Valentine's Night: OS (ARIYA) part 3 uploaded pg 6 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: aroojarain

wow.. frst of all congrats for becoming senior membr..:) nd gr8 start dear.. aww.. samsha is so sweet :) nd valentine party..:) continue soon :)


thnxx 4 wishes... next part coming up in a while
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Posted: 12 years ago
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1st of all congratulations.
grt concept dear...
samsha is sooo cute.
continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Amazing part

waitig for d Arjun n ria ki meet

Aisha n Sameer a couple WOW


liked shree, chotu, ri n aisha ki masti

waiting

jaldi post karo
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14

still drafting the next part... will update today... promise!!😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Sameer and Ayesha,-Aakhand Saubhaygavati Bhava.


OMG...
Valentines Day party and that too in ETF...
Arey yaar,bohut mazaa hone wala hai.
Aab,Sameer aur Ayesha likhenge Arjun and Riya ki prem kahani.
Loved it...
Next part jaldi update karo.
Bohut hi cute,sweet,romantic OS hai.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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jaldi update karona...
i loved this

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice 1 dear ...now dey all r frndz ...now wtng 4 ariya lvstrys atrtnng
keep it up 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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THANKYOUU 4 ALL UR COMMENTS GUYZZ!!!
They mean a LOT to me...😊

Well part 2 here... Enjoy!! sorry not much of Ariya in this one!!!


EVENING TIME

Everything is set! The decorations are done. Food is set. Guests have arrived and party is in full swing. The dress code was RED for girls and Black for boys! Our ETF members were looking stunning in their party avatar! The party had not officially started, so the music was very soft in the background. The guests were entering and our heroes were attending them.

All of them were looking very nice. Our trio were standing in a group when Riya suddenly saw someone and shouted in joy. All of them, saw toward the place where Riya stared, shocked. Arjun also looked and saw a man standing there grinning from ear to ear. He turned to find Riya running across the hall and jump into the man's open arms and he spun her around. Seeing Riya in another man's arms pinched Arjun. He suddenly felt angry and wanted to break the man's bones. He turned away to control his feelings and composed himself.

Arjun: (ye kya ho raha hai mujhe. Mujhe itna gussa kyun aa raha hai. Hey bhagwaan maine Sameer ki baat kyun maani? Kyun aaya main iss party main?)

Meanwhile, Riya's 'friend' had put her down and she was leading him back to where Chotu and Shree were standing. When Riya reached the shocked duo, Aisha, Rathod and Arjun also joined them.

Riya: Guys, meet Abhimanyu aka Abhi. Mera friend. Abhi, these are Shree, Chotu, Aisha, Rathod sir and Arjun sir!

Abhi: hi everyone.

Arjun: (FRIEND! Haath to aise pakda hai jaise vo iski property ho! Ye ladki hamesha se hi bacchi thi aur rahegi)

All (except Arjun): hi.

Shree: vaise Ri, Abhi, ek baat poochon?

Riya: haan Shree, bolo.

Shree: Sirf dost ya kuch aur?

Riya: Shree, Shut up!

Abhi: are Ri! Kyun daant rahi ho bichaare ko. Shree, right?
Shree smiles and nods)

Abhi: to Shree, filhaal to sirf dost hain but agar Riya chaahe to os status ko change kar sakti hai. Mujhe koi problem nahi hai, kyun Ri? Vaise humaari jodi to kafi sundar hai... bas Ri ki haan ki der hai.

Abhi winks at Riya who playfully hits his arm with her free hand. Arjun on the other hand is getting more and more angry at their closeness.

Aisha: Wow yaar Ri. Tu to badi chupi rustam nikli. Tere is aashiq k baare main kabhi bataya hi nahi.

Riya (blushing): stop it guys! Aisa kuch nahi hai. Abhi, mere dad ke ek close friend ka beta hai aur mera bachpan ka dost. Iski to aadat hai mujhe pareshaan karne ki.

Abhi: aye haye! Teri issi ada pe to main marta hoon Ri. Abhi bhi der nahi hui hai. Tu haan kahe to abhi bhi tere ghar baarat le aaon?

Arjun couldn't bear anymore and he went away. Rathod followed him. Riya watched Arjun go and felt sad but she couldn't do anything. But before she could ponder over it, her thoughts were pulled back by Abhi.

Abhi: bol na? chalegi?

The other three people watching them were finding their chat quite amusing.

Riya: Mr Abhimanyu! Mera dil jeetna itna aasaan nahi hai! Bahut mehnat karni padegi.

