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Posted: 13 years ago
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this is ur imagination. So, u should only write it. If any other writes...it may not be the same.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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give it a try dear...i had read your previous ff...it was good...
so what are you waiting for...i am ready to read and help you too...

please start soon...loved the concept also...nice thought...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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try it dear
waiting to read ur ff
i read ur last updates they were
amazing

i am their to help u
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: shrutisweety

try it dear
waiting to read ur ff
i read ur last updates they were
amazing

i am their to help u

thank u🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
bas likdo yaar!!!! i'm waiting here!
haaa don't forget to pm me! ok
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Many character's will enter into my ss as it moves n..but before that few character's intro here..for this case..PALAK sharma ..SAPNA ahuja..JHILMIL parek..u will get to know more about them as my SS proceeds.

PART-1

SCENARIO Sapna's mahendi ceremony

It was the most beautiful day of her life and might be the most awaited day...since her childhood while playing with her doll she always use to imagine this day...the most cherished day of her life.
Whole hall is decorated with lime green ballons...beautiful flowers..lots of lighting...she was extremely happy seeing her home, which was looking like a beautiful bride in it self.

SAPNA: "jaise maine socha tha aj ab kuch waise he lag raha hai..ek khoobsurat sapne jaise"


"sapna ji sapna dekhna band ki jiye,yeh sab hakhikhat hai" said palak.


[Who just reached there while sapna was busy in her imgination]


[palak is cute..bubbly chashmish girl..very innocent and beautiful..sapna's childhood friend]

SAPNA:"palak ki bachi tum ab aayi ho?itna late?main kabse wait kar rahi hu tera"


PALAK: "hello?main late nai hu..wo jhilmil ki waise late hogayi"


SAPNA: "kaha hai wo,tere saat nai aayi"

PALAK:"wo mr.india hai jo aati toh tum dekhi nahi?ofcourse nai aayi..makeup kar rahi hai subha se..tum toh janti ho na usey,mujhse wait nai hua so main chali aayi"


"jhoot bikul jhoot"said jhilmil.


JHILMIL: "sapna..maine late nahi ki...mujhe bus 5mint lage wo toh iss phalak ki wajah se"..

SAPNA: "bus bus main tum dono ko janti,mujhe bewakoof matbanao.."

[they all laughed and starting hugging each other...while jhilmil asked]


JHILMIL TO SAPNA: "Aashu nahi aayi"[she means ayesha]

SAPNA: "tum jaanti hona jhilmil wo nahi aayegi.."

PALAK: "sunah hai usne eft join ki hain"



JHILMIL: "ha janti hu..jabse uski mom ki death hui hai wo toh jaise apni duty ko he apni zindagi bana baiti hai."


SAPNA: "do saal beet gayi aur wo aj b wahi hai..uss pal mein kaid hokar rahegayi hai wo"


PALAK: "usey cal karna shayad wo aajaaye? "



SAPNA: "par uska number?"


JHILMIL: "Ek mint mere pas hai.."

EFT OFFICE 10.pm



whole team is about to leave..todays case has just ended..


Ayesha reached her falt..


Her phone started ringing...


She is shocked to hear that voice after a very long time


JHILMIL: "hello?"


AYESHA: "ha bolo?"


JHILMIL: "ashu?kaisi hain tu"


AYESHA: "hmm"


JHILMIL: "janti hu ki tum humse baat nai karna chahati..but bus do mint"


AYESHA: "jo kahena hai jaldi kaho"


JHILMIL: "wo aj sapna ki mahendi hai..hum sab yaha hai aur agar tum b aati toh"


AYESHA: "sorry main nahi aasakti..."


JHILMIL: "main janti hu tum mumbai me he ho..agar bus kuch pal ke liya aajaogi toh.."


AYESHA: "maine kaha na main busy ho"

JHILMIL disconnected the call and thought to herself"pata tha mujhe tum mana karogi"


EFT Conference room

RATHOD: "TEAM ek zaroori case hai isliye tum sabko itni raat gaaye bulana pada..VARUN ahuja ka suicide case hai.. "


Ayesha was shocked to hear that name,..yes varun ahuja was none other than sapna's father


Edited by aliya_begh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
haha...allu is it ur first ss ?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18

ohh.. wow.. gr8..

continue soon..

would love to read

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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
Interesting, I am waiting for more, do continue.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
Aliya dear
loved d title
thank u fr continuing it.,
superb concept
new characters grt..
do cont soon..
thanx fr d pm dear..!

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