Ariya: Intense love part 9 pg 50

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Payal Goel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#201

Wen u gng to update lol
ps. dis time check ur slambuk dear rofl

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diya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: Payal_156
Wen u gng to update lol
ps. dis time check ur slambuk dear rofl

Dear seriously i'm busy now with my tests and i have to secure good grades any how...

I will try to update this week or else after some time...

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Payal Goel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: Diya121

Dear seriously i'm busy now with my tests and i have to secure good grades any how...

I will try to update this week or else after some time...

Aww ok same here
i understand dear
all the best 🤗

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diya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: Payal_156

Aww ok same here
i understand dear
all the best 🤗

Thank you so much🤗

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#205

hey firstly so sorry for the late comment...!!!😳

just read part 6 and 7

they were super super...!!!!👏⭐️

very beautifully written...!!!

so finally what happened to riya is revealed...!!!

she went to shimla to search for arjun...😲

feeling so bad for her kitna torture kiya un guys ne riya ko 😭arghhh hate them😡 acha hua arjun came on time and riya ko save kar liya...!!!!

shree riya ki bonding is lovely...!!! aur bibi she's missing rizwan so much... hope she finds him soon...!!!

part 7

it was awsum...

so raisha knows about arjun and riya...😲

and bibi considers them as her brothers... lovely... and sam and arjun were friends with rizwan...!!!

arjun's pov on all the things was very beautifully written... his concern for riya his thoughts his feelings everything was just perfect...!!!! his gradual approach to riy was just wow...!!!

the part where sam consoled arjun was beautifully portrayed...!!!!⭐️

hope ki arjun returns soon to his riya...!!!

continue soon...!!!!

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#206

glass moment of riya and arjun was awsome this my favourite fanatasy i always want this moment hope when i have someone special he will do such a act for me yeah ofcourse i will respond

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#207

m not a silent reader at awl its kind i get to know about this today... Its a nice story emotional with a tinge of happinesss nothin is wrong just plzzz continue it and plz make rizwan alive and finded by sam and arjun after this pathan lala mission make a mission rizwan searching nice carry on yaaar and soon waiting for it...

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Shweta Gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#208

When will you update dear?
Its very long time.
Please continue soon.
Eagerly waiting for next part.

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yas23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#209

sorry for late comment
superb update
part2
loved the flashbac
k it was a very interesing case
glad tht arjun came on time nd saved riya from the track
what happen to riya nd where is arjun
part3
loved riya and bibi scene
flashback scene were amazing
part4
fatima bibi story was amazing loved it hope she finds her husband
loved the convo of shree nd riya
part5
lovely part
past scenes were amazing loved the way arjun and riya became friends and the fell in love was great
awww happy that nothing happen to arjun nd hw he is fine
part6
loved the way arjun was introgating that man
loved shree nd riya flashback were amazing
part7
awww that was awesome
arjun pov was lovely that way he saved riya was just superb
so arjun sameer nd rizwan are friends nd fatima bibi is sister to arjun nd sam
loved sam aisha scene
thanks for pm
continue soon