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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ankita2804

meri to heartbeats badh gai cs padhke... update jaldi... ;-)



tumhara toh heartbeats tabhi barhta hai jab tumhara naam Rathod se jura hota hai.
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Ch1.

Becoming the wife of the great ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte was not an easy thing.He was the most wanted bachelor of the town.He had a good name and reputation in the Police Department.
All girls would fall for him,but,he never used to pay attention to any of them,until and unless he fell for a girl.

ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte,falling for a girl... Next to impossible... His mooh bola bhai,ACP Sameer Rathod,sweared on God,that,if Arjun falls in love with a girl,he will break 100 coconuts on a mandir.

Arjun's bhabhi,Ankita,used to pray to Bhagwaan every day and night.
Ankita: Hey Bhagwaan... Koi toh chamatkar kardo..Mere iss devar ke jeevan mein koi aisi larki bhejo jo,Arjun ko bhi apne jaan se zyada pyaar kare,uski ankahi,ansuni baato ko samajh le,uske har sukh,har dukh mein shamil ho.

And whoah... Guess what...
The great ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte fell in LOVE. Even Ankita and Sameer couldnt believe their ears.Most of all,his cute princess,Samantha,didnt believe it.


Yes,Samantha,5 year old daughter of ACP Sameer Rathod and Ankita Rathod.Bubbly,Lively,Friendly,Obedient to everyone,and,especially,Arjun's apple of the eye.Sama,as she was called by her Arjun chachu,was his girlfriend...

Girlfriend!!!! That too,a 5 year old girl of a 25 year old ACP... Strange na. But,there are some relations that are made from the heart.

When Sama heard about this,she was furious and sad. She didnt talk with anyone,even her Mumma and Papa.She was sad.
Ankita knew how to pacify her.She called Arjun.

Ankita: Devarji... Ghar mein afat aagayi hai.
Arjun(worried): Kya hua,Bhabi? Sab thik toh hai? Sama thik hai?
Ankita: Khote,tum aise bartaav kar rahe ho jaise kuch nahi pata tumhe.
Arjun: Seriously,Bhabi.Mujhe nahi pata. Bataiye?
Ankita: Tumhari aakho ka tara,tumhari girlfriend,Sama,tumse bohut gussa hai.Naraaz bhi hai.Kisi se baat nahi kar rahi hai.
Arjun:Aab pata chala... Hmm... Thori der mein aata hu.Woh kabtak apne boyfriend se naraaz rahegi.
Ankita: Jaldi aao.Warna,pura ghar sar pe utha legi tumhari ladli.
Arjun: Aap chinta mat kariye.Usse manane ka tareeka hai mere paas.
Ankita: thik hai.Jaldi aao.Aur zara mere unko bhi kehdena ki unki shehzadu unse bohut gussa hai.Aaj usse subah na mile office chale gaye.
Arjun: Arey bapre!! Phir toh aaj ghar mein ghamasan larai hogi.Backup forces leke aau kya?
Ankita: Hey Bhagwaan...tum dono ka kuch nahi hosakta.Chalo,phone rakho.Bye.
Arjun: Bye,bhabhi.

After a while,Arjun calls someone.
Arjun: Hey... Kaisi hai aap?
Girl: Hum thik hai? Aap kaise hai? Aapka kaam kaisa chal raha hai? Sameer bhaiya ko mera pranaaam kahiyega.Ankita didi ko bhi. Aur,aapke woh dono officers,Shree aur Chotu ko bhi meri taraf se Hello boldijiyega.
Arjun: Haan,zaroor. Waise,ek baat kehni thhi tumhe?
Girl: Kya?
Arjun: Woh... Woh...
Girl: Samajh gayi... Arjun.maine aapse pehle bhi kahan hai aur aaj bhi kehrahi hu,mere khwahishon se zyada mere liye aapka kaam important hai.Aapko jab apna kaam karte safal dekhti hu,tab mujhe bohut shanti milti hai.Lagta hai,ki meri jeet hui hai.Mere khushiyon se zyada aapki khushiyaan mere liye keemti hai.Aaj hum dinner pe nahi jayenge.Kisi aur din jayenge,samjhhe ya samjhhau,ACP Sahab?
Arjun: i should thank my Bhagwaan that i got you in my Life.Tum meri har ankahi baatein,har ansuni baatein jaanleti ho.Meri icchao ko apne icchao se aage rakhti ho.Mere kaam ko apne khushiyo se zyada importance deti ho.Mujhe bohut acchi tarha se samajh jaati ho.Kyun karti ho mujhse itna pyaar?
Girl: hogaya khatam??? Aab aap suniye.Main aapse pyaar karti hu,be intehaan pyaar.Aap jitna mujhse zyada pyaar karte hai,usse zyada main aapse pyaar karti hu.
Main aaapse pyaar aapka saath chhorne keliye nahi,aapke saath janam janam rehne keliye kia hai.Aapke har dukh,har sukh mein saath dene keliye lia hai aapse pyaar.Aapki khushiyo se zyada mere jeevan kuch important nahi hai.Aap mere liye sab kuch ho.
Sab kuch.Aab aap samjhhe ya main samjhhau?
Arjun: I love you,Zebbie... A lot.
Zebbie: I love you,too,Arjun...Bohut zyada.Be intehaan.


