Ariya OS:Dn't Dare To Ignore Me(Challange)Complete - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
awesome update :) loved it
loved shree, chotu and riya's conversation.. it was so funny...
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
Wao gra8 update manu,
OOOhhh poor riya ,ignoring arjun,
n ab vo arjun ke sath nahi rathor ke sath sath field per jana chahati lolll
n hahahhhaaa
hahhhaaa
poor shree bechara,
hahaaa riya n chotu ne acha nahi kiya,
ohhh lolll arjun ko bhi pherk pad raha haiii
per kab samjhegen
plz conti soonnn


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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
Oh shree was so funny
Riya is ignoring Arjun so sweet
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
wow great update...
waiting for next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
aww riya waz really tryng hard too ignore him itz tough...
shree is really veryyy funnyyy yaaar 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
it was superb update loved it plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
Riya is ignoring Arjun so sweet
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
hey!!!!
read all updates in 1 go...
amazing!!!!

loved the last part...
it was amazing!!!!
riya shree chotu...the trio is just awesome!!!!👏
update soon!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
PART 5
After lunch all back to work. Within discussion they find more clues , so Rathod sends Arjun , Riya & Shree on crime spot . As soon as Rathod announces this Riya shot up her head & she look at Shree , Shree understands , Arjun stand up & goes up , grab SUV keys . Shree & Riya silently follow him. Arjun take driving seat & waiting for Riya , because he knows whn he is on driving seat she always try to seat front besides him. But tod she open back door & seats thr , while Shree seat besides him . Arjun starts d car , while driving he freuently look at mirror to check her , bt he does nt see her , he look back & found she exactly seating Shree's back , means corner seat , so he can't see her , bt still Arjun ignore it thinking about her health.
They reach crime spot & start thr investigation , Shree takes some snaps , while Ariya busy in searching some clues , Arjun succeded , finally he got some important clues & he turn to see Riya who also got somthing , Arjun look at her & lost in her , he sees Riya seating on her knees and collect somthing in evidence bag, & mumbled somthing herself , when she is bending to ground her hairlocks comes infront of her eyes , she put them back in against her ear , each time whn she is bending her hairlocks comes to her face , Arjun sees she get irritated , he smile to himself , "really she is mad." he murmued & unknowgliy goes to her & stand besides her , Arjun bends down & hears wht she mumbling herself , " Oh ho , my hair uhhhgg , why u disturb , cn't you see i am working ( and tuck her hair to behind her ear , and agin bends to collect evidence , bt again her hair come infront of her face) Ohhh tom mrng first i"will be go to Parlour and change my haircut (she think sumthing & touches her hair with dirty hands ), (she wears gloves , bt her gloves r ditry because of soil ) (Suddenely she look at her hairs & her her gloves , bcoz of gloves her hair silghtly goes dirty ) Mumma , ummm nw i have to wash my hair agin .
She lost in herself , she did not notice Arjun seat besides her & smile at her antics , he immedatly snatch evidence bag from her hand & orderd her , " Just drop your findings in bag , i will hold it for you ." Riya suudenely look at voice dirction and found Arjun is very close to her , she senses his hot breath on her face , she look into his eyes & found care , she lost in his eyes , and Arjun lost in her face , he slowly tug her hairlocks behind her hair and slightly dust her cheeck , bcoz he found some soil on her cheeck , because of tht Riya comes out of her trance & immedatly stand up & loudly says , Shree i think we gather enough , shall we go to office.?" Shree look at Arjun who still bend thr , he immedatly stand up & started waking maybe his ego hurt , Shree & Riya silently follow him. Arjun turn around & sees Riya , Riya also look at him , Arjun feels sumthing different in her eyes , he instatnly recognize ths feeling , yes , bt why , why , what happened , why her eyes shows helpness , why she look so glommy , why her eyes tell different story tod , everyday whn she look at me i feel she try to find somthing in my eyes , and tod she just ignore me , why.. sumthing is thr . Arjun thinks to himself . Shree notices this & goes to him , "Sir sir ... " Arjun look at him & again look at Riya she now avoding his gaze. They silently seat in car & goes back to office. Rathod examine clues , after 1 day they solved case . 3 days paased Arjun notices change behaviour of Riya , she ignore him , whenever they goes to field , she go wit Rathod r Ayesha , and when she paired with him Chotu r Shree always there with them , So she instead of helping Arjun she helping them. And Ariya are alone on field she does not speak much , in car she chose to see outside wrold throgh window r writing sumthing in her diary in field she just questions vicitms r suspects.Arjun notices one thing when he goes to near her , he feels she feel uncomfortable her body language change , she immedatly goes to Rathod , Shree r Chotu. Arjun gets irritated , "how dare she , now i have to look into ths matter , why she avoding me , damn don't she know i don't like whn she ignore me , i feel bad , i dn't like whn she field with Rathod , i really feels sumthing different whn she is wit me by body , but her soul is not with me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
Hey ...
That was fab :)
So finally Arjun realized that something is wrong with Riya ... :(
