ARIYA FF JAB KOI BAAT BIGAR JAYE updt pg31

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piyal

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Posted: 12 years ago

HI,FRIENDS.ITS PANKHURI.here i start a new ff on ariya.this is mainly on riya and her past.there will many suspance.and arjun is already falling for riya.so,here i go.

ETF

riya;kya yaar,kitna kam pending hai!!mujhse aur nahi hota!!!!!

shree:toh tu mat kar nah!!!tere sare kaam ham ka de???tu jakar apne arjun sir ke sath time spend kar!hum kar denge!!

riya:u?????kyun hamesha eysa bolta hai?sun mere aur arjun sir ke bich eisa kuch nahi hai.samjhe ya..

shree:ok,ok,ok.

RIYA'S PHONEIS RINGING

riya:hello!!!hello!!!who's there???joy!!yeh,joy!!how are u???kitne dino baad call kiya??apne sare friends ko bhul gaya nah???par tu itne tension me kyun hai???kuchh bolna chahta hai??ha.ha ok.main abhi arahi hu.ok bye.shree,mujheurgently jana hoga.tu yaha samhal lena.plzzplzzz

RIYA LEFT

ARJUN CAME OUT OF HIS CABBIN

arjun:kya hua??eyh riya kaha gayi??

shree:woh sir..uske ek frindka call aya tha,woh bahat tension me tha,toh riya nikal gayi.

AFTER 30 MINS

arjun:acp arjun speaking!!what???attempt to murder,ok hum abhi ate hai.victim ko hospitalised karo,abhi.yeh riya abhi tak nahi ayi?

AT MURDER SPOT

shree,iska naam joy sharma.forensic expert hai,CARE HOSPITAL me.

arjun:isne akhri baar kise call kiya tha ya kisse mila tha???

shree:woh...woh...sir..

arjun:kya woh woh laga rakhkha hai,saf saf batao...

shree:last call riya ka tha,aur who hadse se 5 min pahele hi riya yaha usse milne ayi thi,yeh rahi watchman ke record.yeh rahi riya ki entry aur deperture time.

arjun:what????iska matlab...

so what is that??plz tamatar abhi mat fekna...asli suspance todhi aur der baad khule ga.and thodi hi dino me mere final exam start ho rahe hai,so updates milne me der hogi,plz plz do comments...

index
part 1-p.n.1
part 2-p.n.2
part 3-p.n.2
part 4-p.n.3
part 5-p.n.4

part6(A)-p.n.4

part6(B)-p.n.5

part7-p.n.7

part8-p.n.8

part-9 p.n. 10

part-10(A)p.n. 12

part-10(B)p.n. 14

part-11 p.n. 16

part-12 p.n 20

part-13 & 14 p.n 23

part-15 p.n 26

part-last (a) p.n. 28

part -last (b)p.n. 31

THE END

Edited by pankhuri96 - 12 years ago

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piyal

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Posted: 12 years ago

Thanx for ur comments.i hav changed the name into jab koi baat bigar jaye.

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

Ohh u changed the name..
hum realy nice ..arjun already falling for her..
who is joy..???
nice starting conti soon...dr panku

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devildiva21

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Posted: 12 years ago

awsum start...!!!

who is joy?? and riya has a past...!!!

continue soon...!!

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piyal

@Pankhuri96

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Posted: 12 years ago

HERE IS THE PART 2

arjun:nahi,eysa nahi ho sakta.riya...nahi.shree riya ko call karo.

shree:sir abhi tak 10 bar phone kar chuka hu.uska phone unavailavel araha hai.

AFTER 30 MINS

riya:shree ke 10 miscalls!!!!!!!zaroor koi baat hogi.(riya calls shree)hello??shree??kaha ho tum??hospital???ok,main abhi arahihu.

