New Ariya OS: Dil Mil Gaye.. :) 11/1

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@satanslove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Hey !!!,

I am new to this forum as i browsed through this while doing my office work .😆

So from past few hours i have just reading the fanfictions here and got hooked to your works.

I have read and re read all your work as I couldnt get enough if the Ariya Magic you create, which we cant see in the show .

Needless to say that you are a brilliant writer and your FF does have lot of Mohhabat in them 😉

Thanks for the Ariya Magic

Plz Do PM reagarding your updates

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Aaaye Haaye!! superb!!👏⭐️👏

Loved it to the core...😳😳

aur pehli baar saare parts ek saath...waah waah...😆👏

I loved this story so much...Kuch kuch hota hai is one of my favourite movies...😳😉

Some of my favourite parts were:😊

Arjun's confession😳

The flashback kiss...wanted more of it!!☺️😆

Rathod shouting at Arjun and telling him to go get his girl...BRAVOOO👏

Avni's flirting...it made me smile even through the sad parts...😆

The pain...of Ariya...so beautifully described...tears were literally welling up my eyes reading that...😭😭

And lastly...AND Obvio the BESTESTTT part...THE REUNION😳😳😳

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: sunshine94
hayee,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

this is one of the cutest os i have ever read...☺️

or u may say series of os...👏

i luvd it yaar,,,,,,,,❤️

from where do u get so much emotion,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,😳

Thanks!! 😃

Emotion ka raaz hai Music, dear!

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Leki
Amazing OS Avantika...

from update 1-4 i was crying non stop bt last two updates made up for all my tears...

Brilliantly written and emotions r well potrayed... VM's added perfectly to the mood...

Loved the way Rathore nd Avni esp Avni stood by them nd acted as catalyst in their love story...

Prateik's family s good yar... dey understood Riya's plight fully nd stood by them...

Ariya dey r a wonderful couple... Hw dey understood eachother feelings well nd ready to sacrifice for others happiness...Damn it no one would have been happy if the wedding took place...

Last part i'm ☺️

Rathore's nd Avni's teasing nd Ariya's reaction esp hw Arjun reacted was cute nd lovely...

Luv u loads for writing this mindblowing work🤗

Write more of OS series lik this one...😳

Thank you soo much!
Avni's hotey hi cute hain.. 😉😳

I'm going to be busy with slightly different FF's now on.. One doesn't have Riya in it while the other has, but it's a long way to go for Ariya to actually fall in love in SYTPH! So, filhaal.. I suppose this was the last Ariya romance from me..But yes, I'll be back as soon as I have a Mentos moment! 😃

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: shruti-love
wonderful os
one of the beautiful & emotional os i have ever read.
loved every part of it,from starting to end loved it.
this os really brought tears in eyes,so much emotions,love every lines and scenes touched my heart,i really dont have words to say how much i loved this os,loved the way you portrayed arjun confession,riya & arjun s condition,riya breaking down when arjun left,all the scenes looked so real.
hats off to you for such a wonderful work and thank you for giving such a beautiful os.

Thank you for those lovely words of praise, dear! 😃

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Christeee
Omg you gave me a heartattack
1st riya's wedding then Riya leaving Arjun
then a crying Arjun 😭 and a broken Riya.I just kept on reading and crying,
THEN,the best part,
Arjun coming back to Riya and both being together.I had butterflies in my stomach
Yes,loved the way Avni hit on Arjun and rathore and avni teasing them,
AWESOME,I loved it😊

All in all, you enjoyed it right?? Bass that's what I intended to do.. Thanks.. 😊

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: kunchu
wow yaar..
great work..pehle socha tha ke har chaper ka review du..
but it was so awsome kemujhe bas ek hi kahni hai...
TOO GUD..
the turmoil.. the love.. and
khali post mein apne jo goal maari thi... badi ko chodke choti huh??
cool yaar..
loved..
just imagine agar ye FF hotha tho next chapter ka wait karke... OMG...

Thank you so much dear..
Ab kya karein, Arjun ji ki personality hi aisi hai; ki kissi ki bhi neeyat phisal jaaye.. 😉😆
Hmm.. Agar FF hota, toh kabhi khatam hi nahi hota.. 😆
I could go on and on forever!!

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Seenavas
felt like i just finish a movie
superb awesome

Exactly what I felt after finishing it!
Thanks..

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: jumbo_dumbo
Hey.. It is superb... Its like Kuch kuch hota hai happening for Ariya.. Amazing.. U r a brillant writer.. I loved it.. The VMs are also superb... Thank u for writing such a wonderful story..

Yupp!! KKHH.. One of my favorites!!
Thank you.. 😃

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: littlebrat
wow, excellent & fantabulous😊👏

one day back i posted an OS request that is without any parts

i never expected anyone would write like that😊

awesome dear ek jhatke se shuru kiya aur sweet romance pe end all in one go...👏👏

thanks alot dear

i loved it three times more then you loved it while writing😉😆