New SS:Phir Mohabbat Kar Ne Chala Chap1 pg4 3/11 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice plzz update soon
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Sounds interesting shru! Awsome Prologue! Continue soon!
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Seems very interesting...plz continue soon
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Ch1

wriiten by fiza28 n funkylicious

It had been three weeks but still feel like yesterday Shree whispered to the picture. Chotu slightly glanced at Shree who had just been back from a strict bed rest after his captivation a week earlier. It was all Riya's effect he taught. Chotu send silent prayers to God, to any how return their Riya, return their happiness, and return their Shree. Rathore was no less he observed everyone closely which no-one except Arjun had noticed each passing day.

Rathore also felt ever going upside done ever since that day 3 days after riya he was also almost killed things were just upside done the balance n positive every that riya gave was now so

Unbalanced.

Lately silence spoke more than words, actions or even looks could that's when Rathore's cell rang, he patiently replied, "Yes Sir, Okay sir. We are just on our way."

"Kya hua sir" Inquired Shree.

Hume ASR Group of industries jana hai, Commissioner Sir ke baite ke saath pada tha ye apparently iske bahot ehsaan hai SIR pe isliye Sir wants us to deal this case, but secretly.

Rathore: Shree tum jaldi ASR Group of industries ke baremai saari information nikal kar do! Jaldi we have an appointment at 1:00pm sharp.

But sir, humai appointment ki kya zarurat hai, questioned Chotu.

Rathore: Pata nahi aur mai pata karna bhi nahi chahta Commissioner ke orders hai we have to follow by hook or crook.

They reach ASR's office, that's when ETF team gets pissed off of waiting for half an hour miscommunication takes place ASR isn't informed on time about ETFians arrival as his secretary is on leave.

Arjun walks out of the Company without meeting ASR slowly the team follows him. They reach headquarters totally frustrated.

It was an hour since they were back at work no-one uttered a word, the silence was broken. Okay team I think we should take the day off as we have no case ordered Rathore.

Shree: But Sir, Agar Commissioner Sir ko pata chal gaya toh?

Jo hoga dekha jayega Rathore replied in a frustrated tone.

"Excuse me, this is ETF's headquarters right?" questioned a strong manly voice.

Rathore turned around and saw a tall man in three piece suit stood just inside the office with his hands in his pants pockets. Rathore nodded inquired, "Yes it is, Who are you?" asked Rathore out of curiosity.

The man walked forward, approached his hand towards Rathore. "I'm ASR (Arnav Singh Raizada) he introduced himself". So you're the Raizada? Taunted Arjun.

I'm sorry Sir, actually my secretary is sick and no-one had the informed me as I was stuck in a meeting apologized ASR.

That's okay Mr. Raizada you could have informed me before hand, we wouldn't have taken an effort to travel all the way to your place. But anyways, what's the matter aapne hume kyu yaad kiya?"

ASR says may I? Rathore nods and says please take a seat. It had been an hour of talk and explanation, Rathore stood up in disbelief. Are you serious? We are ETF officers for god sakes ye yelled.

ASR fumed in anger, What The …No-one speaks to ASR like that. No-one. That's when a beautiful girl in her early-20's walked in wearing a sexy red dress,

her Red High heels were the show stopper. She walked like a model, she had sparkly eyes and her smile ended being dimples.
Chotu stood there frozen.

Shree had moist eyes, Ri he blurted out, chotu rested his hand over Shree.

ARjun and Rathore looked away since her dress was quite revealing

ASR Baby the girl called out, babes what are you doing here? He questioned as he walked towards her.

Rathore was stunned, he spoke in a curious tone "ohh Mrs Raizada please come in and have a seat."
Sorry?(looked at him confused) She said.

ASR, Chamkili car mai baiti hai, please hurry up na she said as she played around with ASR's shirt buttons in a seductive way . Dekho ASR agar voh mu..mutton nahi mili toh Nani mujhe ghar mai nahi legi you know her gussa na phele se she hates me .

Shree: Mutton?

Arjun was observing the whole conversation silently.

Haan mutton, Nani ka mutton. You baakri mai mai ….(still playing with his buttions) Ohh god, please find it baby nahi toh mai tumhara mutton kar dungi she said pulling Arnav's collar while smiling..(ASR just shook his head )

Don't worry babes lakshmi mil jaye gi and nani can't stop you from coming home that's your house to I wont all it. Says ASR

Rathore: Mrs Raizada please take a seat and give us some information you have.

Please before you continue I'm not ASR's wife, I'm Miss. Lavanya Kashyap. You can call me Lavanya.

Rathore and the whole team is shocked hearing her words

You're not his wife blurted out Chotu in amusement.

Wife …No not at all , I'm his girlfriend (She crossed her arms around ASR's arm) she takes a seat next to Arnav.

Arjun and rathore are disgusted seeing how casually she is mentioning it

Excuse me can I get a glass of water please? She requests Chotu

He fetches a glass of water for her. Thank you said Lavanya.

