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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
superb update...
omg the girl hurt... :( glad that she is oky now...
sam arjun friends again yayyy... awww arjun smiling and blushing cutee...
omg whats the relation between aisha and the girl?? the girls is riya right?
continue soon... precap is interesting... eagerly waiting for the next prt...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Read both the parts in one go.
The concept is quite unique...
Loved it.
Please continue.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
awesome post dr.

riya is really brave.

arjun is blushing. amazng.

continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
Nice please cont soon and please add me in your buddy list please 👍🏼 and khanks ariya pe likhne ke liya sorry agar kisiko bura laga ho to kyun ki mein sirf ariya par parthi hun or kisi par nahi and sorry oneagain 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
guys thnx for ur cmmnts ; I can't tell u who's that girl akhir suspence hoga story mein tabhi tu parne mazaa ayega but in next update I will give her a name but that is not her real name that name is just used by her friends. But remain attach to forum definitely I will upload may be by evening or tommorow morning :) 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
nice updates
wow riya is so brave
she is hurt hope she will get well soon
wow arjun is blushing😳
arjun sam became friends again😛 nice
wanna know the relationship between riya & ayesha
riya has a horrible past? is that related to shakshi?
update soon


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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
nice update :) loved it
omg that girl got shot
sam and arjun are friends again
arjun signed those papers as her husband
wow arjun was blushing
can't wait to know what's the realtionship between aisha and that girl
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Chapter-1 (c)


