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Sanjana malhotra

@MissRight

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

aww... beautiful!! If ONLY this was the case with the real society with people helping each other...!!

Society would b heaven!!

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

superb os👏⭐️ its really awsum...!!!

that sik arghhh😡🤬...

very beautiful description of zainab's feelings...!!!!

loved it...!!!!

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ehmmbh_luvr

@ehmmbh_luvr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

superb tahi👏...it was just great😊

It was a very very different concept...absolutely one of its kind!

The way u explained zainab's emotions was beautiful😊

U truly can write different genres with the same ease😃

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neeraja

@life93

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

hi dhriti di🤗... awesome idea...very different n too awesome os... zainab shekhawat...hatts off to her...sikkki 😡 ruined her life in worst possible manner...but instead of all that she choosed her child...👏👏👏...sikki bloody hell...he kicked her🤢...he deserves the worst death...

in etf y zainab called sikki her husband??...hafsa...destiny always play cruel game with innocent...just love the way the cute girl playing with arjun...😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃...

he made the family reunion possible😃😃😃😃...just loved the scene...arjun the massiha...👏👏👏👏...

brilliant os di...😃😃😃😃😃😃

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kunchu

@kunchu

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

you left me tongue tied again...till now we have a faceless name in front of us and you have made a character who would have been with him too..

Zainab and Hafsa... 2 wonderful characters... the way you portrayed the pain and the happily ever after life,though how much ever pain they had gone through... in a simple OS...hats off you dear...

great job..

and honestly one among the best OS I have gone through the forum... even though we have Arjun in the story line...it was Zainab who captured me...

thanks a lot for sharing this wonderful piece...👏👏👏