Can't wait for the next update :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Arjun decided tod whatever will be happen , he have to talk her , he goes early to office & requested Rathod for leave , Rathod aggries. Nw Arjun patiently waiting for her , she come after half hour , as sson as Arjun sees her he goes near to her & tell her , Come with me , as per his thinking she ignore & start to walk and Riya doing some , Arjun hold her armwrist & pulled her towards him , Riya dn't angry me , come with me & he litteraaly dragged her with him. Riya feels he is angry , she try to free her armwrist from his hold , bt his hold his tight , Riya feel d pain , " Sir sir , aahhh my hand , leave me , sir , plz." She pleads to him , but Arjun ignore her. Thy come near Arjun's car , he opened it & throw Riya in car & shut d door , he himself seat on drving seat & starts d car , Riya try to understand what is happing , & try to think what will be his nxt move , she looke around & shocked , they r in nt in city , they are on a fort . Arjun stop d car & furiously open car door & climbed down for car & gopes to Riya , he opend d door for her , Riya is so scared so she does not dare to climbed down from car , arjun wait for a minute , after minute he bend down & lift Riya in his arms , he slowly take her out from car & place her on car's bonet . Arjun put his hands on bonet & locked her in between his hands , so she cn't run . Arjun look at her , Riya found so much anger & hurt in his eyes , she put her hands on bonet unknowglly she keep her one hand on his . Arjun feels her touch bt he ignore it , tod he only want his answers , he have to find it. He look into her eyes , she is so scared , she try to look other side bt Arjun also turn his face on that dircetion & again look into her eyes. thy bth lost in each others eyes , thr eyes speak .
Arjun : Why , why Riya , why are you avoiding me ?
Riya : Arjun , im helpless .
Arjun : Don't ignore me , you know i dn't like this . , Why you are helpness , tell me is there any problem with you , plz talk to me , i love to see your smile , i am geting mad when you ignore me , scared at my presence , why Riya why,
Riya : i don't know Arjun , plz ... how do you know taht i have some problems .
Teri Har Zhalak Mai Dikhe Hai Sab ,
Tere Naam Ko Hi Dua Kahe ...
Tu Kahe Mujhe Ya Na Kahe ,
Tu Peheunch Gaya Meri Ruh Tak ,
Ab Tujhe Kaise Judaa Rahe...
Riya lost in his eyes & she find sme feeling in his eyes , tht she always wanted to see ,
Teri Har Zhalak Keheti Hai Sab ,
Tu Kahe Mujhe Ya Na Kahe ,
Tu Peheunch Gaya Meri Ruh Tak ,
Ab Tujhe Kaise Judaa Rahe...
( i does not use full song here)
Riya lost her control & hugs Arjun tightly . Arjun also hug her back . Riya slips frm bonet & about to faal whn Arjun hold her tight.
Arjun : Dn't you know how much i miss you , how much i worried about you , you stupid girl ,
Riya only carssing his hair & enjyng his care , ys for her ths is not scolding anymore , she feels his care , his love for her , he scared for her.
Arjun parted her & look at her & found her eyes feel wit tears ,
Arjun : What haapend now , hey (he slowly asks her , while wiping her tears)
Riya : hmm (nodded her head in negative manner)
Arjun : Riya... (he says loudly )
that means she have to give him answers.
Arjun , i ...i think iam not gud ... gud for you.. means you are smart , handsome , tall and iam dumb , fool . I can't understand anything , always ddid & does mistake in my wrks , you are perfect. But i am not suited you , (with tht she bite her lip & look at him , he only raise his one eyebrow) (she knows she have to admit tod) Yes , i am in love , i love you , dn't know from when , how i fall for you , i always draming about you , i always wish we spent whole life toghtern , Bt after Ayesha Mam's ... (she stops for a minute , lower her gaze , bt start again) i mean she is good for you , she is exactly like you , same arrogance , same temper , and she is best. ( she stop & again look at him)
Arjun : Who told you this ? Riya are you understand what are you saying ? (he is angry on her , after hearing ths ) (he never expect this all behind her ignorance drama. )
Riya : I know all , i heard whn Rathod Sir & you talk about Ayesha mam & me .
Arjun : So , you are listeing our private talks huhh.
Riya : Sorry ( She slowly says)
Arjun : Ohh , You heard all ? (he questioned him)
Riya : umm no , i only heard tht you ws tld Sir tht i am not capable.
Arjun : Hmmm . thn you have to heard remaining . Riya yes i admit that i tld Rathod you are not capable for that training , bt Riya after that shocking saga we all know your value , your space in our's life , and i... means we all don't want to take risk agin , we can't afford to lost you. And most important You are still nt fully recovered , you still have weakness , and we all see ths . (he cupped her face) Riya you are too precious for me , i don't want to lose you like her . I am damn scared after that incident , it shakes me from core and i understands ... i ... ( he stop & chang d topic) You know Riya we are never leave you alone anywhere , on field me or Rathod always take care of you , looking at you silently . because we are worried. And who told you that you are not good , you are best in your work , nt only me but your Rathod Sir also admit that , he never praise you , bt still he acknowledge your wrok , your efforts. And you know i never praise anyone , actually i am little khudus in that.
Riya : But you prise Ayesha.
Arjun : I am not praising her , i only give my opinion to Rathod , who wants it.( suddenely his face lit up & he ask her)hmmm now can i can understand the real reason , you feel jelous on her, right.. ( he ask her)
Riya : (taken aback ) n... nooo... no nt like that , but i feel bad ( she give her answer)
Edited by M.V.Kohli007 - 12 years ago

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