SS: Tera Jadu chal gaya Chapter9 Page 40 - Page 5

amazing chap... does dis story have Roshni??

awesome update
loved it so much
loved how riya was using magic on arjun nd helping him round bt he dosen't like it
aww shree is also a jeanie amazing
bt hw dose riya knws lots if things about arjun
continue soon

awesome update :) loved it

I am completely lost in the another world...

superb update...!!!!

My dear Purva,

Now this is more like it! I was afraid it was going to be yet another mushy Ariya romance, with her making cow's eyes at him every chance she gets and him snarling nonstop, but this is truly a delightful and very novel idea. It has almost endless possibilities, and I hope you will explore many of them.

What I like the best is that it is so consistently comical, and that Arjun is treated, both by Riya and by you, in a fine, irreverent spirit.That is precisely what the chap needs! I loved the part that goes:

Ria asked him to pick the lamp. She quickly went inside n said,"arjun come on pick dis lamp n apne ghar chalo. Take care ki jyada jerks na lage, wo kya hian na I m busy doing my makeup. So please aaram se carry karna n yeh bilkul bhi mat sochna ki u can keep the lamp anywhere n run because I m watching all ur actions from my satellite TV"

And then "Ria:"Thik hain ..to main aapko phir se bed par aapke night suit mein bhej deti hun. Lekin think 1ce again"

I was in stitches! But you have to keep one thing in mind. Writing funny stuff is far more difficult than writing heavy duty emotional scenes. So this one will stretch your imagination as no standard issue Ariya romance would have, and you will have to look sharp and be on your toes. All the best!

Shyamala Aunty

Hello people i m back wid chapter 2. Hope u will like it.

Sorry but i m not able to reply on individual comment ...next time pakka kar dungi😳

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Chapter 3

Recap: Arjun left for office leaving ria all alone at home.

Ria, to herself, after some time, "what should I do '.i m getting bored!!! Main bahar chalti hun ..iss area ko visit karti hun ..dekhun to earth mein kya kya hota hain" but then on second thought, she remembers her promise to Arjun that she wont go anywhere.

Ria,"Oh no'I promised him ,..n genie have only 1 problem, they cannot break promises unlike humans"

Ria was lost in her thoughts and started reading a magazine. It was a fashion magazine, ria to herself, "Wow ..humans have a very gud fashion sense dese days, such pretty dresses'" n den suddenly something struck her, "IDEA". Before she could have worked upon her plan, she received a message on her latest Genie-Phone(instead of I-Phone she has genie-phone). N then d very next instant shree came there, "hey ri'how r u?" RIa,"not fine shree'" but before she could say anything, shree shouted,"Wat ..u r not fyn'kahin uss human ne tumhein scold to nahi kiya. Abhi batata hun usko" Ria,"arrey nahi 'usne kuch nahi kiya'dun worry..i was just saying ki I m bored " Shree,"chal na 'hum Genie-disco chalte hain , we will have loads of fun" Ria,"nahi nahi '.n waise wat r u doing here'.tumko mana kiya hain na yahan aane ko. Shree rani maa ko pata chala to she will sold u." Shree,"Mujhe scold already kar diya unhone, I cme to meet u last night, so she scolded me but main phir bhi aa gaya'.u r my best friend n bec of this mission tumko yahan aana padh gaya'.".Suddenly they here a loud voice,"Genie Shree'immediately report to Queen". Ria,"shree, bhaag Now u r gone."

Shree runs to there world n ria is again left alone. Ria,"yeh shree k chakkar mein I forgot to implement my idea." Ria claps 3 times and''.

Later in evening,

Arjun returns to his home. Arjun in car,"OMG kitna tiring day tha'.New case, it was indeed very interesting. Sam bhi yahan nahi hain..so I had to manage everything. Mujhe to bas ab sona hain" n then on second thoughts,"OMG how cud I forget, I left that genie, n den he hears an alarm in his car,'My name is Ria not genie''" he was shocked n den he said,"Genie y dis alarm" n den he again hears d same message. Arjun frustrated,"Okay fyn Ria, she s alone at home, I hope usne kuch problem na kari ho. I m not in d mood of taking any nonsense"

Arjun parked his car, n reached d 4^th floor of building. He opened his flat and as he stepped in he was hell horrified. He said,"Sorry I think ..main wrong flat mein aa gaya." N saying so he stepped outside. Arjun then looked at the door n said,"Yeh bahar se to mera hi home hain '.nameplate bhi sahi hian'." N then he again stepped in. Arjun,"What the hell 'yeh to mera ghar hain. Par yeh kya ho raha '." <The whole house was looking like a typical fashion house, there were some models practicing there ramp walks, some designers busy with Fabrics>

Arjun shouted to the core,"Wat is going on here" Suddenly he noticed no1 looking at him, arjun,"yeh chakkar kya hian ..(n then as if realizing something) Oh Freak!!! Genie where r u", as soon as he said, Genie, the alarm broke off saying,'My name is Ria', Arjun who was already pissed off, said,"Ria where r u?? just come n shut this freaking alarm."

