FF:Anjaana Anjaani!! Chap5:pg.24 uptd 22/12/2012 - Page 7

Originally posted by: samiya.059

'Shuru ki jab hamne padhni kahani tumhari yaad aagayi hame film anjana anjani
Shayari se he samajh gaye ehmiyat iski
Dil hai bechain padhne ko agay ki kahani iski
Poetry mein he diya taruf kirdaro ka
Aur poetry mein he samjhaya pesh-e-lafz iska
Lagta hai aage b aap is tarah likhoge achi si shayari
kyunki ati hai hame aur apko samajh zubaan sirf shayari
Dil ki baat kehne ke liye liya zyada waqt
Magar yakeen hai maaf karne mein nahi lagao ge zyada waqt(sorry for commenting late)
Now now kahan se shuru karo chalo pehle happy diwali to u too.
Meine socha abi kuch nasar(prose) mein hoga lekin yahan toh ahle -sukhan ki zuban mein he pura qaseeda likha gaya tha.
I really really liked it neeli.the way u wrote prologue n introduction was amazing.wating for next chap.just wanted to tell u
'koi chand sitara hai
koi phool se pyara hai
koi khushi ka ishara hai
hame bas itna batana hai
woh naam tumhara hai'

omg...sami u jst took my heart away...seriously im having teary eyes...reading suchh an awesome n beautiful comment ever...!!!

Originally posted by: tani23

Kitni modesty😉 .. ...agar yeh teri poems ki start hain ...

then i m thinking ki Jab u will b gr8 poet "Neelima" tab kya hoga 😆

Then , u wud b writing MORE MORE MORE amazing Poetries ...

kitne amazing poets hain yahan par...👏

modesty n Gr8 poet Neelima... lolxx...!!!🤣

Originally posted by: priya00147

tum boht slow hai..jldi kr thank yew session..ni toh agla thread pahucha dnge!!! 🤣

bas ho hi gaya...aah rahioi hoon..chal!!!

Neeli mujhe di matt bol.. Look u study in 2nd yr... I suppose! N me in 1st yr... N i shameless girl always adress u tu-tu.. N u sayin me di... Its the worst thig eva.. Plzz.. Plz.. Matt bolna.. Naitoh i'll say neelima ji n aap... Will u like that?

Originally posted by: SanchayitaM

Neeli mujhe di matt bol.. Look u study in 2nd yr... I suppose! N me in 1st yr... N i shameless girl always adress u tu-tu.. N u sayin me di... Its the worst thig eva.. Plzz.. Plz.. Matt bolna.. Naitoh i'll say neelima ji n aap... Will u like that?

nahii ...jo bulana hai bula...di bhi theekh hai...lekin ji n aap...no never i hate dat...!! ok 5n nahii bulaoongi...n u olso no need to call di...1 saal ke farak se kuch nahii hota...!!!

Originally posted by: purecure

nahii ...jo bulana hai bula...di bhi theekh hai...lekin ji n aap...no never i hate dat...!! ok 5n nahii bulaoongi...n u olso no need to call di...1 saal ke farak se kuch nahii hota...!!!

thanks.. M relieved..!!!

''kahin kisi dagar pe
kahin kisi rah pe
koi anjana toh hoga
koi naya musafir toh hoga
kahega jise dil apna
ban jayega woh anjana sa apna
anjani le pe dil dhadkaye ga
raaton ke neende aur din ka chain udade ga
anjane mein banjaye ga dil ke dhadkne ka sabab
aur wohi hoga zindagi ko phir se rah pe lane ka sabab
hoga bas kuch kuch aisa he
milenge jab apki kahani mein anjana anjani'

Originally posted by: samiya.059

so true...which isnt seen bt felt n listened within our hearts!!!!
tnk yew!!!!

Originally posted by: samiya.059

''kahin kisi dagar pe
kahin kisi rah pe
koi anjana toh hoga
koi naya musafir toh hoga
kahega jise dil apna
ban jayega woh anjana sa apna
anjani le pe dil dhadkaye ga
raaton ke neende aur din ka chain udade ga
anjane mein banjaye ga dil ke dhadkne ka sabab
aur wohi hoga zindagi ko phir se rah pe lane ka sabab
hoga bas kuch kuch aisa he
milenge jab apki kahani mein anjana anjani'

sahii farmaya apne aisa kuch hoga jab milenge ye aatho...

bohot khhob sami...kya baat kahii...!!!!
tnk yew!!!
luvd it...awesome!!!!