Abhi: ooh wow. A challenge? Mat de Ri.. pachtayegi!

Riya: pachtaana maine zindagi main aaj tak nahi seekha!

Abhi: to theek hai. Ho jaye?

Riya: oh please.. carry on!

Saying this she turned and walked away to get herself a drink. abhi walks away too. In the mean time, Arjun and Sameer walk back in and stand with Aisha, Shree and Chotu. Sameer had managed to bring back Arjun. Suddenly, the lights dimmed and music played in the background. A spot light landed on Abhi, who was now on the stage.

Abhi: this one's for you Riya!

The spot light goes off and the lights come back on. Abhi starts to sing and dances along the song.


Ho..
Ho ho ho...
hmm hmm...

Woh dekhne mein kaisi seedhi-saadhi lagti
Hai bolti ki woh toh kuch nahi samajhti
Andar se kitni tez hai
Kabhi ajeeb si, kabhi haseen lagti
Kabhi kisi kitaab ka hai scene lagti
Philosophy ka craze hai
Ho.. Kehti hai yeh ik phase hai...

Woh dekhne mein kaisi seedhi-saadi lagti
Hai bolti ki woh toh kuch nahi samajhti
Andar se kitni tez hai
Kabhi ajeeb si, kabhi haseen lagti
Kabhi kisi kitaab ka hai scene lagti
Philosophy ka craze hai
Ho.. Kehti hai yeh ik phase hai

Ho.. Kehti hai yeh ik phase hai
Shh..pa pa pa...para
pa pa pa...para...ra..ra

Ye kahaan main aa gaya ?!
Bolo ye kaisa ye teyaar hai
Dil kisi ka ho gaya
Naa isspe ikhtaiyar hai
Karun toh kya karun ?
Kahun toh kya kahun ?
Ye gaana bhi toh usko paas laane ka bahana hai
Woh chhup-chhup mere dil ke raaz kholti
Haan takiye mein mere khwaab bhi tatolati
Possessiveness ka case hai

Jaaan-e-jaan, jaan-e-mann
Toh har gaane mein aata hai
Parwana Romeo har ladka hi bann jaata hai
Likhu toh kya likhu?
Banu toh kya banu?
Yeh filmon mein ladka hi kyun ladki ko phansata hai?
Naa chahoon bhi toh main sabhi woh kar jaata hoon
Woh aaye saamne toh main sudhar jaata hoon
Ladki ek full-on chase hai
Ho kehti hai yeh ek phase hai

Woh dekhne mein kaisi seedhi-saadi lagti
Hai bolti ki woh toh kuch nahi samajhti
Andar se kitni tez hai
Kabhi ajeeb si, kabhi haseen lagti
Kabhi kisi kitaab ka hai scene lagti
Philosophy ka craze hai
Ho.. Kehti hai yeh ik phase hai
Haan Kehti hai yeh ik phase hai
Auooo... auooo...

He finishes the song and everyone claps. He bows down and when he gets up, he smirks at Riya, who is standing with the rest of the ETF. She in answer, raises her eyebrows. Arjun, on the other hand is even more irritated by the song and the dedication but is also confused by his feelings. He thinks about the reason for feeling this but doesn't understand it. His mind waveres over to the conversation he had with Sameer when Sameer had followed him out before.

Arjun: (Could he be right?)
(FLASHBACK)

Sameer: Arjun! Arjun! Sun na! kahan bhaaga ja raha hai?

Sameer catches up with Arjun and holds his arm to turn him around.

Sameer: kya hua? Gussa kyun hai?

Arjun: ye ladki kitni besharam hai? Dekha toone? Kaise hug kar rahi thi osko. Aur phir haathon main haath!

Sameer: vo oska bachpan ka dost hai. Aur possibly oska future husband. Tune suna nahi, onke parents ne to onse shaadi ki baat bhi ki ha. Par tujhe itna bura kyun lag raha hai? Kahin tu Abhi se jealous to nahi hai?

Arjun: Jealous? Main kyun jealous hoonga?

Sameer: mujhe kya pata? Shayad tujhe Riya se pyaar ho? Hai kya?

Arjun: tu pagal hai kya? Main Riya se pyaar nahi karta.

Sameer: to tujhe kyun farak padta hai k Riya Abhi k saath ya kisi k saath bhi kaise behave kare?

Arjun: kyunki...

Arjun is silent. Sameer smirks.

Sameer: Arjun, tu maane ya na maane, symptoms to tujh mein bhi vahi hain jo mujh mein the.
Aisha ke liye. Tu aaraam se sochle!

