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Posted: 12 years ago
sorry couldn't post yesterday... infact I just wrote this part now...
forgive the mistakes...

CHAPTER 12:

Hell Fire Disco: 10 15 pm:

"disco dewane'" the music was in air' all were enjoying to their maximum. She was so happy' "at last he said I love you" she looked at him and the smile was killing her. She couldn't believe it. Its only 3 weeks sinse they had known. It was as if destiny itself brought him to her. Else would there be a chance of being drenched in drinks, because a stupid waiter couldn't find his way? Or her going out of the hall? And him lending his towel? Taking her to a secure place to change and him waiting outside for her. Yes' it was destiny' she came near her and huged him. He too hugged her back.

"jaan' bas bhi karo' thak jaogi' lets sit for a while." he said in her ears. "nahi Rohan' I want to dance the whole night' I am so happy. Its my best night'" he kissed his cheeks and she blushed. "please Sanuja' lets rest for a while" she couldn't deny his words. They sat down a while.

She was blushing by his looks. He touched her cheeks wth the finger tips and she clsed her eyes. A phone call broke their moment. "oh no' Pappa' just a minute Ro' I'll be back soon'" she ran outside the pub. "hey.. dad' sorry I'm late. Wo Aisha ke bday party mien hai' thodi late hoga'sorry'ya.. sure' I'll be back soon' love u too papa''" she ran back to him.

"sorry dad tha' jhoot bola meine ke Aisha ke bday party mien I hope unhe bura na lage.."

"hey its ok' I'll drop u home myself' k ?" she was so happy. "ab bas.. ye piyo' patha nahi kabse dance karne laga hai' thaka nahi hai kya?" she loved the concern in his voice.

"Ro' promise me you will love me forever." He was silent for a while. "of course jaan'" he smiled and she took sip of her favorite drink. he held her hands and was caressing it. She was feeling a bit dizzy.

"kya hua jaan? U alright?" "patha nahi Ro' chakkar aaraha hai'" he held onto her. "see, bathay thana meine ke zyaada dance math karo.. come lets go out of here." He held her by shoulder and went out. By the time they reached out she was completly lost. "love u Ro'" she stammered. Her legs were so weak. Suddenly 2 men came infront of them.

"hai' BF-GF khel rahe ho kya? Hum bhi join kare?" they laughed out. He was silent.

"dekho, tum log jo kaha meine wo kiya' ab mujhe chod do please.." he was disturbed. One man ran his fingers on her face. He felt a burning in his heart. "wa' kya maal hai.. dedo'" they took her in their arms. "Ro' I love u.." she lept murmuring. The men returned to him. "lo' is maal ka keemath'" they handed him some money. He looked surprised. "hey.. that's not fare' u know what I want'please'"

They laughed at him and gave a small white packet and went by. "Sorry Sanuja' I'm really sorry. But I'm helpless. I need this. I'm sorry'"

Few minutes back:

Sanuja went to attend the call' Rohan mixes something in her drink'.

Some basement of a house, after a while:

the scene is pathetic. The room was not at all hygienic. Smell of some unknown substance lingered in the air, that could hurt the nostril. In a corner some girls were sleeping'. Or lying unconscious to be sure. They were drugged. The dark circles around their eyes and the way they were sleeping were evident to show that they were really weak. The room was not enough for the 14 girls. It was overcrowded.

Sanuja's state was not different from that of the other girls. She was drugged and slleping unaware of whats going to happen soon in her life. "aaj saab tho bohot khush hoge' aise maal jo hath lagi hai'"

"zyaada math socho Peter' pehle mujhe dekhne tho do'" a sarcastic tone said from behind. The voice was enough to take the grin from their face. They turned t look at the new entry.


A man, well build, open hair, eyes as sharp as a vulture, and above all with a devilish smile'. Sikander'

A man who was a devil himself' who found pleasing others as his life's mission, even it cost the life of unknown young girls'.

He had a majestic walk, a great attitude when he was a bait'. And a criminal from heart'.

He took his steps to the new girl and bent down to see her face' "wa' kya baath hai' loved her' wa'" he was pleased. When he was about to get up she felt her holding his sleeves. "love u Ro'." She mumbled feebly.

That was his trigger. It was off' "LOVE'" the one thing he hated most. The devilish smile was replaced by an equal devilish look. The face his men always feared. He looked at the men who brought her. They knew what to do.

He walked back to the cabin. "LOVE'. PYARR' nafrat hai mujhe'. Nafrat'.bohot maanthe hai na iss pyaar ko'. Dekhna ab bohot jald sab darenge iss shabd pe' PYAAR pe'" his devilish grin was back.

Somewhere far away, Arjun was tossing in his bed'. He was restless in his sleep'. Riya was sitting by him' caressing his hair'"Sh' Arjun' sh'. Its ok'. Its ok' I'm here' sh'."

But her words couldn't break the dreams of Arjun' he was still restless' neither he nor her knew about the twists someone above was planning for them' no' its not ok' as for now' its not all ok'.

PRECAP:

A dead body... ARIYA investigating...


CHAPTER 13:PAGE 36

Edited by kunchu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hows Sikander?? hope I didn't dissapoint u with his entry... any comments please go for it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Well finally devil ki entry ho gyi...!!like d introduction of d devil..i knw its early to say bt waiting to end for d devil too..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
great once again loved it plz upload the next one soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey it was amazing update
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
dhamaakedaar entry for the villain Sikandar showing how much of negativity he has...
feel real bad for the girls!!!
post soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved sikander's character
wow ariya together investigating
waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
sooo scary!!!!!!!!!! sikandar!!!!!!!🤢
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Posted: 12 years ago
SIKANDER😡😡😡... Hope Arjun vl finish him soon... really worried hw his entry vl affect Ariya... continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow.. shikander is smart and no doubt looks dangerous...
hope Arjun handle every thing in right time...
plzzz continue soon

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