OS:A flower in the desert..... (renamed)

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Beautiful..
Very well written...
Liked the way Arjun interacted with Aadya...
Loved the OS..:)

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Jannat.Khadija

@Jannat.Khadija

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

The os is really very nice...!
It has given me a refreshing feeling...

Hmmm... This os is not named yet...right?

Mere dimag me ek name hai,
'A flower in the desert'.

Desert is Arjun's life...and flower is Aadya...

Sorry, if u don't like it! That's only my suggestion...

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foraml

@foraml

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Hey nice one. Aww arjun loves children.

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846182

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Beautiful OS!!!

Very nice... Loved it...

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Shreya

@shreya09

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

lovely os
very sweet 👍🏼

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856040

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Awww it was so sweet

you showed us a new side of arjun

amazing

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

superb os...
very sweet and cute...
loved adya's bonding with arjun and sam...
awww arjun even made sandwhich for her... how sweet...
adya arjun scenes were a treat to read...
and the line betiyan anmol hoti hai... superb ... hope everyone realizes it...to jo ajkal ho rha h wo na hota...
loved it...

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DesiiiDivaaa

@DesiiiDivaaa

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

So cute and beautifully written...loved it😊

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BitterBerry

@BitterBerry

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Sorry sorry fr late comment.

This just sooo much cute..
For this only girl i can imagine the face of arjun in this os.
He even made food fr her... N everyone were shocked..
He really caring fr her..
Ya kids hav really a strong effect on every person ..
Loved it a lottt..
Its just simply best..

The line ladkiyan bahaut keemti hoti hai..
Was the best line ever..
Lov u angle..

Thanks fr pm