Arjun FF - Her Only Sin- On hold - Page 17

Originally posted by: ..sweetchilly..

Finally Riya sees Arjun...
Everyone's emotions were well written..
Beautiful update..
Nice one..

Originally posted by: -BlazingWater-

Amazing update!!

Loved the way you portrayed their inner turmoil.

Felling bad for Arjun Riya Sam Ayesha...

chalo atleast Shree and liza are happy <3

great part, contd soon :D

Originally posted by: liquidfantasy

very well written!!

the emotions are expressed very nicely.😊

I loved how arjun kept hugged riya back..all the love n care came bak to him.

Though he realized it too early to forgive..bt eventually he will come arnd 😊

Update soon,

Thanks fr PM.

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

wow re so cute ,,,,,was n a work tour re for 3 weeks back tdy morn...cld nt comment ,,,pls add me na in PM list

Originally posted by: Arieltabi

Great update.
U described everyone's emotions very beautifully.
Ariya still love each other so much. Then why did she left him when he was dying?
Sameer really loves Aisha a lot. Kash Aisha us pyar ko samajh pati.Well can't blame her she was betrayed by her love. Its not going to be easy for her to fall in love again.
Sorry for being late. Thnks for the pm and pls update soon dear.

Originally posted by: rocking_gal

wow!!!!

what an update!!!awesome!!!

separated but still together in all ways!!!:)

why did distrust arjun???whats their past???

awww sam concern for aisha was so sweet...that pair also in pain:(

hmm atleast shree and liza happy but what is that at the end how long will they be happy clause???

awesome update!!👏

Originally posted by: life93

hi sia 🤗... awesome part👏👏👏👏👏... ariya in love❤️...but their are tooo much obstacles in their path...well ariya scene was beautifull...😃😃😃 sam cared for aisha😃😃...shree n liza❤️... waiting for more revelations to come up soon...

Originally posted by: Pisces_Gurl

Hey there...I actually read this whole story now only...M sorry for not reading it earlier..

Itz just great...The emotions u portrayed in them..Their hearts n mind conversations are superb..Everyone wants to hide their real self from everyone they care about...

Loved the story...

Update soon

Originally posted by: _TaNi_

Sia ...one word Wow

i just read d last 2 chapters abhi abhi

n dey r indeed very nicely written

it is actually awesum

specially d arjun n ria part

Arjun is her savior n yes he loved her still

but y ria left him 2 years back

n den we have Sameer n Aisha

Sameer loves her but cant portray his emotions

aisha just 1 motive to get all of them arrested who are responsible for her miseries

Awesum yaar

do continue soon