Two Shot - Love in first rain

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Posted: 12 years ago
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she was walking alone in the street...only her foot steps are making the sound ... She cursed to her land lady..

'' ghar koi aur jagah nahi bana sakte , yaha hi jaruri tha... Ab bhugto.. Raat ko 1.30 baze miss. Liza D'cruz here to check ki kahi yaha body hai bhi ya nahi..''

n tht specky, rathod sir ko kya zarurat thi usse yaha bhejne ki,

par wo hai kaha?

Accha hi hai nhi hai,

then she reached the spot...
There was the body lying.. No injury, no wound marks on tht body..

She told herself..
I need to check this in lab..
Ab bas ambulance k aane ki hi deri hai..

Bt her curious mind , n the great forensic scientist attitute never left her ..

She bent down..
Collts some sample...

In the mean time she felt some water drops on her hands n her face too..

She cursed for the weather...
Ab isiki hi kami thi..
Huh..

The water drops now hitting her bare hands harshly...

She looked for any place atleast to hide her head.. Bt no ..
There was only white walls on the street...


She felt someone grabbed her hand , bt she felt it was reliefing..the water droplets now nt hitting her...



She opened her eyes.. N she was under a blue umbrella...along with her best nightmare... Her specky..

She wanna shout..
Bt shree kept his palm on her mouth...
And holds the umbrella on the other hand...

She wanna shout bt loss of words..
He was there ..and one thing noticable .. Wer is his specks..

It was the first time she was seeing him without his specks..

But to their surprise nothing struck in their mind in tht state...
Only staring at each other...

Well its the first time the tech freak is looking something which his camera cant cover clearly..

Her deep coal black eyes... Don't know why bt he wanna lost in the deepnes of her eyes...

And it is also for the first time she want to look anything without her magnifying glass...

She seemd lost in his eyes..

Shree was amazed by this beauty in the first rain ...
Feeling fresh after a hot summer workful day..
And the most beautiful lady fo him, is standing there ,with him, under an umbrealla and lost in him..

Its like he got the password of rathod's official profile..

The tech wll be tech..


But today he was attracted by this beauty..
Her long wet hairs sticking to her shoulders n her skin..
Water droplets on her face are dazzling like diamonds under the high heavy neon glow street light..

Her nose ring is the most attracted thing n now her silence is surprising him...

He removed his hands from her mouth...

She sighed..

''tum, mujhe laga koi aur''..

Shree- accha kisi aur ko expect kar rahi thi..
Liza- wht?? I mean to say ki ..
Mai tumhe kyun batau..
Aur ye choron ki tarah harkat kyun kar rahe ho...

Shree- what choron ki tarah...
Tum bhig rahi thi, maine chata diya..phir chor ban gaya..
Wah ..wah.. Bhalayi ka toh koi zamana hi nahi hai..


Liza- whatever?
Ambulance kab aayega..
Then she thought , puchu ya na puchu..
Puch hi leti hon..

Shree noticed her changed expression..

Shree- kya hai?? Koi doubt hai..
Liza- nhi.. Matlab haan..
Matlab tumhre specks...



Shree was enjoying her uncomfortness...

Hamesha thodi na sherni ko ghas khate dekhne milta hai...


He smiled..

Shree- badluck miss. Liza D'cruz..
Aaj mai specky nahi hoon..

But he will tell her tht chotu broke his specks just becoz he didn't share the palak paneer which was for chotu...


Liza- oh , tumhe hasi aa rahi hai..
Mai jaa rahi hoon..


She turned n her wet hairs hits his face..

He again lost in the fragrance of her hair..
But without any delay he holds her hand and dragged her onto himself..

Her back hits his chest...

He throws the umbrella..
N she was shocked to see him like this..


Ab kya karega specky..


Hey guys if u liked it them i wll continue...

I just felt the first rain of this summer n i was in C9 ..

So i just want to express my feeling with this fresh pair..
As u guys know i m always trying sth diff...


So tell me if its good or nt..


Thank you..

Express ur feeling imagining the first rain...


I m waiting fr resopnse..






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Posted: 12 years ago
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me first yippie 😆
that was a nice os i liked it !

Edited by saba-ramisa - 12 years ago
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cute, nice one lovely OS
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nyccc stryyy
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lovely OS..👏
cont soon.
and plz PM me😳
Edited by CrAzYaRjUnIaN92 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww...great update👏 please continue😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice os plz continue and pm me thanks

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i think techy sen ab lisa ke sath dance karega...lol
awesome👏
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awww sho cutee os...!!!
shriza are too sweet...!!! dono rain mai akele😉 ab kya hoga...!!
cant wait to see...!!!
continue soon...!!!

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