OS: Itni Si Guzarish part 2A pg6 Updated

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Purva

@Tani2804

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: -sree13-
Purvi its your first emotional writing & i can say you have sustained the heavy feelings in it.

Riya's last wish..this thing slways reminds the tragic death of Riya. feeling lump in my throat reading it.

Riya had unknowingly hurt Arjun & his deceased wife but as she is genuinely sorry Arjun should give her chance for atleast to die without guilt.

feeling realy realy watery eyes & heavy heart. looking for the next chapter.

thank u Sree

for liking d first part

Ria hurted him n his feelings in d past

but she unintentionally did dat

Its her last wish to meet him n ask for forgiveness

Hope u will like d next part

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Purva

@Tani2804

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: kunchu
great OS yaar!! bohot hi touching hai!!
When you said it would be tragic, ithna expct nahi kiya tha.. but ab tho rulane ke hi plan hai!!
great update and continue soon!!!

thank u dear for liking d part

d next part is gonna b more emotional

Rulane ka plan ...pata nhi ..but sad hoga ..but d ending wud have a positive approach

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Pihu Sharma

@pihu_angad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Awesome OS yaar!! bohot hi touching hai!!!

Amazing update,

Continue soon!!!

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-SREE93-

@-SREE93-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

purva di

a very nice story beautifully written

i hope the girl is riya

dono wat really happened b/w them

it s really emotional and it will be more as u hav already told it won't have a happy ending...

bt pls di,don't make me cry...pls pls pls

Edited by -SREE93- - 12 years ago

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Di hats off to u fr d os first
so pure n beautiful
emotional
loved it
omg riya insult rosh
really its very diff for arjun to forgive her
rathore amazing
nw riya suffering shocking..
honestly di brilliant wrk
love u di
tc..