Ariya: Intense love part 9 pg 50

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Omg kitna emotional tha mein toh aasu rok hi nahi paye

hope arjun jaldi waapas aajaye

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Arooj Arain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

great update..
FB scenes were awesome..
Lovd it..
Nd da chrctr u chose for rizwan is gud...
Yay.. Arjun is alive... Bt where is he.. Nd wht he is doin???
Continue soon..

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diya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Thanks jigars for liking😳

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rocking_gal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

awesome yar!!!!!!!!!!

for u and ur writing👏

totally loved it...wow!!!!!

each and every line is heart touching!:)

the flashback part was the best one!!!

must have read it almost three to four times:)

damn it was awesime and the end saying of your story👏

will be waiting eagerly for ur next update!!!!:)

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Pisces_Gurl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

wow...m sorry to comment late...

this chapter was the best of all...the glass wall scene was jst fab..i was imagining the scene...

great story...

hey plzz add me in ur buddy list n pm me...

update soon

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sana khan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

speechless...

i cant describe ma feelings how much i liked it...

each n every emotions u describe directly hit my heart...

the bibi part was fab how she passed her 8 months without him was heart touching,her love is so pureee...

ariya there bonding was magical on there bonding part i felt like i was reading some fairytale book...

arjun's pain and the last ariya scene took ma heart away..i adore the he wat put locket around her neck the moment they spend at the glass door trulyyy i was having tears in ma eyes wihich was threating to fall by each passing word of your story n finally it falls when arjun left ETF...

this is just few words i realy cant decribe ma real feelings it took ma heart away...

m speechless dear i just wanna telll uuu plzzz cont. soon wanna read more n more n more...

Edited by sanakhan.khan16 - 12 years ago

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devildiva21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

superb just wow update... am speechless...
it was so beautiful... so well written...
bibi part was lovely... she passes the last 8 months on hope that her husband will return...
and ariya part was awsum... fb was amazing... their journey from friendship to love was a treat to read and the way arjun shed all his inhibhitions wow... and the glass scene was very beautifully portrayed... it was like i was seeing it in front of my eyes... their emotions feelings everything was amazingly written...
so finally arjun's part is revealed... glad that he is fine... so he is away from her to protect her...
continue soon... eagerly waiting to know what happened to riya...

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Payal Goel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

U r a grt writer dear
picture perfect
like d choice of rizwan character
his patriotism wow
ariya super duper hit awesum
beautiful n heart touching emotions
feel lyk watching it
lovely
very well writen
do cont soon pls
ps. waiting fr arakshi
becum greedy lol
thanku dear..
tc..!

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diya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: zebbie
Wow...
Best update till now.
Loved it a lot.
The transitions from being friends,then lovers.
Beautiful portrayal of emotions.
Loved Ariya moments a lot.
Thank you for giving such a beautiful update.
Love u,dear.

Thanks zebbie story will get more interesting soon...

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diya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: dashequalsd3
YAY!!!! Arjun is there!!! yipeee...

He gave her LILIES!!!!

Awww such a cute moment... he gave her his locket...

LOVE u Arjun!!!

Everyone loves him...