FF: Fire and Water 2 (Chapter 28-B on Pg. 18)

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DivineDarkness

@DivineDarkness

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Fantastic updates...

wow its getting intresting... Hope everyone vl b safe...

Rathore's introgation was cool... loved the way he did it...

Ariya's understanding is amazing...

So is Achariya the traitor????

is the club thing a trap or is it correct lead??? hope it s...

Shree this time also he finds time for his funs...

Amazingly written... update soon...

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nikki08

@nikki08

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

heya!!!

this one was superb...

was just waiting ki kab update hoga...

and yup it was worth waiting!!!

anyway...

loved it...

rathod's interrogation was just mindblowing...😉

loved it wen shree caught them red handed...

best was shree's dialogue..."main itna bhi na samaj nai hoon!!"

haha..🤣

could imagine the grin on arjun's face!!!

lovely!!!!😊

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littlebrat

@littlebrat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

thanks alot for coming back with a bang

nice and long update...enjoyed each and every bit of it

lastly the cute and small ariya convos really nice

take care and update soon

littlebrat😉

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856040

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Oh Hope arjun is safe

case is getting more complictaed

lovely update

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Arjun & riya's Conversation 😊.So Simple but beautiful with so much of emotions.

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

amazing parts dear...

The mystery, the locations, the villains were all superbly portrayed!

So all traitors along the path...and Sikkandar is like some venomous spider weaving huge traps for ETF...Oh no...kuch bura na ho...

dance bar and Arjun's get up reminded me of Aisha's entry episode! aww! 😉

i hope they come back safe...fingers crossed 😕

haan Riya ke liye, humaare liye Arjun ko waapas sahi salaamat aana hi hoga...

Btw, ARIYA scene was cute! loved them!

Cont soon!

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Sumbul Qaiser

@sumbulqaiser

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

buhat wait karwa tum nay , after a long time such an amazing update nice mindblowing update , it's too long but interesting update

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Niki

@luvzindagi

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Wow Rose,
Really interesting case and Mind blowing update
And just like Riya I am also worried for Arjun now

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Geeta

@Geeta.R

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

DIII!!!!!!!!! Thank you so much for an amazing long update! It was an absolute joy to read! The love and worry portrayed was amazing... Shukriya aur please update karne, jab time mile tab :-) xxx

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573339

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#60

fantastic update :) loved it

thank you so much for writing such a long update :)

loved arjun's concern for riya when she went to check that slum :) and loved how worried riya is for arjun's safety :)

loved rathore's way of interrogating

oh god shree is hilarious 😆 he caught them red handed

the case is getting very interesting

hope arjun and shree come back safely

thanks for the PM

continue soon

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