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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow wonderful!!!!!!!!👏
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wow just amazing and emotional part
do conitnue soon
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sorry everyone
can't post chapter 8 now having net problem will post it when it will be corrected😊
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sorry for late updates

Chapter 8:-


when sameera reached ETF office there was no one. the four were busy in solving the case. They reached at office at after almost 1 hour sameera was still waiting for them they shocked when they saw sameera there shree asked her sam tum yahan kiya kar rahe ho? shree wo mujhe commissioner sir na bheja hai unho na kaha hai ka agar mujhe ETF joinin karna hai to mujhe rathod sir sa milna hoga QK wo he is team ko lead karta hain shree shocked when she said that she want to join ETFtum pagal to nahe hogae sam tum ETF Q join karna chahte ho. nahe mai tumhe aesa nahe karna dunga mai re ko to kho chuka hun par ab tumhe nahe khosakta nahe shree maina faisla kar liya mujhe ETF join karna hai rathod support shree sahe to kha raha hai shree tum Q join karna chahte ho ETF or phir jo kuch riya ka sath hua hai uske bad hum nahe chahte ka tum ETF join karo nahe mujhe ETF join karna hai qk ab yahe mere life ka aim hai par kyun sam tumhe to kabhe es tarah ki job mai koi interest nahe tha tumna to sirf re ka kehna par research desk join kiya tha or exactly she cuts maina re ka liye research desk join kiya tha or aj bhe re ke liye ETF join kar rahe hu par this time she got emotional riya mere zindagi the or riya ki zindagi uska sapna ek police officer banna ka sapna mere zindagi mere riya to mar chuke hai shee par mai riya ka sapno ko marna nahe dunga zinda rakhunge us spana ko pura karonge usse or mai jante hu ka jo mai kar rahe hun mere re usse khush hoge or maina apne life mai re sa ziada kisi or ko koi inportance nahe de or ye to tum bhe janta ho shree tears drop from her eyes arjun feels said for her rathod mujhe lagta hai ka huma sameera ko ek chance de dena chahea par rawte dekho rathod ye larke unexperienced nahe hai or huma bhe ek lady officer ki zarorat or hum esa kuch days check karainga or phir apna decision bataenga she smiled when he support her. he don't want to support her but he did only for riya thek hai rawte shayad tum sahe kha raha ho...sameera hum tumhe 1 month check karainga agar tum duty sahe tarah sa perdorm karoge to hum commissioner sir sa baat karlenge thankyou sir tankyou very much aj mai bohat khush hun or mujhe mere re ka sapna pura karna sa koi nahe rok sakta...to sir mai kab sa join karun

precap:-the went at shopping centre to solve a case and riya saw a heart locketwow kitna pyara lag raha hai ye locket arjun scold her idhar udhar ki batain chor kar agar tum case par concentrate karoge to acha hoga sorry sir😔

to be continue soon


Edited by ariyaarshilove - 12 years ago
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it was awsome
update, continue soon
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nice update bt confusing precap...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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WEEE NICE UPDATE DEAR :)
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Chapter 9:-

one week later

the team was sitting in the confrence room when someone came there he was the owner of vidya shopping mall. Ratod noticed him first yes how may i help you rathod asked him hello mai vidya shopping mall ka owner hun. kal raat mere mall mai robbery hue hai almost 6 lakhs ki jwellery or mai chata hun ka ap log chor ko dhonda arjun asked further wo to humara kaam hai laken pehle zara detail mai bataenga ka hua kiya tha kal rat jab mall band ho gaya tha tab sara shopkeepers apne apne ghar chala gaye the lekin jis shop mai chore hue the uska shopkeeper ka kehna hai ka kal raat usne theek sa shop band ki the or aj subha usne dekha ka 6 lakhs ki jwellery gayab hai theek hai ap shree ko apne mall ka address bata dain hum 5 mins mai nakalta hain rathod told him

vidya shopping mall

the team reached they were talking to all salesmen and then they inspect the shop in which robbery was held and during it riya saw a heart locket wow kitna nice locket hai arjun scold her idhar udhar ki batain chor kar agar tum case par concentrate karoge to acha hoga sorry sir😔
arjun asked to the manager kya yahan koi watchman nahe hai tha par usne kal hi ye job chorde acha to huma uska address dain ji bilkul rawte tum shree or sameera us watchman ka ghar jao mai or chottu yahen rukain gai theek hai rathod sir

