ariya- 'jana tu ya jana na' chapter 15 page 17

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hy everyone
i will post a ff of ariya very soon

Ariya FF-Jana Tu Ya Jana Na

but for this i want maximum likes and comments

hit like and do comment soon





chap 7:-https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3269043&TPN=7ch

chap 8:-https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3269043&TPN=8

chap 9:-https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3269043&TPN=9

chap 10:-https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3269043&TPN=10

chap 11:-https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3269043&TPN=11

chap 12:-https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3269043&TPN=12
chap 13:-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3269043&TPN=14


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Awesomethanks for PM
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Chapter 1:-

it was late night, he was sitting on a chair having a diary with him
he opened the first to read

Aj mera ETF ka first day tha. itne time tak research work ka baad aj mein ETF ki member bane hun.Rathod Sir thore strick hain par ache, chottu nohat sweet hai or shree to mera bestest friend hai or arjun sir bohat gussa wala hain, samajh nhe a raha k wo aese Q hain, mujhe unsa bohat dar lagta hai par wo bohat intelligent hai wo case ko bohat acha tareqa sa solve karta aj first day he mujhe ye samajh a gaya hai...

he turned the page

kuch days pehle mujhe chottu ke baat mujhe samajh nahe ae usne mujhe bas itna kaha ka "arjun sir ki wife the" pata nahe chottu aesa Q kah raha tha QK agar unke wife the to wo kaha hain or chottu nai mujhe arjun sir sa pochna ka bhe mana kar diya or phir aj shree nai mujhe bataya ka arjun sir ki wife ka murder ho gaya tha wo bhe unke samna. Mein sir ka liye bohat sorry feel kar rahe hun par shree or bata he raha tha k arjun sir nai mujhe case ka liye bulaya or phir uske baad shree nai mujhse kuch or baat nahe ki es bara mein.

next page

mein ek graphic artist ka bare mein research kar rahe the jo police ka liye kam karta tha par galti sa arjun sir sa related ek report bhe nikal arjun sir nai mujhe bohat danta jabka mai nai ye jaanboch kar nhe kiya tha mujhe ye bohat bura laga😭 or mai nai unse bohat bar sorry bhe kaha par wo samajhta hain ka mein khud unke life ka bara janna chahte hun

next page

arjun sir bohat gussa wala zaroor hain magar unke intelligency ko koi ignore nahe kar sakta
mujhe unka kam karna ka tareqa bohat pasand. Mai nai unsa pocha ka wo itne ache tarha case solve karte hain or unha ye bhe bataya ka mai bhe unke tarah ek bohat ache officer banna chahte hun...

to be continue soon

do u like this 1 chapter if yes so like and comment please

and sorry QK mujhe hindhi nahe ate





Edited by ariyaarshilove - 12 years ago
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nice start, arjun reading Riya's personal diary.
Nice concept
Please continue😊
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Chapter 2


Mujhe goli lage hai or itne days rest karne ka baad mai kal wapis team join karunge, dard to abhe bhe bohat ho raha hai but i will manage from now. Arjun sir bohat acha hain 😊 or ye mujhe us din pata chala jab unho nai mere jaan bachae wo mere liye bohat pareeshan(tense) bhe ho gae the. Shayad arjun sir ke liye kuch feel karna lage hun mujhe jhd nahe pata wo kya hai par wo different feeling hai jo shayad mai nai aj tak kisi ka liye feel nahe kiya or mai bus itna jante hun ka ye jo bhe mujhe bohat acha lagta hai

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Pata nahe arjun sir mujhe wapis research desk Q bhejna chate hai par mujhe unke bato sa aesa lag raha tha ka wo mere liye tense hain or mere daar ki waja sa ye samajh gaye hain k shayad mai kabhe bhe kamzor par sakte hun or aese mai mein khud ko koi nuqsaan na pohchaon. Aj maina unho pandit ji ka diya wo coin bhe diya tha but kuch dar baad unho nai wo coin wapis mandir mai rakh diya par maine sab koo bina batae wo coin apna pass rakh liya hai. Pata nahe mai aesa Q kar rhe hun or Q mujhe unke baat sa farq par raha hai kash mai es feeling ko samajh pate

next page

aj maine first time kisi ko shot kiya mai aesa nahe karna chahte the na he mai usse jaan sa marna chahte the par ye zarori tha warna wo arjun sir par hamla kar deta or mai ye kaisa hona date par shayad is tarah ahista ahista mera shot na karpana ka daar khatam ho jae