Ria came suddenly in front of him,"Hi juno 'how r u?? dekho mera Fashion House kaise lag rha hain" Arjun,"Fashion House'.Wat the'yeh mera ghar hain 'So please usko ghar hi rehne do. Don't you dare change the interior again. Hadh hoti hain 'n wat is Juno'my name is arjun"

Ria,"Nahi main Genie n aap mere Juno '.waise aapko mera latest creation wo alarm kaisa laga???" Arjun,"pls wo creation nahi headache hain'.just stop that'Ge,,..(n den realizing dat if he s gonna refer her as genie, den alarm will again call off) mera meaning hain Ria"

Ria,"Finally u called me Ria..thanks to my alarm"

Arjun,"ab yeh '" n den his cell rangs. He goes outside to pick the call, while ria gets busy with her fashion house.

Arjun comes after 5 minutes n again shouts, "Ria Ria'" Ria comes,"Kya hain juno..cant you speak a bit softly. " Arjun,"Just shut up n listen, meri sis is coming here'with (and then stops)...so please clear up this mess..fast, n u also run somewhere because if she saw u , I m definitely gone"

Ria,"Apki sis, wow mujhe bhi milna hain ..aur yeh sab to dekhiye 1 min mein clear ho jayega" She claps n the whole fashion house disappears. Arjun in a moment, because of the news of his sis coming, said,"thanks to your magic"

Ria, was smiling,"arrey waah , finally apko mere magic ki need pata chali .."

Arjun,"Shut up n just hide'n unke saamne mat aana"

Ria,"okay .."she goes inside his room

After half an hour, Arjun's sister arrives with her family. Arjun,"Hi di 'how r u?? n jiju kahan hain" His sister,"arrey wo unn dono shaitan ko lekar aa rhe hain." She comes inside, n saw Arjun's house in a messed up condition. (Ria did the magic n removed the fashion house thing, but before that when she was getting bored, she created a bit mess'However, she forgot to rectify her mistake)

She says,"Arjun yeh kya haal kar rakha hain'.isliye I ask u to get married." Arjun,"Anki Di please ab yeh shaadi ka topic mat open karo." Suddenly they hear a noise at the door, 2 kids in there latest superman dresses, came inside, fighting with each other. Arjun,"aa gaye shaitan'" Tina,"Hi mamu ..kaisi lagi meri new dress." Ishan(to Arjun),"hey dude, meri dress kaisi hain" Arjun,"its good'baitho tum dono yahan 'I just come"

Arjun went inside, while he was taking out snack for d family, he was literally praying to save him from tina and ishan. The kids were super naughty n Arjun didn't share a very good equation with both of them. After 5 minutes he reaches d place, where they all were sitting, n finds sameer there. Arjun,"Hi sameer'.kaisa hain bhai" Ankita,"yeh to thik hi hian '.tum apni marriage kab kar rhe ho yeh batao" Arjun,"Di aap phir start ho gaye'Sam yaar, tum Anki ko tolerate kaisa karta hain" Ishan,"Mamu, yeh pooch main kaise tolerate karta hun" Ankita scolds ishan,"tum bahut jyada baat nahi kar rhe ho ajkal'.play with your toys both of u."

After some normal chats, Arjun asks,"yaar tum dono ko to probably aaj Mumbai jaana tha na''kya hua" Ankita looks at Sameer n den speaks,"Arjun u r my sabse acha brother" Arjun noticed her flattery, n asked,"Ankita yeh bol kaam kya hain" Ankita and sameer smiled and den she said,"Arjun 'Mumbai to jaana hain, n kisi wajah se bacho k flight tickets nahi ho paaye'..kya tum.." Arjun,"No di'.aap train se chale jaao..main tickets arrange kara deta hun" Ankita,"Pls arjun, hum train se nahi ja sakte u knw na 'ki tina ko problem hoti hian '.bas kuch din ki hi baat hian." Arjun,"kitne din???" Ankita,"10 days"

Arjun,"What ??? 10 days wo bhi inn dono shaitan k saath 'Di aisa torture mat karo"

Sameer,"Arjun please yaar'ab apne frend k liye itna bhi nahi karega"

Arjun,"thik hian"

Soon they both depart for the journey. Arjun bid them a good bye. Arjun turned and saw the 2 kids playin n den a thought came to his mind,"Oh FREAK..main kaise bhool gaya..Ria bhi to yahi hian'.ab kya hoga'.God save me from 3 monsters now"

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