watchman home

shree knock the door a lady open the door ji ap kon arjun showed his card emergency transport, huma sumit patel sa milna hai wo to ghar par nahe hain sameera asked her waisa ap kn hain? mai unke patni hun ap mujhe bata dain kya kam hai suddenly arjun saw his wallet and he picked it up waisa kamal hai apka pati bina wallet ka he chala gae his wife got nervous then sameera told her acha hoga ka ap khud bata dain warna ji mujhe maaf kar dain wo ghar par hi hain to apna jhot Q kaha unho na kaha tha ka agar koi bhe ho to usse kahon ka wo ghar par nahe arjun noticed the picture which was in sumit's wallet it was a picture of two mans one was that watchman and one was someone else he ask his wife about this picture when shree bring sumit out of his room to tum ho sumit patel chalo ab sab sa pehle ye batao ka ye is picture mai tumhare sath kon hai wo...wo ye mera dost varun hai sameera told arjun that she knw that person ek mint sir maina is admi ko kahen dekha lekin yaad nahe a raha ka kahan dekha hai arjun tensedly ask her kahan dekha hai tumne esa yaad karo riya he got silent for some time i m sorry mera matlab hai sameera

precap:-arjun saw the same locket in sameera's neck which they sw in shopping mall last night

to be continue soon


Edited by ariyaarshilove - 12 years ago
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WOW i have read it in one short lovely cont soon dear
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Chapter 10:-

arjun forced sameera sameera yad karna ki koshish karo kahan dekha tum na esa sir mujhe yad nahe a raha sameera please yaad karna ki koshish karo sir yad a gaya sir jis shop mai robbery hue hai ye theek uske samna wale shop ka sales man hai or han sir jab mai es sa bat kar rahe the to ye kafi confuse bhe lag raha mai rathod ko call kar ka kehta hun ka is sa dobara poch tach kara, shree is picture ko rathod ka mobile par send kar do okay sir arjun move towards sumit sahab mai nai kuch nahe kiya maa kasam agar kuch nahe kiya to tum itna ghabra Q raha ho sach mai sahab maina kuch nahe kiya or mai ti janta bhe nahe ka hua kiya hai par phir tum sameera cut sir us mall ka manager na bataya tha ka is na 2 weeks pehle ye job join ki the acha to ab tum khud hi batado ka aesa kya hua ka tum nai 2 week mai hi ye job chor de? he was silent dekho agar tum kuch bataoge nahe to hum tumhe humara sath le jaenga shree le chalo esa nahe sahab mai sab bata hun. sahab mare nokri chale age the to mujhe mere dost varun na kaha ka vidya mall mai ek watchman ki zarorat hai to maina uska kehne par ye nokri kare or phir 2 din pehle usne kaha ka yahan ka manager mujhe phasa raha ha pehle wo bohat sa gehna churae ga or phir mujh par naam dalda ga to isliye maina ye nokri chorde theek hai chalo humara sath kahan sahab maina to sab bata diya ghabrao nahe hum tumhe sirf ek gawa bana kar le jaenge. shree sameera chalo the four left for the mall

Shopping Mall

when arjun, shree and sameera reached at mall they told them about varun's mystery then the team went in varun's shop, they directly ask him about why he lie to his friend varun ji sir dekho hum idher udhar ki batain karka na he tumhara sama barbad karain ga na hi humara huma bus itna batao ka tum na sumit ko ye job chorna ka liye jhot Q kaha sir mujhe nahe pata sumit to humara mall ka watchman hai mai usse nahe janta hun jhoot mat bolo humna sumit ka wallet mai tumhara or uska photo ek sath dekha hai ab tum bach kar nahe ja sakta sach sach batao he became sad sir mere patni bohat bemar hai use cancer hai or uske ilaj ka liye 6 lakh rs chaihea tha mai nai manager sa bhe bhe paisa manga magar unho na dene sa mana kar diye phir mujhe ye chore karne pari QK mai apne ankhon ka samna apne patni ko marta hua nahe dekh sakta pyar karta hun usse arjun thought about roshni for a while laken iska matlab ye nahe ka tum chore karoge sir mai kiya karta mere patni ki zindagi ka sawal tha kahan hai wo paisa ab? arjun ask to varun wo s...si..sir wo paisa to mere patni ka ilaj mai kharch kar diye ye tumna sahe nahe kiya tumne
rathod cut saza to tumhe milege chori karna ka ilzam mai, chottu laka chalo esa baqi sab coat tay karaga ka iska sath kiya karna hai they leave from there

next day

the team was sitting in conference hall rathod appreciate sameera sameera tum ache tarah kam kar rahe ho thnakyou sir suddenly sameera's pen through on floor and when she picked it up and at that arjun saw that same locket in sameera's neck which they saw in shopping mall last day and there was two pics in that locket and the pics was of riya and sameera..

no precap

to be continue

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