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mai ahista ahista pure team ka sath cover kar rahe hun. mai ETF ki new member hun or unexperienced bhe parr mai rathod sir or arjun sir ki har theory ko adopt kar rahe hun or shree or chottu ki company bohat intresting hai wo mere har tarah sa help karta hain i really hope ka mai bhe ek successfull officer bano. ab bas us day ka intezar hai jab mai apne parents ka sar fakhar sa uncha karunge

next page

aj ka case bohat ajeeb tha arjun sir nai mantiri ji ko shot hone sa to bacha liye par aj ramleela mai jitne bhe bachon ki death hue hai us mai us waja sa bohat disturb bhe hun rathod sir or hum sab kal es case ka bara mai discuss karainga i hope ka hum un bacho ki jaan bachala

to be continued soon
Edited by ariyaarshilove - 12 years ago
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THANK YOU EVERYONE

will post the next part








Edited by ariyaarshilove - 12 years ago
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Chapter 3:-

aj hum nai es case ke tahkekat start ki to humai bohat si bata pata chalen jaisa ye deaths ek bacteria ki waja sa ho rahe hain. hum sab nai es bacteria ka bara mai first time suna hai. Pata nahe ye koi Q kar raha bohat sa masoom log bilawaja mara ja raha hain😭 mujhe arjun sir kuch pareeshan lag raha hain, shayad unke pareshani ki waja ye bacteria or es hona wale masoom bacho ki death hai. Mujhe arjun sir par pura bharosa hai ka wo ye case bohat jald solve kar langa

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aj mujhe uske bohat yaad arahe hai. I am missing her so much. kal es bactaria wala case ka solve hojana ka baad main sab sa pehla usse call karonge QK pechle 1 onths sa maina usse bat nahe ki 😭

next page was empty, so he closed the diary
he closed his eyes and talks to himself

aj tumhare death ko 8 months guzar chuka hain, han ye sach hai ka tum nai huare team ka sath ziada time spend nahe kiya tha par en kuch days mai he tum hamari life ka ek important part ban gae the. kash mai samajh jata jo bhe tum nai mere bare mai es diary mai likha. Q mai kabhe samjh nahe paya ka tum mere liye kiya fell karte ho.Kash ka 8 mahena pehle jo hua wo na hota. Kash tum na jate. Kash mai tumha bacha leta 😒 par ab kiya faida tum to ja chuke ho kabhe wapis nahe ana ka liye

next day

he was sleeping on that chair, his mobile was ranging and he wake up from it's bell he picked it up it was rathod on line he answered his call

han rathode
rawte laxmi nagar ki taraf "agarwal house" ka name saek bangla hai forun wohan pocho ek murder ho gaya hai
main bus 5 minute mai nikalta hun rathode

he put the diary on the table and went in hurry to reach at agarwal house

Agarwal house

the whole agarwal family along with their servants were standing out of their store room shree was also there when ETF team reached their . shree captured the picture of deadbody and feed it then he starts explaining the case to arjun and rathod

name sumit sharma hai, umer 24 saal, 7 mahena pehle apne studies complete karke goragaon ki ek company mai job karna laga or sir es ke salary ache khasi hai. es sab ka ilawa or kuch shree rathod asked filhal to nahe sir but yahan pohachta hi maina sab ghar walo nokar wagara sab sa baat ki ghar walon ka kehna hai k wo sumit ko nahe janta or han sir ghar ka nokar ram lal na bataya ka raat (sunday night) ko raat 12 baja tak usne store room ko band kiya tha or phir sona chala gaya. sir ap bhe chal kar ghar walon sa baat karlain

ji namastay, mera name mohit agarwal hai, ye mere wife seema agarwal,mera bai abhay agarwal or uske wife avantika agarwal. Sir mai sa koi bhe us insaan ko nahe janta pata nahe uske lash humara ghar mai kahan sa ae hai
ap ka ilawa es ghar mai or kya or koi rehta hai?arjun asked
ji hamara pita par wo bohat bemar hain isliye wo apna bistar sa bhe nahe uth sakte or unke ilawa humare nokar ramlal
ap log karta kiya hain?rathod asked to mohit
sir humara textile ka business india mai humare 2 companies or abhay ki shaadi ka bad humnai apna buisness out of india bhe settle kiya hai jis ka liye abhay ko har week india sa bahar jana parta hai
theek hai. filhal to hum ja raha hain par dehan raha ka jab tak es case ke tahkekat pure nahe hote ap mai sa koi yahan sa nahe jaega
theek hai sir
shree sumit ka ghar ka adress do. rawte tum or shree woha jao jahan sumit kam karta tha mai or chottu sumit ka ghar ja raha hain
theek hai rathod
lets go chottu
yes sir

