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DivineDarkness

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

emotional update... felt bad for Arjun and his mom... Sikki😡 feel lik strangling him... even i want answers hw ws Roshni saved nd whr ws she till nw???? update soon...

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Queen.Bee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

emotional update!! arjun already had gone thru a lot!!! roshini ki chakkar kya hai.. how she escaped that?? i just hope roshini wont come between ariya.. n also arjun meet riya soon!! update soon!!

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shruti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

now i have read all the parts
i felt it emotional
i was crying
it was so heart touching
i liked the plot of story
continue soon
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srividhya68

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

i felt it emotional
i was crying
it was so heart touching
i liked the plot of story
continue soon

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Miss Sara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: mithu_borkotoky
Yaar!
u literally made me cry😭... i had tears in my eyes after reading this...!!
How could arjun do such a thing... can't even imagine riya's condition... all alone n pregnant..!!
i tried to imagine myself in riya's place, n i felt exactly what u showed. the manner riya acted, what she did is so justified...

Arjun said he would never allow her to fill her maag by herself n now...😡

anyway, please continue soon... i m very eagerly waiting for ur next update..

Im sorry for making you cry...

Thank you for liking my story.. Yea he said, but they will meet soon...

Arjun is as well not happy doing this to Riya...

They will meet soon dont worry... 😊

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti
Hey !!!!
That was amazing :)
Roshni's come back was the most unexpected n shocking thing !!!
Omg Arjun actually brought Roshni back to the house n slapped Riya :'(
So riya actually lied about going to Delhi right ????
N all the best for your next viva ... :D
N can't wait for the next update :)

Hi dear

Thank you..

Yea she didnt anyone to know about it...

Thank you... My viva was good... 😊

Originally posted by: Radhika Shah
Great part

Thank you...

Originally posted by: fatima15
Amazing SS dear :) loved it
read both chapters in one shot...
i had tears in my eyes while reading this 😭 how could arjun do this to her... feeling so bad for riya... she is pregnant too...
all the best for your next viva :)
eagerly waiting for next part
update soon

Thank you so much... Yea will surely doo.. 😊

Originally posted by: Queen.Bee
i hate this arjun.. mana ki roshini turned up all of a sudden!! but what he did to riya was unacceptable.. poor riya!! what she said n did was correct.. he cant just drag n drop roshini in der house like that!! poor riya.. alone n pregnant what can she do?? if his so called love is true.. then how can he say mum when she left...

their she is suffering n here he going to live with roshini.. happily!!!

Aww Arjun se itni nafrat mat karo dear... He was numb so he stayed mum... Dekho aagey aagey kya kya karega Arjun..? 😊

Naah, how can he live happily with Roshni. He cant.. .

Originally posted by: tani23
Amazing chapers dear

read both d chapters n i liked d story

Roshni back in his life...:(

Arjun n riya separated ...😭

i dun like arjun wen he slapped her...

All d best for VIVA dear n

will wait for more parts

Thank you so much for liking my story...

They will meet soon.. Dont worry... 😊

Thanks for ua wishes.. My viva was good

Originally posted by: Sandy914
My throat is just paining.. My tears were at verge of my eyes.. It us real difficult control the emotion... I am crying for both Ariya.. Fantastic.. But y riya went to Bangalore not to Delhi?? Did shree know about this last min changes??

Hey dont cry... Everything wil be olryt.. Dont worry...

Riya went to Banglore coz she didnt want anyone to know bout her wherabouts.. 😊

Originally posted by: alee001
u made me cry!!!!😭!!!!!

i hate dis arjun how he can slap her!!! whn der is no fault of her!!!😡😡!!!

riya went to bangl!!!???

update soon!!!

Em sorry.. I dint mean too...

Yea she went to Banglore coz she didnt want anyone to know her location..

Originally posted by: anu91
Simply i am crying after reading ur update...
Feeling very bad for both arjun and riya...
Best wishes for ur viva dr...
Come soon with next part...

Anu, I didnt mean to make you cry...

Thank you for ua wishes...

Originally posted by: Payal_156
What a twist sara ji...!!
roshni back!!!
arjun ne riya ko kyu kyun ni??? shocking!!
shreetu n rathod i loved their concern for riya...
riya resigning emotional update..
she is pregnant n arjun dnt knw abt dis!!!!!
Hw roshni saved????
arjun mother killed by sikandar hw n why ????

jaldi se ye secret reveal krna...
all d best fr ur vivas!!
rock them..!!

Arjun ne Riya ko nahi roka coz he was too numb to react...

Thank you...