So,the girl,whom Arjun loves is Zebbie... Zebbie Sharma... A school teacher by profession and a crime psychologist in ETF.

BG Music.

"Kaise mujhe tum milgayi,
Kismat pe aayi na yakeen,
Utar aayi jheel mein,
Ek chand ka tukra hai yahin,
Haule Haule,
Dheere Se...
Gunguni dhoop ki tarha se tarannum mein tum,
Chuke mujhe guzri ho yu,
Dekhu tumhe yaadein suroor,
Tum Ho Sukoon,
Tum ho Junoon,
Kyun Pehle Na,
Aayi Tum..."


Arjun was so lucky to have Zebbie in his life.
His friend,his confidante,his life,
his reason to live.
His Love...
Edited by zebbie - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
wow great story plz do pm me when u update the next part wonderful story thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
wow!!! superb start!!!

zebbie u r d lucky girl!!!

letz see how arjun manoficys his 1st gf samantha

update soon!!

and pls do pm me!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Haww...
Only two likes nd comments...
I m super pissed off nd angry.
Main phir nahi update karungi.
[:@]
Edited by zebbie - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16

superb update...
loved it...
hahaha zebbie tumhari to nikal padi... ;)
awww sama angry... cant wait to see how arjun manofy her...
continue soon...
cant wait for the next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
Ch2.

After talking with Zebbie,Arjun disconnects the phone.Meanwhile,Rathod also comes at that time.He sees Arjun smiling.
Rathod:Zebbie se baat hui,hai na? I know. Bohut pyaar karti hai tumse. I think,aab tujhe shaadi ki baat karleni chahiye usse.Kitne din usse intezar karwata rahega? Woh bhi toh shaadi karna chah rahi hogi.
Arjun: Haan,Sam. I guess mujhe baat karni hogi Zebbie se. Aaj hi karlunga. Waise,aaj ghar mein bari aafat aagayi hai?
Rathod: KYA?????? KYA HUA???
Arjun: Sama tujhse aur mujhse bohut naraz hai,aur,gussa bhi.Mere paas toh usse manane ka formula hai,par tere paas??? Tune toh aaj usse miley bagaer office chala aaya... Aaj toh teri vaat lagne wali hai.
Rathod(tensed): Haan,Yaar...Aaj toh meri court martial hohi gaya samjho.
Arjun: Hmm... Main janta hu,woh apne Papa se bohut pyaar karti hai.Woh tumse itni der naraaz nahi reh sakti. Chal,tum ghar jao.Main thori daer mein aata hu.
Rathod: Ok. Ghar mein milte hai. Bye.
Arjun: Bye.

ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte is such a person,from,whom,no one can expect the slightest of mistake.He hates people who does the mistake of commiting a mistake,hates liars.

