Ariya: Intense love part 9 pg 50

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@Live-life

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#181

I can't describe my feelings right now!!!

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Seriously!! I am out of words!!!

It was an awesome update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I felt like crying!!!!!!!! Seriously!!!!!!!!

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I understand how Arjun feels!!!!!

I just wanted to hug both Riya and Arjjun!!!!!!!!! Literally!!!! And stay that way forever if I had to!!!!

🤗

Ahem Ahem...Don't you dare end it here!!!!!!!!!

Please continue continue!!!!!!

please please

pease please

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beatrice_89

@beatrice_89

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#182

great update really emotional one arjuns words at the end was so beautifully written. cont soon plz pm me when you update next

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Sanjana malhotra

@MissRight

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#183

WOW!! What an update!!! I am speechless... I can just say,

I WISH I GET A MAN LIKE ARJUN; FRIENDS LIKE SHREE, BIBI AND CHOTU AND A BROTHER LIKE SAMEER!!!

U made me miss my friends so much!! I hope that the fact that i am saat-samundra paar from them won't have any effect on our friendship... They are the best part of my life and it would kill me if i lost them!!!

Guyz I love u!!

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sana khan

@sanakhan.khan16

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#184

dnt u dare stop dis other wise i will cryyy...

ohhh god u r a brilliant writer yaar each and every emotion is very beautifully described that it directlyy touch my heart and my soul...evrytym with your writting u left me speechless...

arjun's pain was v.well described and they way riya react to hi pleas was heart wrenching dear...

sameer knows abt riya and arjun and sameer friendship is v.special watevr may b the prblms frnds r always frnds..

ryt know koi bhi icon is forum ka kam padh jayegi tumhari tareef k liye...

plzzz cont. soon m will b w8ng

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Sawera87

@Sawera87

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#185

very nice, interesting and touchy. hats off to you for this excellent writing...

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nakshatra92

@nakshatra92

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#186

awesome...

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fb on arjun's pov ws nice...

raesha ws gud...

update soon...

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rocking_gal

@rocking_gal

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#187

firstly hats off to you...u seriously desrve a standing ovation...

ur a fab writer...words might be less to describe ur writing...!

Big fan of all ur works...always waiting for new updates of ur stories...

Cming to update...it was fabulous,mindblowing...left me speechless and craving for more...

The emotions,relations,love,frndship,brother Nd sis relation,pain,hurt everythng was vry well penned down...

Each and every sentence was heartouching...

starting frm the small raisha moments to the lift scene,the frndship bond,was damn gud...

The past was hurting one...it seriously hurted me too along with Arjun and riya...

But he saved her that's what's imp...

Very beautiful update...

Hope for more ariya,raisha and biba with rizwan moments...

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neeraja

@life93

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#188

hi dia🤗...so here ur well deserves👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏...actually i'm falling in love with ur intense love...today was limit ...i dont know how to describe...just perfect...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏... arjun's pov was written amazingly briliant...the life scene was so well that i was assuming in front of my eyes wow...the way he cared for riya...actually whole etf sameer ...who send mr.sehgal for riya...shree who is at shimla...only for her ree...aisha...n chotu too...she is lucky that everybody loves her sooo much... bibi what should i say...she is just so good...love her so much so rizwaan arjun sameer are friends...bibi consider sam n arjun as her brothers...the scene in riya 's room was so heart touching...well done dia...waiting for next installment...eagerly...😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

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Mishti,mish,mishtu, mt

@mishree

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#189

Awesome dr I read all update it is superb work

W8ng 4 next update

plz pm me next time

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#190

In one word,BEAUTIFUL.
Arjun's POV was really beautiful.
Tears rolled out from my eyes.
How he really cared for Riya...
Ending really broke me down.
Anth mein bold letters mein jo tumne likkha hai,that was really beautiful,and,I totally loved it.
From the beginnig of the story,I had a little intution that,someway or the other,Major Rizwan Ahmed,Arjun Suryakant Rawte and Sameer Rathod were connected to each other.
Aah...
Loved this update,a lot.
Dil chura liya...
Cheers...
Precap seems interesting.
Please update soon.
Mujhe PM zarur karna,please.