RIYA REACHES HOSPITAL

arjun:tum aab tak kaha thi???mujhe kitni chinta ho rahi thi???

riya:aapko meri chinta ho rahi thi????waise main mere ek zaroori kaam se gayi thi.

arjun:aur woh zaroori kaam kya tha???

riya:aapmujhse aise kyun baat kar rahe hai???jaise se ke main koi criminal hu???

rathore:tum na baatake hame yeh sochne par majbur kar rahi ho.

riya:aap log kahena kya chahate hai??

arjun:shree ne bataya ki tum kisi joy se milne gayi ho,am i right???

riya:woh,haa,main gayi toh thi,par woh waha aya hi nahi!!!main pure ek ghante uska wait kiya.par sir baat kya hai??

arjun:tum jis joy se milne gayi thi kya uska sur name sharma hai????

riya:ha,sharma hi hai,woh mera college friend hai.kya hua sir,kuch khulke batayenge???????????

arjun:joy ko kisine marne ki koshis ki hai.

riya:what!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

shree:aur,azib baat yeh hai ki,jab uske sath yeh hadsa hua,uske thik 5 mins pahele tumhari us appartment entry aur hadse ke 5 mins baad tumhari exit.

riya:kahi aap log yeh toh nahi kahena chahte ki main ne...

arjun:nahi eysa bilkool nahi hai.hame maloom hai ki tum aisa kabhi nahi kar sakti.koi hai jo tumhe phasane ki koshis kar raha hai.hame use dhondna hi hoga.par aisa kon ho sakta hai????

shree;hame ek baar waha jana chahiye riya ko lekar.

rathore:thik kaha,let's go.

SCENE CHANGES/BIKASH APPARTMENT

arjun:kya yeh ladki yaha ayi thi???

watch man:nahi sir,yeh madam toh nahi thi.koi gor madam thi.

arjun:thik hai tum jao.

aaj ke liye itna hi.next updates me late ho sakta hai.plzz forgive me for that.do comments.

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

Realy nice update dr..
joy sharma...
arjun thinking is riya try to harm him..good update..

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573339

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Posted: 12 years ago

great update :) loved it

arjun already falling for riya :)

riya has a past..

so riya wasn't the girl who went to meet joy

can't wait to read more

thanks for the PM :)

continue soon

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devildiva21

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Posted: 12 years ago

awsum update...!!!

loved it...!!!

glad that arjun trust's riya...!!!

continue soon...!!!

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Megha (Vishav Kirti) Sharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice part !

Continue soon and thanks for the PM.

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piyal

@Pankhuri96

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Posted: 12 years ago

#10

hi,herre is the next part

PART 3

arjun:usse leke jao aur larki ki scetch banwao.

shree:ok sir.

everyone left the spot

ETF

conference room

arjun:riya kon fasa sakta hai????

rathore:yehi toh hame pata karna hoga.

shree comes

arjun:kaha the tum???

shree:do badi khabar laya hu.ek larki sketch ban chuki hai,yeh raha.aur...yeh aap khud hi dhekh lijiye.

arjun takes the file from shree

arjun:yeh toh koi case file hai,5 saal purani hai,aur riya se judi hai.

riya:kya!!!!!mujhse judi???

rathore:tum kuch khulke batao ge ya eyse hi paheliya bujhaoge????

shree:yeh case etf ko mila hai.case kya hai jannna nahi chahoge????

all:kon?????

rathore: elaborate karke batao ge????

arjun:5 saal pahele sent. sofia college me final year ke students ke farewell ke din ek ladki ka murder ho jata hai,par simple tarike se nahi,rape karke.iss case ki eklauti eye witness miss shital rao,murderer ne use bhi marne ki koshis ki par mar na paye.siir pe bhari chot lagne ki wajese woh aab mental assilem me hai.koi pakka sabut na milne par case bandh kar diya gaya aab sawal yeh uttta hai yeh case kisne reopen kiya?????

shree:janta tha aap sab yehi sawal puchhenge.case aur kisine nahi JOY SHARMA ne reopen kiya.

all:kya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

aaj bas itna hi .kal koshis karungi updates karne ki.plz do comments.sorry for short update.

urs

pankhu