SS Arakshi: You belong with me..Part 5. 13/6 Pg.26 - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
*Edited*
🥳 Bring it on baby I am ready...😆


Well my lady, take bow and here is another jadu ki jhappi from me behna.🤗

So our lady has become lady Devdaas has she, well not for long, and I for am going to grab a big popcorn bucket and large Pepsi and sit back and enjoy the show. (Advanced warnings needed please.😃)

You my friend have outdone yourself this time. I loved Arjun's POV, wow what a fantastic take on his character and give it a nice twist that will rival the changes in Arjun in the show later on.

This has not been an easy journey for him, what you described about how she initially made him feel is perfectly in sync with Arjun it the show.

And the slow change in him makes perfect sense, it will take a lot for him to break those barriers and hard to but after reading your version of it I think its doable.

I always wondered how Arjun can fall in love after being so much in love with his wife and grieving for her still but I think I am realizing is yes there is grief there but there is so much guilt also.

And you showed exactly this and his finally moving forward after avenging her death also makes sense, glad you showed how he could be after he takes his revenge and moves forward with life.

Now coming to Ayesha and Rathore, oh yeah this is also easy to picture with the way things are going. I loved their relationship and the friendship they share with Arjun, that was perfectly portrayed.


So he only held back because he didn't think he was right for her and still had apprehension about it but I loved how Ayesha showed him the other side of it making him realize that he is over thinking it and he needs to follow his heart.

Really love Ayesha's explanation of love and relationship, and also what Rathore added to that.

Now that he is ready grab this second chance I can't wait to see what he does.😃

My request or demand is way out there but can I ask anyway?

Make him carry her off to a quiet, secluded, and romantic place to Samjhaufy, or manofy her in his own way.😉😳


May be bit over the top, but blame it on this song that I have been listening to lately.😛


Badtameez dil, batameez dil, batamiz dil
Maane na, maane na
Badtameez dil, batameez dil, batamiz dil
Maane na, maane na

Yeh jo haal hai, sawaal hai, kamaal hai
Jaane na jaane na
Badtameez dil, battameez dil badtameez dil
Maane naa..


Ayaashi ke one way se khudko
Modna jaane naa
Kambal bewajah sharam ka
Odhna jaane naa
Zidd pakad ke khadha hai kambakht
Chodhna jaane na... Haha..

Badtameez dil, batameez dil, batamiz dil
Maane na, maane na
Badtameez dil, batameez dil, batamiz dil
Maane na, maane na


😛



So there you go behna...BTW I loved the update.❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Edited by ll-Shilpa-ll - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
Super duper dhaasu update tha
loved it

I loved that trio conversation
Arjun's hesitation to spill it all and then telling them the conversation with the reporter's best friend
and then Aisha's excitement

Aisha and Rathod are a couple...wow...loved them

and that office romance waala part was awesome

excited to read further about the breaking news

cont soon
Edited by vidya.anand - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83

Edited !!!

Awesome job behena ...our lady devdas should be in for shockers ..when she comes back plzzz...😉😆
I loved the trio conversation and of course Arjun ji reason to let her go ...completey in sync with his character ...😃
Ayesha- Rathore - the charm they have ..love them together more😳😃
noe coming to requests...Sakshi should be surprised to see Arjun in ETF when she comes back ...like him teasing her etc ..and proably making her jealous ...😉😉
Edited by sips_crazy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
yeah..that was a good one dear...
so Arjun is having Sam and Aisha as his backup support...
good
waiting for the entry
now its Arjun's turn to turn Sakshi's around to him...
Edited by kunchu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
arey!!!!!!!!!!!!! ye kya hogaya!😲 ye tho mere SS Hearts Reconnected se bohut miltha hain!🤣 m not saying u copied or i copied🤣! but i was about to introduce the same track🤣!!! this is sooo funnnyyy🤣


btw! SUPERB UPDATE! I hope i live upto ur work! amazing😛😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86

Awesome update... Sakshi hv decided to move on in her life nd Arjun decided to moveon with her...hmmm intresting... Loved Arjun-Sasha relation... they r his support system!!!!! continue soon

Edited by Leki - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: likithakmh

arey!!!!!!!!!!!!! ye kya hogaya!😲 ye tho mere SS Hearts Reconnected se bohut miltha hain!🤣 m not saying u copied or i copied🤣! but i was about to introduce the same track🤣!!! this is sooo funnnyyy🤣



btw! SUPERB UPDATE! I hope i live upto ur work! amazing😛😛



Oh! I hope it's only a mere coincidence then.. 😃

Aah.. It's not funny but scary! 😉😛

Well, chalta hai.. Arjun and his lady is the common inspiration for both, I guess.. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
aww ending was so cute:):)
update was very nice..
waiting for arjuns plan
cont soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
Dear Avantika,

For once, I will make it brief, and by any standards.

I am not a Mills and Boon addict, but I am sure this is what their top of the line products must be like. Very nice going, with everything working out so pat, as it is not (yet) an FF,but none of it seems forced or artificial, which is all to your credit.

Shyamala Aunty


Part 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
Aww...what a lovely update...
Love Arjun-Sam-Ayesha convo...the bond between them is great...
n now waiting for the dhasuu breaking news...
n in next update plzz Arakshi ko mila do...
N plzz update ur Ariya story SYTPH

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