Roshni saved will be revealed in next part.. 😊

Originally posted by: grad2011
very very nice plzz do update soon!!!!

Thank you.. Will surely do..

Originally posted by: sravz23
hey its wonderfl.plzzz do write more

Yea ill.. Thanks

Originally posted by: M.V.Kohli007
Hey dear very nyc..

plz update soon & PM me.😊

Thank you.. Will surely do so.. (:

Originally posted by: arul01
that was superb! riya left to delhi! what is going to happen? isn't arjun going to do anything to save his marriage? he also as the right to know abt his child but thinking abt riya... i agree with what riya has done... she needs time to clear her head... anybody would react the same riya had if he were to bring the first wife back to the house... please update soon! i just can't wait to know what is gonna happen in their life!

Thank you dear... Riya will tell him... Just wait for some more time... 😊

Originally posted by: littlebrat
hey its awesome...

truely emotional this is unfair with riya...and how come roshni come back from death??????

but like it😊

Thank you.. You gotta wait to know how Roshni came back 😉

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94
Great update. I can't wait to read more! I'm glad that at least Riya has Rathod.

Thank you... Yea Rathod is very concerned about Riya...

Originally posted by: Pisces_Gurl
Nyc story...keep it up..good attemp..plzz pm wen update..

Thank you dear...

Originally posted by: Leki
i'm feeling terrible for both... hw do she xpct Arjun to call her whn she herslf hv kept her identity secret... Poor Arjun watshis fault??? yeah i knw he dnt tell her the reason of bringing bck Roshini bt still... hope dey both unite soon... Riya s realy taking big risk... hope she vl b fyn... continue whn u r free...

Hi...

Arjun needs to ateast call her up once.. He has closed himself in his shell.. Once he opens up, atleast calls out for Riya, she will be back...

I know.. No fault of Arjun or Riya.. Destiny plays its own game...

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti
Hey ...
Amazing update :)
Love the bond b/w Rathod n Riya ...
I feel really bad for Arjun , riya n roshni :(
All the best for your next exam :)

Hi.. Thanks...

They will meet soon...

Originally posted by: arul01
love riya and her confidence! it's good that though she is hurt... she is still strong to look after herself and her baby! i hope all will be well... some more she is getting involved into sikandar when arjun is not with her to protect her and baby... that makes me a bit worried for her... please update soon! just can't wait to read more!

She is a strong lady...

I know.. Lets see if something happens or Arjun comes to save her...

Ill cont soon.. Dont worry..

Originally posted by: anu91
Nice part dr i cant bear the separation of arjun and riya...
I want riya back in arjun life even he didnt knw abt riya's pregnance i feel so bad for arjun and riya...
Best wishes for ur next viva...
Come soon with next part soon...

Thank you.. They will meet soon... 😊

Originally posted by: ariyaFan
OMG your 1 liners are too gud
There was no "Samjhe ya Samjhaon" , "Kuch toh choot raha hain."... Everything was Samjh jana and Choota toh pakad lena..
Mujhe banglore ka raasta pata hai Riya, tumhare ghar ka washroom ka nahi.."
😆

This was one the best comment i got.. Thank you so much... 😊

Originally posted by: Payal_156
Again a excellent update dear..
loved it too..
quite emotional...
fb of arjun n his mother n roshni made me cry..!
Hate sikandar d most...
riya n arjun sherni fbs was very nice..!
Arjun rembering ria..wow!!!
me too eagerly waiting that hw roshni saved??
hope my guess wasnt right that roshni turn into evil..!!
Grt...!!
adb for ur finals...
rock it!!

Hi.. Thank you... Lets see if Roshni is evil or not...

He remembers her.. Finally

Thank you dear... .

Originally posted by: Leki
emotional update... felt bad for Arjun and his mom... Sikki😡 feel lik strangling him... even i want answers hw ws Roshni saved nd whr ws she till nw???? update soon...

Thank you... 😊

I know Sikander... He is a criminal...

Everythin about Roshni will be revealed in the next part..

Originally posted by: Queen.Bee
emotional update!! arjun already had gone thru a lot!!! roshini ki chakkar kya hai.. how she escaped that?? i just hope roshini wont come between ariya.. n also arjun meet riya soon!! update soon!!

I know.. Arjun already had gone thru a lot...

How she escaped, will be revealed in the next part...

Yea they will meet soon..

Originally posted by: shrutisweety
now i have read all the parts
i felt it emotional
i was crying
it was so heart touching
i liked the plot of story
continue soon
plz send me also pm

Thank you... Yea ill send u a PM...

