SS: Tera Jadu chal gaya Chapter9 Page 40 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
awesome start :) loved it
very different concept
omg riya as jaenie 🤣
looking forward to read it
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
Too gud Purva..
Love it..
Lovely execute..
Just imagune this scene in front of my eyes..
Posted: 12 years ago
#23
wow! wow! wow!
So now riya is Arjun's jinni, want to know what happens next and yeah he called her maa...🤣.

continue soon and please PM me when u update.
Edited by dmegha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
hey its fab yaar..👏 riya as jeanie..wow kya concept hai😛 😆

cont soon and PM me plz😳
Edited by CrAzYaRjUnIaN92 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25

Hello people i m back wid chapter 2. Hope u will like it.


~~Chapter 2~~


Arjun: "Listen u gotta b kidding me'how is dis possible"

Ria:"arrey 'cant u see '.acha tell me ur wishes ..i will fulfill them"

Arjun:"acha thik hain if u r a Jeanie, den u must have a limit on number of wishes'jaise ki u can fulfill 3 wishes rite'den if I make 3 wishes'den u will leave me rite" (he said this very happily).

Ria:"Arjun'I m not gona leave u so soon mr arjun'..3 wishes ki limit to humare senior jeanies k paas thi '.now jeanies have become more advanced. I will fulfil ur wishes as long as I want. Itni easily apka pecha nhi chodungi main'"

Arjun:"Oh no!!!..yeh main kahan phans gaya"

Ria:"Oh yes''waise now I m feeling sleepy, chaliye"

Arjun (shocked):"kahan chalna hai??"

Ria:"Obviously aapke ghar'.ab hum yahan aapki poori life to reh nhi sakte na 'so chalein. N waise bhi I want to see my master's home."

Arjun:"dekho ..mujhe koi wish nhi karni. So please leave me."

Ria:"Iske besides jo wish karni hain kar lo'yeh wish fulfil nhi ho sakti. N I m not understanding 1 thing, generally human beings r very greedy, dey generally ask for luxuries from us, but aap ko kuch nahi chahiye kyun???"

Arjun:"Wo isliye because mujhe yeh magic waali luxuries mein koi interest nhi hain. I can earn them wid my hard work, samjhi ya samjhyun"

Ria:"hmm impressive'.iska matlab jo maine suna hain wo sahi hian"

Arjun:"wat did u just said, kisse suna tumne mere bare mein"

Ria (immediately) :"arrey , aapne yeh kya suna 'I didn't said nything'.ab please chalein I m dead tired"

Arjun(helplessly):"acha chalo"

Ria asked him to pick the lamp. She quickly went inside n said,"arjun come on pick dis lamp n apne ghar chalo. Take care ki jyada jerks na lage, wo kya hian na I m busy doing my makeup. So please aaram se carry karna n yeh bilkul bhi mat sochna ki u can keep the lamp anywhere n run because I m watching all ur actions from my satellite TV"

Arjun(in mind):"Yeh Jeanie hain ki koi model. Nakhre to dekho madam k. Bhagwaan y u have to do this to me."

After 1 hour, they reached the house.

As soon as arjun entered, Ria came out of the lamp. Ria:"is this ur house'Wow its so nice" before arjun could have said a thank u , ria said,"but I think if ur couch would have faced that direction it would have been better'Should I do dis"

Arjun:"No thanks ..jo jaisa hain 'usko change mat karna. N please now just shut up. I want to sleep right now"

Ria :"okay so sleep" n she clapped 3 times.

The very next instant, Arjun found himself on his bed, in his night clothes. Arjun to himself, "arrey yeh kaise hua 'n where s Jeanie" Ria came dere n said:"arrey u said, that u want to sleep , dekhiye I made things easy for u. Okay now good night. " Arjun:"okay Jeanie" Ria:"Yeh Jeanie Jeanie kya laga rakha hian'I have a very good name Ria'so wahi boliye."

Arjun: (a bit irritated) "Okay RIA..kya main so sakta hun ab"

Ria immediately disappeared in her lamp not before closing Arjun's room ki lights.