Ayesha just peck her forehead n ask her how she feels she just nodded her head n give her a fake smile.
as they both were just looking at each other suddenly the nurse enters n ask her 😆 how are u doing mrs.RAWTE? ?? the girl was hell shocked that what are they asking her?? 😆 😕 the girl looks towards Ayesha to enquire about this but Ayesha was just smiling remembering arjun blushing n smiling 😆 😳 she calls her name about 3time but after getting no response from her she shout her name Ayesh??? nurse got totally shocked afterwards hearing such kind of daring voice 🥱 😲 Ayesha was just about to say to nurse don't get afraid she is a police officer but riya cuts her b/w n ask nurse to leave nurse just nod her head in positive n leave n then comes dangerous look towards Ayesha n start enquiring from her about whole matter n instructs her not to tell anyone about her .First Ayesha was shocked n wanna to know but she feels that the person sitting in front of her is no longer a same girl; she is acting differently she don't have any dimples on her face after talking to her bff but suddenly she put all thought s aside n enquires from her about her darling sakshi as soon as she utter her name the girl face get totally pale; she start sweeting; her eyes get red with anger
😡 if there is anyone standing in front of her she Will definitely kill her by this time now. But before she could reply anything doctors came in n ask Ayesha to wait outside as they want to check about her current condition good luck to the girl as she also doesn't wanr to tell her bff about her pain about her condition in actually she is tired of her life but still she is fighting for her sakshi 😭 After examing her doctors came out n told Ayesha that everything is fine but instructs her not to disturb her as she need a proper rest.Ayesha wants to talk her but after watching her condition she choose to wait for her well being.
It was almost 3 am of the next morning whole team came to visit her but arjun doesn't what is attrating h towards her everyone can sense differnce in his deeds he was unable to focus on the case n also enquire s about girl from Ayesha about 5 mins n the beginning Ayesha picks his call n answe him but then as she there is also some childish in her she order him to put a Bluetooth also arjun can't deny her afterall she is going to be his vehani 😳 so as a obeying child he put on a Bluetooth n Ayesha place a phone near the girl face but hiding from her as she know her friend who never show any interest in love 😉 .Whole ETF team was laughing on his antics . (ok this was the flashback) Now whole etf members are now in hospital they were enquiring from the doctors when rathore told them that want to take her home doctor told them this is not safe but since rathore never agree to them n order them to ready her discharge papers.Team was shock that what is he asking to doctors to answe them he moves towards them n told them that he already lost her sister but now he can't lost this person from his life as she is responsible that he is able to met his best friend.Everyone had tears on their eyes n also a wide smile on their faces. Then the question arrived where they will kept her as Ayesha liza choree lives in apartment n also rathore use to live with his parents so that's why now arjun had to kept her in his house n had to leave a lodge n also to stay their with her*(yup party hogi akhir arjun ghar vaapis a hi geya) .First he deny it after senses that there might be she is in danger so he agree. After compliting paper work they all moves towards arjun's home the girl was still in sleep due to highly reactive medicines.After reaching his home he picks her in his arms n move towards the doorn Ayesha open the door. Everyone was in dilemma that where would he place her but then they all had a great shock for them he opens her bedroom door n place on their bed (arjun n ROSHNI' s bed) n cover her with same blanket. 😲
They all moves out of room when they make sure everything is fine but it is just about they had left her in the roon they all heard a loud scream from the room they all rush in roon without wasting any second. . there was no one inside the room but the girl was sitting their totally wet with her sweet arjun moves towards her sit to her side on the bed before Ayesha could do anything he hand over a glass of water n put a hand on her shoulder but as she realized some one is there for her she places her head on his chest n start sobbing (just remember ariya bathroom scene the way she put her head on his chest) Ayesha came forward after realizing that she is her friend romancing with sadu n that too infront of whole team Ayesha gather all her courage n moves towards them call out arjun sir n then she place her hand on girl's shoulder n calls out riya?? r u ok?? everyone got surprised by this that how they know each other riya stop sobbing n then she realized she is in warm hug but she releases her self n saw in that person's eye 😳 n shares a cute eyelock here Ayesha start hitting her head with his hands sameer n team were like what the hell is happening to her.he looks towards her but she doesn't bother to answer him.This was enough to make him energy he loudly shout DAMMIT n this break there eyelock n also Ayesha came back to her normal Condition but before he could say anything riya slaps arjun 😲
everyone was like what the look. but before she could say anything he utter sorry that is enough for whole team to get hell shocked n all were open mouth 😲 everyone start slapping themselves to make sure they're not dreaming including rathore n Ayesha 😆 ik to riya ne use thappar mara n uppar se arjun ne hi use sorry boli. 😆 n then she tries to get her but due to weakness she again slids into arjun's arm n then again eyelock 😳 but suddenly she realized this is out of control so she tries to free herself from his tighter hold 😳 both were blushing very hard. unknown to them shree n liza were recording all of this in their mobile s . Then after getting free she lower her eyes n approach Ayesha for her cell Ayesha know she can't deny her so she give it to her.Riya dials a number n say sir mein apse milna chahti hoon , haan mein thik hoob mujhe kya hoga, (then she said that is unable to digest by each member standing there) haan sir sikander ko mare bina kesse mar sakti hoon n then the person ask her where she is so she looks towards Ayesha n Ayesha look towards arjun n rathore they nod their head n then told her she is in RAWTE mansion.Riya doesn't react to anything but the person to whom she is talking got totally shocked after hearing this. 😲 He told her that he will be there in 10 mins. She give back the phone to Ayesha n moves her eye towards the each corner of the room she doesn't look surprised by seeing their picture but arjun was quick enough to know that she knows about them she slowly utter ROSHNI everyone got surprised 😲 but before they can ask her anything they hear a door bell ring n then shree moves towards door after making sure that they know that person he was none other than DIG Colesto (sorry I don't know his name in show) he quickly ask shree about riya n moves with him to the room. he got shocked that she is in arjun's bedroom n he got shocked arjun looked calm 😲 😉 but after that he handover a letter to riya n other to rathore n then she yells out NO this can't be possible never except this from me 😭 😡

PRECAP: arjun wants to know her relationship with ROSHNI nfights b/w them , rathore was crying Ayesha consoling him 😳 😉 😳 new flashbacks of each of their lives n their connection to sikander 😡

plz guys sorry that I m not using proper format plz forgive me n plz remember to cmmnt plz plz plz 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
it is gr8 update
i read all part it is awesome concept dr
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
very nice concept...!!!!
precap look intersting!!!
plz cont soon...
waiting for ur next update!!!:)

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