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Shru

@funkylicious

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: tani23

Obviously i meant d lines u used ...n perhaps typed in d story ...

even i m luking forward to read first chapter

First Chapter? I haven't even started typing 😆

Edited by funkylicious - 12 years ago

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samiya.059

@samiya.059

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

@shru woh poem meine nai likhi kisi poet nai likhi hai

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samiya.059

@samiya.059

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Pri lyk mat maar plz talk to me

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Shru

Really ossam.

Title of FF , Concept , Prologue everthing.

if possible plz give us CS.

Every word u use & sentence tell somthing abt charactor.

love how u potrayed all charactors.

waiting for other nxt beautiful update.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Wow Shru, this is very interesting.

Arjun and Chotu brothers, I really like this.

Riya is not yet ETF, will she be part of it in anyway? And her past seems full of pain.

Shree as usual the smarty, but I am sure there is something in his past also.

And Rathore, no one knows his little secrets.

Waiting for you to reveal the past of these five people and how they come together.

Loved what you gave us so far, please update soon.

Thanks for the PM.

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MastiMuskaan

@MastiMuskaan

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

aww you mentioned my name in ur ff..*rubbing happy tears off* thanks...🤗

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Edited by MastiMuskaan - 12 years ago

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Sreeparna

@Mellifluous

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

shru unresed on page 4 plzz check it 😳

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neeraja

@life93

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

hi shru🤗 first of all be lated happy new year😆...i'm throghly impressed with ur writing skills...just loved ur song battle scars it was awesome song👍🏼...this battle scars eams really intresting...the quote was so good n true one...yhnx 4 adding me as ur buddy n pm...update soon

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Shru

@funkylicious

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: ll-Shilpa-ll
Wow Shru, this is very interesting.

Arjun and Chotu brothers, I really like this.

Riya is not yet ETF, will she be part of it in anyway? And her past seems full of pain.

Shree as usual the smarty, but I am sure there is something in his past also.

And Rathore, no one knows his little secrets.

Waiting for you to reveal the past of these five people and how they come together.

Loved what you gave us so far, please update soon.

Thanks for the PM.