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ipkknd-fan

@ipkknd-fan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Just read all 4 parts cant wait for the next updates
Plz pm me the updates :)

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Miss Sara

@Samaira32

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Hey Guyz,.. Thank you for ua lovely comments.. Without much bak bak of mine - here you go with the next part of Dard - E - Tanhayii

Part 5

Aye Mere Dil Yaha

Tu Akela Nahi

Aur Bhi Hain Bahut

Gham Ke Maare Hue

Arjun reaches home and he calls out Roshni.. This was the first time he talked to roshni after 4 months..

"Roshni,?"

"Arjun... Tum"

"Roshni, mujhe kuch baat karni hain tumse.."

"Kaho na Arjun, kya baat hain.."

"Us din kya hua tha.."

"Arjun, woh din jo tumne dikha usse kuch aur hua tha..."

"Woh toh mujhe pata chal gaya Roshni... Aur bhi kuch hain jo mujhe janna hain.."

"Arjun, yeh baat tumhare liye janna bahut zaroori hain.. Jis din Sikander ne mujhpar hamla kiya tha us se ek mahina pehle, jab uska case chal raha tha tab uske aadme mujhse mile the... Us din mujhse yeh baat kahi thi - agar mujhe tumhari jaan pyaari hain toh mujhe tumhe gumraah karna hoga.. Main bahut darr gayi thi. .Mujhe samajh nahi aaya isliye maine tumse jhoot kaha aur tumhare sare eveidence ko maine hi khatam kiya tha jiski wajeh se tum court mein Sikander ke khilaf kuch bhi proove nahi kar sake.. Lekin, jab judges hi uske saath mile hue the, toh tumhe court jaane ki zaroorat hi nahi padi.. Woh case khatam ho gaya tha.. .."

"Aur saboot.."

"Maine jala diye tha..."

"Mujhe bata nahi sakti thi tum.."

"Arjun, saboot se zyada mujhe tumhari zindagi pyaari thi.."

"Haan Roshni, uske baad kya hua tha.."

"Sikander choot gaya aur phir uski taraf se koi khabar nahi thi... Us din main hospital se waapas aa rahi thi... "

"Hospital kyun gayi thi tum...?"

"Kuch tests karwane gayi thi.."

"Kaunse tests..?"

"Arjun, mujhe hospital se ghar tak Sukander follow kar raha tha... Jaise hi main ghar aaya tha woh bhi mere saath andar aaya... ""

Flashback ..

"Tum kaun ho..? Yaha kya kar rahe ho..?"

"Mujhse pooch rahi hain main kaun hu..?" Oye zara bata ise main kaun hu..?"

"Yeh Sikander hain..."

"Kuch yaad aaya Roshniii Suryakant .. nahi nahi Roshni Arjun Suryakant Rawte..?"

"Kya chahiye aapko..?"

"Mujhe tera pati chahiye.. Isse pehle tu kuch bole, agar tujhe vidhwa ban kar nahi rehna hain toh wohi kar jo main kehta hoon.."

Flashback ends... Roshni continues..

"Sikander ne mujhe sirf haantho pe maara... Isliye main uss halat main thi tumhare aane ke baad... Aur jab tum behosh huye the, usne aag laga di.. Aur uske kisi aadmi ko waha chod kar woh mujhe le gaya... Arjun main tumse ek baat chupayi.. Jab Sikander ne mujhe tumse door rehne ko kaha tha - mein pregnant thi... Haan, Arjun mein maa banne waali thi.."

"Banne wali thi matlab..?"

"Main delhi shift ho chuki thi, tab mujhe pata chala ki main pregnant hoon.. Maine tumhe contact karne ki koshish par Sikander ne mujhpar kadi nazar rakhi hui thi.. Mujhe dar tha woh tumhe kuch kardega kyunki use mere pregnancy ke baare mein pata tha.. Maine us se bachne ki bahut koshish ki, isse pehli ki woh hamare bachche tak pahunch pata maine apna abortion kar waliya...

"Kya, Roshni tumne Sikander ke darr se apna..."

He couldnt even say the word.. It hurt him...

"Maine sab kuch tumhare liye kiya... Road par kahi par main kisi ke gaadi ke saamne aagayi... Mujhe jisne bachaya tha woh koi Mr. Shekhwat tha... Usne mujhe apne paas rehne diye... Kuch din tak mujhe hamesha Sikander ke hone ka darr rehta tha, lekin guzarte guzarte main woh sab bhool gayi... Maine bahut koshish ki lekin mujhe kuch yaad nahi tha.. Waqt ke guzarte main sab bhool gayi thi..."