Well,after Rathod departs,Arjun calls Zebbie again.
Zebbie's phone buzzes.A big smile crept up on her face.She answered the call.
Before she could speal,Arjun started.
Arjun: Kya baat hai? Phone pe jab mera naam flash hua,tab tumhare chehre par itna bara muskaan aaya hai.
Zebbie blushes a lot.
Arjun understood.
Arjun: Apne hone wale pati se sharma rahi ho? Haye... Jab tum sharmati ho,kitni acchi lagti ho,ekdum Angel ki tarha.
Zebbie: Aapko kaise pata?
Arjun: Meri jaan,main ETF ka 2nd in command hu.Sab kuch ki bhanak lag jati hai mujhe.
Zebbie: Aapki issi ada pe toh hum marte hai aap pe. Kaise hai aap?
Arjun: I am fine.Waise,kya tum abhi free ho?
Zebbie: Haan.Kyun? Sama naraaz hai aapse?
Arjun: Tumhe kaise pata chala?
Zebbie: Main bhi Criminal Psychologist hu,ETF ki.Insaano ki dimaag mujhe parna aata hai.
Arjun(naughtily): Accha jee... Toh,aap kripiya karke yeh bataen ki mere mann mein kya chal raha hai?
Zebbie: Hmm... Lemme think... Yup. Mere ACP sahab ke mann mein yeh chalraha hai ki woh yahaan mere paas aayenge aur mujhe apne ghar le jayenge Sama ko manane keliye.
Arjun: Sacchi mein,,,,Tum meri ankahi baatein kaise samajh jati ho?
Zebbie: Arjun,pyaar ke rishte mein understanding,trust and respect,yeh teen cheezein mayne rakhti hai,jo humare rishte mein hai. Aap jaldi aiye.Main 10mins mein taiyaar hoke car parking mein milungi aapko.
Arjun: Thik hai.
Both disconnect the call.
Here,Zebbie gets ready.She wears a simple white salwar kameez.She waits for him in the car parking of her appartment,after locking the door of the her home.
Within 10mins,Arjun came.He was astonished to see her in White colour,his favourite. He remembers a thing told by her.
"White,colur of Purity and Honesty.Bilkul appki tarha".
Arjun comes out of his thoughts and signals her to come inside the car.After getting inside the car,she closed the door and wore the seat belt.She entwined her hands with Arjun's hand and left the compound.
They have a silent drive,enjoying each and every moment of their togetherness.
After 15mins,they reach their house.As Zebbie gets down,she greets Ankita and Rathod.All four of them went inside.
Zebbie looks for Samantha.
Zebbie: Di,Sama kahan hai?
Ankita: Woh apne kamre mein hai.Gussa hai.Khana bhi nahi khaya.
Zebbie: Dont worry,Di.Sama ko main thik 10mins baad niche leke aati hu. Aap tab tak khana lagana shuru kijiye.Arjun,aap please fresh hojaiye.Nahi toh aap bimar hojayenge,thik hai.
Arjun: Jo hukum,Rani Sahiba.
Zebbie blushes at that.
After a while,Zebbie goes inside Samantha's room.
Samantha looks at her.
Samantha: Chachi... Aap aa gayi...
She runs towards her and hugs her tightly.Zebbie also hugs her and carresses her back.
Zebbie: Hmm... Chachi toh aagayi,par,maine suna hai,aap apni boyfriend aur Papa se bohut naraaz ho.Yeh kya baat hui? Meri Sama aisi nahi hai.
Sama(making an innocent face): Chachi... Aap toh janti ho na,Chachu ko main ek minute na dekhu,toh mera din pura kharap jata hai.Aur,Papa,woh toh aaj mujhe dekhe bagaer hi chale gaye ETF.
Zebbie: Aap idhar baitho.Dekhiye,agar apke Chachu ko koi bura kahe,aapko accha lagega? Aapke Pap ko kuch bura kahe,aapko accha lagega?
Sama: Nahi,Chachi.
Zebbie: Phhir... Aap toh meri samajhdar bacchi ho na.Aapke Pap aur aapke boyfriend humari tarha sab insaano ki madat karte hai,aur,karte bhi rahenge.Aaj unhe jaldi rahi hogi,isiliye,nahi milpaye aapse.Ab ap samjhi?
Sama(pouting):Sorry,Chachi. Main nahi samaj payi.Aage se nahi hoga.Promise.Ekdum mere big teddy bear wala promise.
Zebbie: Thank You,baccha.Aur,haan,aap humesha aapki chachu ki girlfriend hi rahengi aur main aapki chachi.
Sama: sacchi???
Zebbie: Mucchi...
With that,Zebbie pecks her little forehead and cheeks.She takes Sama in her lap and takes her down in the dining table.
Sama: Chachi,aap kab aaogi yahaan mere Chachu ke paas?
Zebbie: Hmm... Aap jab kaho.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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zebbiee!!! i hope u r fine dear!! 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳!!!

superbb update!!!!.. u r soo sweet and understanble!! arjun is so lucky to have u 😳 😳 😳 😳!!!

sama iss so cuteee!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
superb update...!!!
loved it..!!!
wow zebbie and arjun understands each other alot...!!!😉
love your and sama's bonding...!!!
continue soon...!!!
cant wait for the next part...!!
hope you are fine now...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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So chachi what's next..😆😆😆
nice update..
love ur bonding with sama..
continue soon

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