Big dhamal in chotu packet/JrETF n action page 25 - Page 7

Originally posted by: kunchu

superb OS... loved it to the bits...

my goodness... Ria teekh hi tho kaha... ye tho ekdum criminals lag rahe the...

too good!!😆😆

Originally posted by: ll-Shilpa-ll

Wow tani, I thought the grown up version of ETF is uniqu enough but you created their clons too.😆

Hilarious, poor Riya is in for a big surprise if her dream comes true.😛

Thanks for the PM.

Originally posted by: nikki08

Omg...!!!!

First of all amazing idea..!! Anika Hats off!!!👏

And the OS...I cant stop laughing...Amazing yaar Purva!!!!👏

Loved it to the core...!!!!

Kushal is actually ETF chief ka son...😉

The way he said "team we have a case..!!" cracked me up!!!!

Awww...loved you as our Arjun Rawte ki daughter..!!!😳

Poor riya!!!! ab life coffee pine ke pehle 10 baar sochegi!!!🤣

Just loved it yaar!!!!!

Superb!!!!

All the kids were so cute!!!!

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

purva tu itani naughty hai ...teri ma apane sapano mein bhi safe mehsus nahi karati...

the way kushal says 'Team we have case' kitna cute laga...all 4 kids act like same as their parents...

but ye kya parents satate hai to uski saja unhe dena chahate hai...kya baat hai...maggi khane nahi mili to parents ko rat poison khilne ka plan...wow

waise kushal ko dekh ke aisa laga ki rathore bhi bachpan mein aisa raha hoga...aniket dont like shree always with his laptop...usake computer wale papa...and mohan dont like chotu always do the wrestling practice...bechare parents...bachhe unki list bana rahe hai...aur riya ka naam sab se upar hai...saja milane ke liye

bechari riya kitani dar gayi...riya kya mein bhi yaha dar gayi...unke intention jaan kar...and jab kids riya ke liye coffee leke aate hai ...to riya aur mein sach mein dar gaye the

achha huva jo sapna tha...purva tera koi bharosa nahi...asliyat mein bhi kahi aisa hi kuch plan to kar rahi ho...

who knows

Originally posted by: ankita2804

OMG ... OMG... ⭐️

BB,,, what have you done yaar... 👏 👏

its superrrbbb yaar... 👍🏼

Bada difficult tha yaar hasi rokna... 🤣

lets start from the starting...

First, I was both hell shocked and excited when I read the title... 'Jr. ETF-ians' .. I couldnt stop myself from reading it at once... 😆 😆

then comes the CS... Loved the names u gave to the children, saw your name.. at last, madam ne samajhdaari dikhayi apni 😉 (indirectly, Arjun ka pyar mil hi gaya 😉😉 ) ... It was after this I read carefully the first name... Kushal ... Son of Sameer and Ankita Rathod... 😲 😃 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

haaayee... BB ... Cuddliest of the cuddliest hugs to you... ☺️ ☺️ 🤗

Purva is the no. 1 badmash... (bilkul sahi hai )... Akdu No. 1 😛... OMG... 😆

Shez is definitely her Papa's girl... 😳 😳

aur bilkul sahi hai yaar... dono ke dekh bhaal ke liye koi to chahiye... aur Sameer ke bina to sach me kuchh bhi nahi dikhta 😛

coming to the story...

hey bhagwaan... 😲 ye bachche hai ki aatankvaadi sangathan ??!! 😲😲 😕😕

lol... loved the way they were mimicking their parents... aww... must have been looking damn cute na...

Maggi nahi dete isliye maar denge.. baapre... BB ,, mujhe to ab bachcho se dar hone lag gaya hai...

Bichara Aniket.. Papa kaun aur lappy kaun 🤣🤣

Arjun aur Sameer uncle sabke heroes hai hun..

ufff... meri jaan atak gayi thi... but at last... bach gaye... it was a DREAAAMMM>...

but wait... ye sach bhi ho raha hai... NAHIII... 🤢

Kya turn diya hai story ko... ata kaha se hai ye sab dimaag me..??!! 😕 kahin bachpan me ye plan to nahi tha na tumhara 😕

Hats OFF... Mrs. Talented writer Kapoor 👏👏👏

Originally posted by: ..Sneha..

Tani partner.. Yeh kya kar diya tune 🤣
Aaj mere parents ko yakeen hogaya ki mein pagal hogayi hoon coz I was rofling non-stop while reading it 🤣 🤣

Jhakkas os tha yaar.. 😉

Jab Arjun ne Riya ko ATB wish kiya na.. Tabhi laga mujhe ki koi gadbad hai 😆 😆
And jr.ETFians toh Seniors se bhi aage nikle..
Kya dimaag chalta hai yaar unka 🤣

Ek ek karke itni saari shikayate shuru kar di 🤣

Sabse hilarious part.. "Rat poison" 🤣
I was like WTH? 😲 🤣

And Riya 🤣
Poor girl.. Itni darr gayi thi 🤣
Aur bache coffee bana le aaye apni pehli target keliye.. Waah 🤣

Main bomb toh last part mein phoota.. Yeh sab sapna.. OMG! 🤣
Riya bhi na.. Kaise sapne dekhti hai 🤣

Amazing os yaar!! 😳
Aise aur likhte raho aur humhe hasate raho 😆

Thnk u so much for the pm! 🤗

Originally posted by: Radhika Shah

Awesome