Inside the lamp,

There was a big PINK color Bed wid lots of lights. Ria:"aaj I dun want a pink bedroom" She clapped n her room changed into BLUE color. She was ready to sleep, when she noticed some fast moving object irritating her. Ria shouted, "Tum aa gaye mujhe pareshan karne 'ja shree ja yahan se" Suddenly a guy standing besides her, n says:"Kyaa yaar Ri, u recognized me."

Ria:"Raani ma ne mana kiya tha na 'tumko yahan aane se..phir y r u here. Main manage kar lungi. Dun worry for me. Aur Arjun ko shaq bhi nhi hua"

Shree:"Haan, par he s a human n I cannot trust humans. Chal ab u go to sleep n I m also going. Gud nite"

Next day:

Arjun gets up at 8. He checks the watch, n says"n says Oh God I have been sleeping so long. Jaldi se ready ho ja arjun, otherwise rathore tujhe nahi chodega."

Arjun gets up but in a tinge of second he finds himself ready and in the dining area. Arjun:"Yeh kya '..Jeanie u did this." Ria:"I told u that my name is Ria" Arjun:"Okay fine Ria, dekho mujhe nahi pasand hain ki koi bhi mere kaam kare'so y r u helping me hun."

Ria:"Thik hain ..to main aapko phir se bed par aapke night suit mein bhej deti hun. Lekin think 1ce again" Arjun realizes that he s already late for work n she was helping him. Arjun:"nahi uski koi need nahi hain'.aaj kar diya par kal se mat karna"

Ria(very slowly)" sahi suna hian 'yeh number 1 akdu hain ''help kari to thanks bhi nhi bol sakta. Instead abhi bhi suna raha hain."

Arjun:"Kuch kaha tumne"

Ria:"Nahi 'acha chalo yeh batao wat will u have in breakfast"

Arjun:"Kyun jo main bolunga'.wo tum le aaogi"

Ria:"pooch k dekhiye'I can serve any dish in a matter of seconds"

Arjun gets up n goes in d kitchen n starts making a sandwich for himself. Arjun,"Tum ko chahiye 'people say I m make a good cheese sandwich" Ria:"nahi 'aapko cheese sandwich chahiye..to main abhi magic se le aati hun" Arjun:"nahi ..i told u earlier ki mujhe apne kaam apne aap karna pasand hain. Isliye no magic"

Ria:"okay '.acha 1 baat batao..u r a police officer rite. " Arjun(while preparing sandwich): "hmm" Ria:"den apko kisi sikander name k criminal k relation mein koi knowledge hain"

Arjun:"Tum kaise jaanti ho sikander ko'." (he said while handling her a sandwich). They were sitting n enjoying dere sandwiches while arjun spoke up again,"y do u want to know about Sikander hun"

Ria:"arrey nahi 'aaj I read newspaper'.so dere was a news about him 'isliye I asked."

Arjun:"Okay'haan wo 1 criminal hain n I m after him. I have yet not caught him but hope ki 1 day I will catch him"

Arjun soon left for his office. While He asked ria, actually took a promise dat she will stay in d house n will not go anywhere.

Ria was in the house thinking how she will spend her day in his house.


PS: Do hit d like button n tell me how was it.

Edited by tani23 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
tera jadu chal gaya ...just loved it so much...
riya a jeenie...she is so cute
I think sikander ko pakadne mein ...she wl help him...continue soon..
Edited by samiya.059 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Wow...
Riya a genie...aur Arjun her master...
Good one..
Continue Soon..
Posted: 12 years ago
#28
That was lovely, Shree is also a jeanie...interesting.
Do continue soon and thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Hmmm...nice! Par daal me kuch kala lag raha hai! Continu soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Di aapka jadu chal gya
yay..
jeanie aka riya mujhe de do di pls rofling
arjun ko ni chaiye koi ni
par mujhe chaiye lolz
me too lazy..
amazing ch
riya makeup lol
arjun model dialogue hehe
lamp me pink se blue bedroom wow
shree bi aa gya grt..
di arjun bi bs siki ko kehta ria se lane ke liye to maja hi aa jata hehe..
waiting to knw ria kiya krne wali h lol in arjun home..
love u di
tc..
really enjoy..
thank u fr d awesum concept di

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