain,
tumse promised kiya tha main vapis aaonga ,per nahi aya..
Tears com out on arjun eyes n fell down on riya' s cheeks..
she opened her eyes n looked up n saw arjun ro rahen hain..
.
Arjunnn she wishper-
Riyaaa..






Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65

Plz forgive me riya..
i know maine jo kiya vo mujhe nahi kerna chahiye tha,
Plz forgive me one time..
He hug riya tightly started crying..
.
She didnt say anythink..
its not eassy to forgive him so easly..
kitani aasani se aap mujh se maafi maang rahe hain,
per aap ko koe andaja bhi hai,
ye last months maine aapke bina kaise gujare hai,
mujhe or hamare bachhe ko aapki kitane jarorat the,
.
Aapne sonch bhi kaise liya main aap ke alava kisi or..
.
Befor she completed nurse enters with baby..
.
n give baby to arjun..
.
Are app nurse spook,
H r u feeling now mr arjun..
riya was surprised why nurse asked about arjun's health,
.
I m fine sister..arjun reply..
can i take my baby..
.
Nu(She is old age woman 45)-ohh my god ness this is ur baby..
I m so happy for u my child..
.
God is realy a nice heart..
he giv litle prinsess to arjun,
tears comes out arjun's eyes..
she is tooo small ,her eyes ups its showing me enger..
.
Apne baba se naraj ho princess he wishper..
Plz forgive ur baba..
baba pakka vala promised never left u n ur mom alone..
.
he kissed her forhead..
n lightly hug near to his heart,
.
nurse turned toward riya..
How u felling now ..?
.
She just nodded her head in positive, her face stil showing confusing expression..
.
Nu-jaror tumhari duaa ka hi asaer hoga,jo aaj tumjhara pati tumhare samne sahi salamat khada hai,
.
hamen to laga tha ke hum esi bachha he nahi payenge..
Us operation ke baad hamen laga ya to unki body hamesha ke liye parelized ho jayegi or..
dhere dhere kerke apni yaaddhash kho dengen..
per lagta hai now he is completely fine..

.After saying this she left..
.

riya looking him with teary n angery eyes ,
Why u dont tel me before she yelled..
Sameer also listning all this(he stood outside the door)
.
How could he juge his frs wrong..
he wiped his tears



Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66

Sam steped inside n took baby in his arms..
Ab baby apni mama ke sath khelegi..
es bich papa ko mama se jarori baat kerni hai,
.
Sam comes out the room left ariya alone..
.
Arjunn why dont u told me before..
Maine aapko kya kuch nahi kaha or aap..
Heyy riya shhh..arjun come near to her n give her warmth hug..
.
Riya mujhe khud nahi pata tha,
ager main apni yaddash kho deta or tumhen pehchan nahi pata to..
main tumhen or takleef nahi dena cyahta tha bus..
Arjunnn..!!!!
Tears comes out her eyes..she tightly hug him back..
As never wanna to let her go any where..
.
After some time arjun wanna to brock that hug but..she hug him more tightly..
arjun leaned near to her ears n whishper..
riya kya second honeymoon yahin manane ka eraada hai,
.
She smiled n hit his chest playfully..
Second nahi first..
abhi hamne first honeymoon bhi nahi manaya na..
arjun parted that hug n kissed her lips..
she also respond back his kiss..
They missed each other madly,n both realy made for each other..
.
--
Pre-
arjun parted that hug n wishper..riya second honeymoon ke baare main kya khayal hai,
.
arjun aap din ba din bade naughty hote jaa raho ho,
essy halat main vo bhi honeymoon..
.
Ar-kyun essy halat main kya problem hai,
Ab to tum or bhi khubshurat lag rahi hoon..
.
Matlab main pehale khubsurat nahi lagti aap ko..
she again hits his chest..
Kuch to sharam kigiye ..ariya or put her hand on her belly sun lenge to kya sonchenge..
.
Are yahi sonchenge ke papa mamy se kitana pyaar kerte hain..
He leaned his face near to her n wishper..
Ager main aaj hoon ,to sirf tumhare duaa ke vajaha se..
.
Tumhare dill se di duaa ne god ko bhi majboor ker diya..
before he complete she sealed his lips by her..
***THE END***
hop u like---
the whole story..
piya--






Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
that was such an amazing ending :) loved it
awww arjun and riya are parents of a cute baby daughter :)
and riya is pregnant again :)
awwwie ariya is super cute :)
and just like her dad even she say samjhe ya samjhaun :)
love the way ariya was talking to baby <3
flashback was lovely :)
arjun was so happy hearing that he became father :)
hospital scenes between ariya were really nice :)
love arjun and riya's conversation
arjun's comment about honeymoon was funny 😆😉
last part was super cute ❤️

Edited by fatima15 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
Superb de ur last line touch my hrt
It is awesome
Hatts off to u👏
Ariya rock
Keep writing on Ariya
Love u de
Mishti
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
wow nice ending.. N story was awesome..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
Awesome...very nice ending😊

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