ariya {@ piya o re piya@ } chapter11 -pg33 4jun13

guys I m going to write on ariya should I continue or not ???
in this one we have all the same characters including riya but sorry to arakshi fans I m not going to include mrunal in it if u all want then in that case she will be seen as little villan or may be dead ( if she is dead then definetly she is having same statua that of roshni in the serial) so plz tell me what u want :) 😊
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Character sketch - pg 1
Chapter 1 (a) -pg 1
chapter 1 (b)- pg2
Chapter 1 (c)-pg4
NOTE:pg5
Chapter 2-pg6
Chapter 3 pg 7
Chapter 4 -pg9

plz guys bear me with all of these because I m updating from my phone ...


Charactar Sketch:
^^^ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte -- no words to describe him hot,sexy, handsome moreover bold n courageous.
^^^ACP Riya Mukherjee -- not like show totally opposite but bold n courageous expert in marshal arts n encounters, , have very horrible past but no one nows that 😭 related to sikander
^^^ACP Sameer Damsingh Rathore-- ETF chief , best friend of arjun n roshni's bro, ishq wala luv with his sweetheart Ayesha Kapoor 😳
^^^Ayesha Kapoor--encounter specialist, luvs rathore 😳 best friend of shre chotu n liza
^^^Shreekant Sen --technical expert bff of chotu n Ayesha, luvs liza
^^^Chandrakant Patil --Commando bff of Ayesha shree n liza
^^^Liza D'cruz--luvs shree n bff of Ayesha n chotu; forensic expert
^^^Sakshi Anand -- dead but she is having a connection with one EtF member (sorry if I hurt some one's feelings) 😭
^^^Roshni Arjun Rawte-- dead wife of acp asr n sister of sam 😭


Everyone in the team is having relation with sikander n go to any depth to kill him but all of them doesn't know anything about riya as she is totally different even more than arjun



definitely I will update part 1 by tommorow

PRECAP-- someone meets someone; fighting; romance; flash back of all of them 😊

it's my request guys plz post ur commnts as this is my first post... 😕

hey nice cs n concept do continue soon. Hey give pms as well.

Chapter 1(a)

time around 5 am a sweet beautiful girl is having her morning walk with her headphones in her ears but doesn't have sound in them having revolver tuck inside her back n in her shoes. On the other side 3 Person one girl n two boys r having their morning walk they are relaxed but are exteremly alery about their surroundings after all they are our 3 main etf officers" dammit" "samje ja samjaun" "jangli billi". 😃 😆
unknown to all of them one more person is there for the evidence n to act on the situation. shree is in office instructing all3 of them and spending hard time with liza bbecause both of th had fight last night due to the case n chotu is bzee on phone with his khabris . Suddenly they all heard bullet firing as all three wants to act but get shocked after seeing a girl shooting on a group of 15- 20 people alone with revolver in both of her hands .she is hiding behind a trees but unfortunately the three become totally numb after watchi ng her (she is bold n fight ing all alone) they all come out of there terance with a loud scream of the girl they just heed towards the girlwithout even bothering about the goons so they choose this time to run away from there.

n then is the most beautiful moment of two lifes when they saw each other faces with the first ray of the sun making it's way out of the sky indicating the beginning for two luv birds n blessings from god. 😳


precap - romantic moment; shocking news for all team; flahback; first ariya hug 😳

Hey this concept is nice so riya is differnt from the show. She is very bold and an acp and a haunted past which related to sikender nice. Precap seems interesting. Do continue soon and plss pm me. Ariya rocks

awesome concept and CS :) loved it

wow

nice concept.. cs n update... loved it... i am so glad its on ariya..

please write ff on the title.. as first i didnt think it was an ff post.. looks like a normal post..

wow nice concept.

heyy nice concept and superb start dr...
wow loving riya's character... bold and different from show...
firt part was awsum...is the girl riya??
precap is interesting...
continue soon...

Chapter 1 (b)

the girl feels that someone is approaching her so as our fully alert she just move around n caught arjun's gun (just remember ariya first meet) as he move her around she was quick enough to drag a gun from his back, he got totally shocked after saw that as no one was able to do this before 😆 they shared a eye lock Ayesha n rathore were just amazed by her skills as she is able to defeat super cop arjun 😉 but amazement doesn't remains longer as the goons saw that she was now not alert about them so he shout 1 bullet again in her arm (she already had one bullet in her due to which she scream after that he saw her that she is getting uncouncious so without wasting any second he quickly grab her in her arms he was sure that she is not their enemy but as he was a cop he just thinks that maybe she was undercover or any agent so he just signal rathore to get suv .Rathore get shocked as he thought why he is helping her they doesn't even know her so they put her in the suv n rush towards hospital. arjun wad sitting behind having girl in her arms, Ayesha n rathore were on front. Unknown to them all three off them get totally numb to react to anything, noone know's the reason behind it.THey travel the distance of 30 mins in 15 mins.After reaching the hospital arjun pick her up in his strong arms they proceed towards Operation theatre instructing doctors to follow them the doctors began operating on her then suddenly a nurse arrives there n ask them to sign some important documents, 🥱 😲 trio watch each other face that what info they can give to hospital as they can't told them that she is unkknown to them; the nurse again enquire s from them then suddenly 😲 to Ayesha's shock both ACP's utter same name at same time ROSHNI RRAWTE; ROSHNI RATHORE 😲 but quickly exchange glances n utter again this time they were having tears in their eyes ROSHNI RATHORE RAWTE 😛 n both hug each other after almost 3years of ROSHNI' s death 😛 ; Ayesha was so happy for both of them that she is having tears of happines in her eyes .She thanx god for listening her prayers she know this is not possible without that girl so she also request to god for her well being. arjun n rathore get apart after watching Ayesha they signal Ayesha a cute smile . After that the fill all the documents as she is now arjun's wife; he doesn't feel it awkward for regarding her his own. They wait outside for her well being for about 6 hours n then doctors came out n say everything is undercontrol n instruct them that she need a proper rest as both of the bullet s were in same arm n almost at same spot.They thanx doctors n ask them when they can meet her so the doctors said that they're shifting her in ICU just then you can meet her but still she is uncouncious. The doctor put a hand on arjun's shoulder that she is really very lucky to have you in her life.n u also as she doesn't leave u behind in this world as her condition was very critical. Arjun can't control him just smile widely n blushing 😳 this doesn't get unnoticed by Ayesha n rathore they got shocked that what is happening to him 😕 . Then after about 2hours they get to know she gain counciousn now they can meet her .It was almost 2 pm in the afternoon all the etf team is in the hospital just to look over her as she needs total security also.But unknown to them one person is just smiling n lost in his own thought as he is remembering his face 😉 .When they came to know that she is fine now n her full senses they rush towards the ICU but unfortunately at the same moment a case arrives so without wasting any second the chief ask Ayesha to stay there n look after her .She gives a full attitude smile to them that she will take care of her.They just saw her resting through that small mirror n heeds toward their work.Ayesha moves inside the room the girl feels like someone is there so she quickly shift her body in that dirrection that cause really a bad pain in through out her body ; Ayesha runs towards her n give a fake smile grabbing her arm.both of them were having tears in there eyes 😭 Ayesha quickly encircles her arms around her her n give a kiss on her forehead.


Precap--relation b/w the girl n Ayesha, shock for all of them, luv birds first hug 😳, fight b/w them,who is she ???

guys I m really sorry that I m not using proper format for it as I updating from my phone so plz bear me n sorry again n one more thing plz guys it's my request to all plz post ur comment that iz the way to encourage us writers.