Arjun: kya faltu ki baatein le kar baitha hai tu. Chal! Andar chalte hain!
(FLASHBACK ENDS)

Arjun: (Kya Sam sahi keh raha hai? Par agar vo galat hai to mujhe kyun farak padta hai Riya ki baaton se? oski harkaton se? oske Abhi k paas jaane se? Shayad Sameer sahi hai! Shayad mujhe sach main Riya se...)

Arjun's thought was left incomplete by the sound of Riya's voice.
Gore Gore Yeh Chore
Gore Gore Yeh Chore
Yeh Ishq Ishq Chilaatein Hai
Oooh Yeah
Yeh Gali Gali Mand Raatein Hai
Oooh Yeah
Yeh Ishq Ishq Chilaatein Hai
Oooh Yeah
Yeh Gali Gali Mand Raatein Hai
Oooh Yeah
Shaadi Ki Degar Na Jaaye Magar
Yeh Gore Gore Se Chore
Yeh Gore Gore Se Chore
Yeh Gore Gore Se Chore
Yeh Gore Gore Se Chore
Yeh Gore Gore Se Chore
Yeh Gore Gore Se Chore
Andher Se Chahe Kuch Bhi Ho Yeh
Adha Magar Hai Heero Wali
Din Raat Kitaabein Parthe Hai Yeh
Ladki Ki Tasweero Wali
Kahin Jeevan Mela' Oye Shava
Par Shaadi Jamela' Oye Shava
Darwaza Inhe Dikhlaon Zara
Yeh Gore Gore Se Chore
Yeh Gore Gore Se Chore
Yeh Gore Gore Se Chore
Yeh Gore Gore Se Chore
Yeh Gore Gore Se Chore
Yeh Gore Gore Se Chore
Gore Gore Yeh Chore
Gore Gore Yeh Chore
Shaadi Ki Jo Baat Karo To
Budi Yeh Haalat Karthe Hai' Achcha Mmm
Bin Shaadi Sang Rehne Ki Yeh
Badi Waqalat Karte Hai
Har Ladki Pyaari' Oye Shava
Bin Zimivari' Oye Shava
Laila Ke Bina Yeh Majhnu Bane
Yeh Gore Gore Se Chore
Yeh Gore Gore Se Chore
Yeh Gore Gore Se Chore
Yeh Gore Gore Se Chore
Yeh Gore Gore Se Chore
Yeh Gore Gore Se Chore
Jab Yeh Budhe Ho Jayenge
Kaans Kaans Ke Reh Jayenge
Kande Par Koi Haath Na Hoga
Hum Dum Koi Saath Na Hoga
Tokar Kayenge' Oye Shava
Phir Pachtayenge' Oye Shava
Tab Yaad Inne Aayenge Hum
Yeh Gore Gore Se Chore
Yeh Gore Gore Chore
Yeh Gore Gore Se Chore
Yeh Ishq Ishq Chilaatein Hai
Oooh Yeah
Yeh Gali Gali Mand Raatein Hai
Oooh Yeah
Shaadi Ki Degar Na Jaaye Magar
Yeh Gore Gore Se Chore
Yeh Gore Gore Se Chore
Yeh Gore Gore Se Chore
Yeh Gore Gore Se Chore
Yeh Gore Gore Se Chore
Yeh Gore Gore Se Chore
She finishes the song and everyone claps again. The ETF team cheers for her. She bows down and when she gets up, she smirks at Abhi, who narrows his eyes and smirks in return.
Abhi: (ooh! The game just got interesting! Miss. Mukherjee, mujhe yahan aapko aapke pyaar se milvaane k liye bulaya gya hai.. Aur ab main ye kaise karta hoon.. vo tum dekhti jao!!)


Well... what do u think?? gud? bad? bakwaas?

Plzzz Comment or atleast hit 'like'!!!

THNXX😛

one more part!!! coming up tomorrow!!!
Edited by dashequalsd3 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
Awesome update!!
Love the lightness of the whole scene. Sameer and Arjun convo was sweet, Sam is a good friend. Abhi seems like a nice guy...waiting eagerly for the next update to see what he does!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
fantastic OS :) loved it
love riya's bonding with aisha, shree and chotu
valentines party in office
aisha and sameer are a couple :) great
loved arjun's dialogue : haath to aise pakda hai jaise vo iski propert ho"
arjun getting jealous :)
loved sameer and arjun's conversation
thanks for the PM :)
continue soon

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