FF: Fire and Water 2 (Chapter 28-B on Pg. 18)

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Moumi

@Moumimon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

👍🏼Superb👍🏼
Awsome..awsome..awsome...😳
Just mindblowing..You are a too good writer...😊
Arjun_Riya_Shree_Rathore_chotu was just amaizing...😛
Mystery was fabulous..really well writen story..just love it dear...👏
How can you portrayed things like that..its so real..just mindblowing...👏
Update soon dear..egarly waiting for your next update..post it soon dear..😳

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

superb update...!!!👏

ol d parts were amazing...!!!⭐️

jst lvd dem...!!!

oo ariya r so cute...!!!😳

cant wait fr d nxt part...!!!!

continue soon...!!!

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srividhya68

@srividhya68

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

loved d way u writing d case...

i like d way u write each n every thing precisely ...

i think Acharya is also involved ...lets see whether it s true or not

ria went to chk out d slum all alone

Ria 's concern for arjun was evident in last chapter ...

Waiting to know how case turns ...

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shruti

@shrutisweety

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

fantastic updates
ariyas understanding was amazing
continue soon

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Gorasiya Priya

@Priya_Gorasiya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Hey ...

The update was just fantastic ...

The way Arjun was worried for her when she went to that slum was so cute..

when Riya was tensed for arjun n on the other hand Arjun didn't want Riya to be scared coz of his safety was fab But love the way Riya accepted the fact that Arjun is a cop n he needs to to live life on the edge n he'll be back for her

and Awww Shree is so cute ... Poor thing momentarily forgot that Arjun was right there coz of his over-excitement to catch his friend red handed was sooo cute🤣

Love the way Riya made sure that Arjun goes away with a smile ... And i really hope that arjun and Shree would be fine and back soon

Awesome👏 👏 👏

the part was really good

waiting for next part

update soon

Edited by 12pr - 12 years ago

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sana

@Luna92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

absolutely amazing...awesome..fab...👏
loved it..👍🏼
loved every bit of ariya scenes...😳
and the case is realy very interesting..

thanx for the PM😊

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neeraja

@life93

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

hi dear it was a brilliant upadte...👍🏼...it was intresting, factful ,logical,...i wonder itna achha kaise likhte ho aap? loved shree riya convo...n ariya 😊...update soon

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yas23

@yas23

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

great update
loved the way arjun was worried about riya when she want to the slum alone
also loved riyas concern for arjun
continue soon

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neeraja

@life93

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

it was such an wonderful experience reading fire n water ...i must tell first time when read i just lost in raeding that i can visualise everything in front of me...then i think ki ek ek update mein har case ko itne acche detailed tarike se likha sach me debashish aur anshul sir ko pata chale to ek undercop mission hame dekhane ko milega hume arjun mein...serouly u re frerking awesome...👍🏼...fire n water 1 was my favorte pesonally cz i read it ur work 4 the first time love u valleryrose...n hope fire n water 2 will be more n more mysteroius funnyn romantic...update soon

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ValleryRose

@ValleryRose

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Posted: 12 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: life93
it was such an wonderful experience reading fire n water ...i must tell first time when read i just lost in raeding that i can visualise everything in front of me...then i think ki ek ek update mein har case ko itne acche detailed tarike se likha sach me debashish aur anshul sir ko pata chale to ek undercop mission hame dekhane ko milega hume arjun mein...serouly u re frerking awesome...👍🏼...fire n water 1 was my favorte pesonally cz i read it ur work 4 the first time love u valleryrose...n hope fire n water 2 will be more n more mysteroius funnyn romantic...update soon

Thank you so much..! You have know idea how precious these compliments are for me.. They give me the strength to write!!!

Anshul sir aur Debashish sir.. mere FF ko padhna..? Bahut hi bada(in short, impossible) sapna hain.. LOL..

Par agar ek mauka mil jaye tho kise khushi nahin hogi...! 😆

Thank you so much dear!!!! 😊

I also thank each and every reader of FF: F&W for liking my work and supporting me throughout!!! 🤗

Edited by ValleryRose - 12 years ago