Ariya FF- REASON TO LIVE UPADED 09/11/13 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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heyyy...
don't quit...
its nice story and well written...
don't lose hope...
plzzz don't quit...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
hey dr dont quit...!!!
its awsum...!!!
loved it...!!!
plz continue...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Hey frineds i have decide to continue this story . How many of you want me to continue this one . Please comment.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
me want u to continue..

u know what when same person is checking if u updated or not again n again u visitor count increases.. so dont depend on it... 40 ppl likes ur work na.. u r awesome.. continue.. even if its only 10 ppl u have to continue on behalf of them..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Queen.Bee

me want u to continue..

u know what when same person is checking if u updated or not again n again u visitor count increases.. so dont depend on it... 40 ppl likes ur work na.. u r awesome.. continue.. even if its only 10 ppl u have to continue on behalf of them..

ok dear sure . Thanks a lot and lot for ur support. And sorry for the old outburst because u know this is my first story so i got some what emotional . I will update this one within this sunday i promise . Thanks again for your lovely support.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
continue it soon dr.

u r dong a great job.

update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: akanksha1371986

continue it soon dr.


u r dong a great job.

update soon.

thanks dear . Will continue soon . Love u for ur support:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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plz continue it yr...!!
its an awsum story...!!!
and plz update soon...!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: devildiva21

plz continue it yr...!!

</div><div>its an awsum story...!!!
and plz update soon...!!😊

thanks a lot dear will update this one within one hour .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter f
After one hour in the conference room. Arjun :shree did you get any information about sapna.
Shree: yes sir . She was a doctor in goa sir but she came to mumbai last week . Reason no one knows . But she went to delhi before two days to meet some one . But she returned in the same flight in which she went to delhi . Then she visited city hospital last night.
Arjun : what about her family ?
Shree: sir she was an orphan . She stayed in love and care orphanage in delhi after her studies she went to goa.
Arjun : and who is that boy in that photo?
Shree : sir his name is samrat . He studied in the same school where riya studied . And now he was in france . I have sent him this message he will be here this eve.
Arjun : ok shree inform rathore to get ready we must go to city hospital now .
Shree: ok sir . In rathore's cabin .
Rathore was in deep thoughts about riya's last words to him . A lone tears escaped from his eyes .
Shree : may i come in sir ?
Rathore : yea come in shree . [ he wiped the tears but it was not unnoticed by shree] what is the matter shree ?
Shree:sir arjun sir asked to get ready for going to city hospital . Rathore: ok shree i will be in five minutes . Shree: sir please don't hide your feelings sir . I know sir how much you missing riya . You loved her as your own sister . We too missing her a lot sir . But instead of crying on remembering her loss . We can smile on remembering the days which we spend with her . That is what riya also want . She will not be happy if she watch us like this . [ shree had tears in his eyes ]
Rathore: you are right shree . We must make her happy . What she did was next to impossible for others . So we must make her proud. Now lets go to city hospital. In city hospital . Rathore : can we meet the chief doctor ? Nurse : sure sir he is in his cabin . You can meet him now .
Rathore : thank u . Inside the doctor's cabin .
Doctor : yes mr rathore . How can i help you ? Rathore: doctor did dr sapna khan come here last night .
Doctor : no . Btw who is this sapna khan ? Arjun : a doctor in goa and friend of riya. She came here last night and today morning she was murdered in her hotel room.
Doctor : but sir . She didn't visit me last night.
Arjun : where are you last night?
Doctor : i was out of town last night?
Arjun : means ?
Doctor :i went to meet my friend dr kumar in delhi .
Arjun : ok doctor thanks for ur co operation .
We are leaving now . Rathore : no my investigation is now yet over .
Arjun . It's over rathore lets go now . PLEASE . [rathore was shocke to hear please from arjun . So he understood that something is wrong so he went out with arjun ]
In the suv
Rathore: what is the matter raute? Is anything wrong ? Arjun : yes rathore. First we must talk with samrat then we should proceed .
Precape:
samrat : i think riya is alive !!!
Shree,arjun,rathore, chotu:what?.
Edited by Scarlettkevin - 12 years ago

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