"Agar sab bhool gayi thi Roshni, toh yaha waapas kyun aayi Roshni... ?"

"Arjun, kya tumhe meri yaad nahi aayo thi..?"

"Roshni, agar yeh sawaal main tumse poochu toh..? Tumne mujhe pehle kuch nahi bataya.. Kam se kam mujhe apni pregnancy ke baare mein bataya hota Roshni.. Kya mera us par koi haq nahi tha.. Kya mere aone bachche par koi haq nahi tha Roshni..? Main har cheez maaf karta lekin tumne us masoom ki jaan Sikander ke dar se leli?? Tum meri patni ho, main darr ka hamesha samna kiya aur tum dar gayi?? Mein tumhare saath marna gawara karta lekin tumse doori mujhse bardaasht nahi hoti.."

"Ab main yaha hoon?"

"Ab tumhe Sikander ka darr nahi hain?"

"Nahi Samar, mujhe bharosa hain tum par.. Mujhe tum kuch nahi hone de sakte.."

"jab sab kuch ho gaya Roshni, toh ab main kya kar sakta hoon Ek min Samar?? Yeh kaun hain?."

She feels dizzy and is fainting.. Arjun holds her lays her on the bed.. Roshni seems to mumble something... Arjun tries to come closer to her... He hears her mumbling the name "Samar" in her sleep.. Very much confused with who this Samar is and why is Roshni taking his name he is about to get up when he sees Roshni's phone light flashing...

He goes near to find the name Samar flashing on the screen..

Arjun recieves the phone and finds a guy's voice

"Hello Rosh, Hello.."

"Rosh..? "

"Oh toh aap Arjun Rawte hain..?"

"Jee, aur aap?"

"Main Dr. Samar Shekhawat.. "

"Oh i c... Roshni was feelin dizzy and then suddenly she fell asleep."

"Oh its fine.. Let her rest..."

"Dr. kya hua Roshni ko..?"

"Main yeh sab aapko phone par nahi bata sakta..."

"Then can you meet me..?"

"Yes i will meet you.. Where can I meet you..?"

"You were in Delhi, ryt?"

"No, I am here since few months.. Ill come and meet you... Now??"

"Yes now, at my home.."

"Your address..?"

"Ill text you, Bye"

"Bye"

Arjun texts his address.. Arjun makes a cup of coffee and is waiting for Samar... Soon Samar reaches Arjun's place.. It was late in the night and Arjun was not intrested in offering anything to Samar..

"Samar, kya hua tha Roshni ki zindagi main..?"

Samar understood he needed to be frank here... He couldnt beat around the bush here..

"Mr. Rawte, Roshni ki haalat theek nahi hain... Woh mujhe mili thi kuch saal pehle, jab woh meri gaadi ke saamne aayi thi.. Jab tak main pahuncha woh behosh padi thi... Maine use apne ghar le aaya tha, aur jab maine check kiya to use high fever tha... And the only thing she was saying was Arjun.. I gave her an IV and intezaar kar raha tha uske hosh main aane ka... Jab woh hosh main aayi, toh she imagined me as Arjun... Due to the effect of sedatives, she fell asleep again.."

Arjun closed his fists in anger... He felt helpless...

"Maine isse naam aur address poochne ki koshish ki.. Lekin mujhe sirf iska naam pata chala - Roshni... Mujhe kya pata tha Arjun Rawte ki biwi hain.. I noticed she was in depression... She was anxious, restless, weak and loss of appetite.. Sometimes suicidal tendencies... When i tried talkin to her, she seemed in her own world - unresponsive... Sometimes, she would cook food, serve it to me but never had a bite.. After forcing her, she had a juice and one slice of bed.. When i told her, i will take her to hospital - she refused.. She actually threatned me "Main chali jaungi agar aap mujhe hospital le jaye.. Aap toh hote nahi ho din bhar, main kahi bhi chali jaungi.. Samjhe ya Samjhao"

Ek patient hote hue bhi she had strong words... She sometimes had body pains, headaches and without asking me she would take a Paracetamol when she needed.. Slowly, she was trying to adjust in my house.. She knew my timings.. I used to take her out.. The lake would make her smile..Those were the only times she used to smile.. She used sit for hours infront of the beach as if conversing with the sea.. Then she would ask me to take her home... She cried for hours together - again she tried to get up the next morning welcoming the day hoping for some sort of happiness..

She was in depression... She needed time and love.. Those would be the best healers with some Anti - depressants... It went fine with her.. Within a year - she was recovering... Due to some nosy neighbours, she felt upset that she was a burden and i was sympathising with her due to her condition...

