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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

I'm so glad you updated! I loved the update!

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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#142

Hey ... Brilliant update !!

I absolutely love the feisty Riya ...

Whoa !! She got a clue ... Looking forward to know what it is ??

Thanks for the pm :)

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Prerna

@daydreamer...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

finally...

awesome update...love this angry young woman..riya arjun's convo was superb...and so they finally get a clue...can't wait to read wat happens next...do update SOON...

thanx for pm.. :)

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abhya/akanksha

@Aks13

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#144

Read it in one go.

Amazing piece of work.

OMG Arjun n Riya were always at loggerheads.

The case is really exciting.

FB of Arni r beautiful.

Sam n Noor portion was adorable.

Waao thy get a clue coz of Riya.

Loved it so so much.

Continue soon.

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kaamchorni

@kaamchorni

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#145

Thanks, guys! Was away this week but an update's coming up this weekend :)

^ Liar, liar. Never believe me, folks!

Edited by kaamchorni - 11 years ago

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#146

superb update...
woahh ariya are always fighting lol...
their replies to each other were awesome...
gosh riya's pov... was mind blowing.. she was way too angry...
finally a clue coz of riya cool...
continue soon...

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Asha03

@Asha03

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#147

waiting for the next update..😛😛

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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#148

I just read all the chapters at one go, and holy smokes, what an engrossing tale!!!

First of all, I admire your characterization of Riya. She is not meek, rather, she is the very epitome of spunkiness. The show, on the other hand, persists in showing damsels in distress, and I have gotta confess- I am very tired of it. So it was refreshing to read of a woman in law enforcement who gives back as good as she gets.

Second, the dynamic between her and ACP Rawte. Very intriguing indeed. On one hand, he trades barbs with her, and on the other, he expresses concern about her being left behind? I am very curious about the direction that their relationship might take. Also, is their bond going to be platonic or something more???

Thirdly, what an interesting Rathore. His sarcasm is a source of joy. Frankly, the show's Rathore has paled and become a mere prop since his inception, and I am glad to see that you've maintained the essence of the character.

Fourthly, the case. I like your sensitive treatment of the bar dancers, esp. that of Noor, who appears to be a complex personality. Waiting to see how the case gets resolved.

And also the undertones of feminism- with respect to Riya's treatment at the hands of her male superiors and the difficult circumstances that these women find themselves in.

Kudos for a well-crafted tale. And I HATE cliffhangers. So, please do update soon😛

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EkNoKiNashedi

@Phir_Mohabbat

Trailblazer

+ 13

Posted: 12 years ago

#149

update!!!! i used to read this FF long time ago, but u stopped updating. pls update soon...very different and interesting. and OMG rathore uncomfortable? ahaan...cant wait to read more

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kaamchorni

@kaamchorni

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#150

I know I said I'd update on the weekend but a last minute project has replaced all other priorities and will keep me busy until Friday. I will try my best to write an update in between but realistically... well, it ain't gonna happen until next weekend. I'm sorry about this but I hope you all understand that work and real life come first (unfortunately!).

Thanks for sticking by me and also for your feedback - I really appreciate it and will reply to them on Friday.

- Z

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