sharma house

rathod rang the bell. An old man open the door. he show his card and said that emergency transport
kahea kiya madad karsakta hun mai apke
hama apsa sumit ka bara mai kuch baat karne hai
wo hamara juck nahe lagta, mera or mere patni ka usse koi rishta nahe hai wo 7 maheena pehle hi humsa har rishta tor kar chala gaya
Mr sharma kya ap ye janna nahe chahainga ka sumit kaisa hai? chottu asked
kya matlab hai apka kya hua usse kaisa hai wo. sir sumit is no more .kal raat kisi nai uska murder kardiya Mr and Mr's sharma starts crying
Sir hum janta hai kai ap es sadma ko bardast nahe kar pa rahe par please hama apke bete ka katil tak pohachna hai to please humare madad karain. please hama baae ka apka or sumit ka bech kis bat ko lekar anban the?
sumit kisi larke sa pyaar karta tha or wo usse shaadi karna chahta tha par wo hamare bradri ki nahe the isliye humnsa usse mana kardiya or ohir wo ghar chor kar chala gaya par pir kuch dino baad hama pata ka uslarke kahen or shaadi ho gae hai
uska name kiya tha? chottu asked
uska name...he thinks for some time han yaad aya uska name avantika tha
sir ye to abhay ki biwi ka name hai
abhay?
ap janta hain abhay ko?
ji ye to sumit ka bohat acha dost hai.Uska sath uske class mai parhta hai
apko uska pura name pata hai sir ye zaroor abhay agrwal hi hai
han chottu ho sakta hai
nahe uska pura name mujhe nahe pata maina to bus usse phona par ek bar baat kare the. sir apna mujhse jo pocha maina bataya. Ab mujhe ye batadai ka hum apne bete ka antimsanskar kab karain he was quit emotional mai samajh sakta hun jaisa ji postmotom hog hum sumit ki body apko sonp dainga

sumit's office
sir sumit ka office ka sare staff sa bat karle sirf manager rah gaye hain office manager reach there hello mai yahan ka manager hun manesh. how can i help u
hama apsa sumit ka bara mai kuch pochtach karne hain
sumit bohat genious hai. boss uske kam sa bohat khush hain par
kya office mai koi aesa hai jo sumit ko passand na karta ho ya sumit ka koi aese baat jo apko ajeeb lage ho sir ap ye sab Q poch raha hai or ap hai kon hum ETF sa hain mai ACP arjun hun or ye shree hai. kal raat sumit ka muder ho gaya or hum ishi silsilay mai yahan ae hain ye to bohat bure khabar hai wo bohat acha insaan tha es office mai uska koi dushman nahe tha par uske ek baat ajeeb to the wo kabhe saturday ko office nahe ata tha usne boss sa permission li hue the kahta tha ka har saturday morning uska dad ka doctor ka pass apoinntment hata
okay thanx for ur cooperation mr manesh

ETF office

ye case bohat ajeeb sumit ka murder jahan hua us ghar ka logon ka kehna hai k wo sumit ko nahe janta. sumit ka pitta kah raha hai k usne 7 months pehle hi ghar chor diya par uske office ka manager ka kehna hai k wo har saturday office nahe ata tha QK uske father yani k mr.sharma ka doctor ka pass apointment hota tha. sumit ek larke sa pyaar karta tha par larki ki shaadi kahen or ho gae larki ka name bhe avantika or sumit ka ek dost ka name abhay hai. quite confusing
shree sumit ka kisi bhe tarah ka criminal record mila kya. no sir

BSS girl hostel, bhopal

a girl sitting on the bench at coridor of hostel, she was calling some one she said shree mujhse baat karke bohat khush hoga

ETF OFFICE

shree's mobile rang, he picked the phone
hello,
hey shree, pehchana mujhe?
tum. ofcourse pehchana, tumhe kaisa nahe pehchano ga? shree stands from his chair he was seem to be very happy. rathod, arjun and chottu was smiling on seeing shree like this kaisa ho itna months bad call kiya hai tumne or studies kaise ja rahe hain i hope ab tumne bacho ki tarah rona band kardiya hoga rememeber hostel jata waqt kis tarah ro rahe the
girl replied
OMG itne sare sawal ek sath uff. Mein bilkul theek hun. parhae bohat ache ja rahe hai & mai bohat jaldi wapis ajaonge ab maina rona band kar diya hai even ab mai wo bilkul change ho gaye bilkul uss ki tarahacha ab ye batao ka wo kaise hai? pechle 8 months sa uske awaz tak nahe sune maina. ara bahi mai ek dosra city mai rehte hun kisi dosra country mai nahe bus apne studies ki waja sa phone nahe karpate, pata hai mom dad bhe uske bara mai koi baat nahe karte😭

shree's smile change into sadness & he replies her ek urgent case a gaya hai mujhe jana hoga he cuts the call

rathod ask shree shree tum nai jhoot Q bola .Sorry sir par kya batana zarori hai
it's okay shree tumha nahe batana to koi bat nahe arjun said

Hostel

that girl was still sitting on the same bench and was in her thoughts ye kya ho raha hai koi mujhe uske bara main kuch bata Q nahe raha akhir baat kiya. bus ab mujhe khud mumbai ja kar pata karna hoga

precap:-a girl enter in ETF offfice shouting shree's name



NOTE:-i know this part was quite long but i have much time so i wrote it






Edited by ariyaarshilove - 12 years ago
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wow i love your story dear👏
beautiful concept⭐️
the first two chapters were quite emotional😭
but great to see an investigation in the third one and the precap sounds promising!😳
do continue soon dear!!😊

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Originally posted by: _mahi_

wow i love your story dear👏
beautiful concept⭐️
the first two chapters were quite emotional😭
but great to see an investigation in the third one and the precap sounds promising!😳
do continue soon dear!!😊


thank you guyz going to post the next part very soon😊
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awww loved it
continue soon

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