This is very important for u to know Mr. Rawte - that i marreid Roshni then. I asked her, if i marry you Roshni, will you still feel that you are a burden?

And she agreed to marry me...

Yes, i agree it was to keep her mind out of these stuff and a speedy recovery for her but in the course of time i fel in love with her... She too harbored some feelings towards me coz she didnt reject my proposal and as well shifted my room... "

Arjun was speechless.. Too many shocks in a day were difficult to manage.. How he wished Riya to be beside him... He needed a support... He felt so alone... After a while, he gathered courage and asked Samar..

"Woh yaha kaise aayi.."

"It was a normal morning for us, she got up and preparing breakfast and while serving me breakfast (rather feeding me - he didnt want Arjun to know that he and Roshni were living like a couple) that she saw the newspaper.. It was a photo of you along with the ETF team for solving the case of the corrupt Minister... The moment she saw the newspaper, she stared at the photo in shock..

I asked Rosh " Aisa kya dekhliya yaar jo itna ghoor rahi ho photo ko.."

"Arjun, Arjun Rawte..."

"Arjun Rawte?? Woh famous police wala, kya hua use"

"Arjun. Arjun"

When suddenly it clicked to me that Roshni was associated with someone called Arjun probably her husband.. I was as well shocked that the Arjun Rosh kept on saying was Arjun Rawte... She fainted and after regaining conscious, she asked permission to come and meet you...

"Mujhe ek baar Arjun ke paas jane do, main vaada karti hoon mein waapas aajaungi.. Pls samar mujhe Arjun se milna hain... "

She was so desperate to meet you that i had to agree to go and see you.. She tried contacting you but ua phone was switched off.. She called up Sameer Rathore and informed him of her arrival in Mumbai.. Then both of us came here and she went to Sameer's place... After 3 - 4 days when there was no news of her, i contacted her - she tol me that she met you and you needed her thats why she couldnt come.. She promised to come.. She used to talk to me on phone.. After a month or so, she asked me to meet her outside her school.. She was quite happy to see me and from then, she used to meet me daily.. And till date she meets me or we talk on phone.."

Arjun realised his folly of getting Roshni here without asking her and how he kept Riya away from her happiness.. He held his face in his forehead and fresh tears poured out of his eyes.. Arjun saw Roshni standing near the door wiping her tears.. He went towards her, bend down and was crying

"Arjun yeh kya kar rahe ho tum.?"

"Roshni, maine tumhe woh saza di hain jiski tum zimmedaar nahi ho.. Im sorry.."

"Arjun, mera yaha aana hi ghalat tha.. Maine Riya ke saath aur tumhare saath ghalat kiya.."

"Shhh Roshni.. tum ne kisi ke saath ghalat nahi kiya.. Maine hi tum dono ke saath bura kiya.. Mere wajeh se tumne apni zindagi ki saari khushi chin gayi aur meri wajeh se Riya ne apne basi basayi duniya chod di"

"Nahi Arjun, ghalti tumhari nahi Sikander ki hain.. Tum aur Riya usse mera badla lekar rahoge.. Milkar karna hoga tumhe yeh kaam.. "

"Haan Roshni, theek kaha tumne.. Ab mujhe Riya se koi alag nahi kar sakta.. Koi bhi nahi.."

Arjun wiped his tears and took Samar's hand and placed it in Roshni's hand.. "Samar, tumhari amaanat.."

Wiping his tears, he left from there giving the couple some privacy...

Edited by Samaira32 - 12 years ago

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Anu

@anu91

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Wow thank god roshni got married
superb update...
Come soon waiting for ariya moment

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Queen.Bee

@Queen.Bee

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

woooa!! too much to handle in a day.. so roshini was pregnent then.. she didnt die.. she suffered dome amnesia.. she married someone else?? y she felt dizzy?? she is pregnant?? if she was living with someone else what was the need of all that drama.. "aapki roshini waapas aagayi" fosh!! feels so angry at her.. n also when he slapped riya n let her go away?? she didnt say a word... i dont feel any sympathy for this roshini.. usse wapas aana hi nahi chahiye thi... both moved on.. then y suddenly came back n made a rolercoaster.. poor riya!!

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Queen.Bee

@Queen.Bee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#70

samaira u should delete some of ur pms so u can receive new ones.. ur inbox is full i cant send u a pm...

n ur ans for ur pm.. no no... its not like that.. roshini didnt say a word when riya left.. n also when arjun slapped her.. i didnt like that.. thats all.. i just wrote what i felt.. sorry if i offended u... i liked it... no i loved the update... its that poor riya suffered a lot!!

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