She opens her clutch, and takes out a tissue and wipes the mouth of glass.

Ye filtered water hai na? she questions. Shree nods his head and she thanks him. She drinks the water by holding it up i.e. she doesn't let her mouth touch the glass.

La baby kya kare ho says ASR

ASR please pata hai kitne germs hote hai uff says Lavanya

Sorry she's a hygiene freak, apologizes ASR.

Its okay, we are used to this replied Rathore, while Lavanya smiled ear to ear.

Agar ye sab hogaya ho toh case pe dhyan de? Arjun asks curiously.

How rude, curses Lavanya under her breath, Arjun weirdly stares at her with his hands folded to his chest.

The couple talk for about half an hour, when Lavanya gets bored and walks off rudely.

Baby chalo na please yeh kya hai itna time chalo ab , Lavanya calls out.

Excuse me just a minute says ASR ( he walks over to her)

The team is watching and listening to there convo

Babes just a give me 10 more mintues please we are almost done . says ASR

What is this ASR no im tired pata hai im also am having a horrible headache from this muttion stress .

Baby don't stress we will find her says ASR

No ASR I am stressed not just because of muttion uff but because of nani complains La

Kya hua nani ne phir se kuch kaha kya? Says ASR

Of course kaha she again started taunting me ASR Ms .kashap ye ms kashap woh ghar ki bahu aisa kar the ho wiasa kar the oh GOD ASR WHY CANT SHE GET IT IM NOT THE GHAR KI BAHU BUT YOUR GIRLFRIEND ! pata hai she hates me she hates us being together . she always says chote ko aane do phir dehko . says Lavanya with tears

Team is just like huh really now

What the …Lavanya baby I'll talk to nani she cant keep acting like this with you she has to get

That im the one who brought you home ..and anyways aaj nahi tho kal she has to accept our live in …baby don't worry just calm down come sit . says asr

Rathore n arjun are like live in

No asr abhi chalo wiase bhi hum dono ko jaldi jaana hai says La

Jaldi kyun kahaan jaana hai ? asks ASR

(holding his tie ina sexy way )Baby jaana tho kahi bhi nahi par there is a surprise for you ghar pe says La and winks )

Really surprise huh and who kya hai he said smirking

Saber ka phaal meetha hota hai arnav singh raizada she said while smiling

ab chalo she starts to pull his tie and walk

MEN are shocked

ARJUN and Rathore are just very disgusted at this girls antics

La kya kare ho baby(he pulls her hands off him) you go in the car I'll be there in 2min promise

Ok fine but 1 min says la she walks out of the office just like she came sawying her hips and marching off like she was walking on the runway for a fashion show .

He walks over to the men while fixing his tie and shirt collar

ASR once again apologizes clenching his teeth (I hate saying sorry grrr he growled silently) I'm sorry for her behaviour she's not well very stressed, so she has been throwing tantrums all around today. Sorry for her behaviour. Actually she's my secretary aka girlfriend you know woman na so, you know how it is.

Rathore: It's okay Mr Raizada your wife was much of a help for us as well.

Ohh I'm sorry you're girlfriend said Rathore clenching his teeth.

ASR leaves

What just happened said chotu

Haan yaar yeh tho huare ri ki jaise hai says shree

How dare you shree yells arjun

Yeh itne cheap aur down market larki is not like m.. our riya

Haan Rawte is right she .. No not at all

Riya was always dressed decently even in modern clothes she knew her limits but this Lavanya chi says arjun

Just like everyone has a moral compass Riya always used it in the right way she never did anything thst would ashamed her family or her self . but her and her boyfriend how casulaly and they are openly talking about their live in disgusting yells Rathore

Par sir aaj kal tho yeh sab hota hai aur hark is ki pass girlfriend boyfriend hote hai says chotu

Chotu har cheese ki liye ek haad hot hai fine girlfriend /boyfriend is also fine jaane do but LIVE IN says Rathore

Haan Rathore is right yeh larki oi moral compass hai hi nahi ache larkiyaan aisa nahi kar the chotu

Achi tho Riya thi she lived with dignity but yeh Lavanya god she was just too much did you see how she was acting playing with ASR's shirt pulling his tie arjun rolls his eys in disgust

Haan cheap tha bhoat hi cheap harkat thi par uska woh boyfriend bhi kuch kaam nahi hai says Rathore

Wahi tho Rathore theel kah the log mathches are made in heaven dono itne cheap hai says ARJun

Nahi sir mera dil kah ra hai ki she is just like ri infact I feel ri sent her to us we should not judge her and give her a chance says shree

They all are sunned at shree's words

Precap: ch 2 asr don't worry loss itna nahi hai statics show ki only 20% of los we wil face while on the other hand our biggest rieval Kohinoor fashion house armaan suri has faced 95% loss and seasons inda 87% so we are very lucky don't worry baby ill go research more about the inccedent and other major Fashions houses and let you know says La

La baby thanks after hearing tumahre yeh percentages I feel a sense of relief

The team is hsocked to hear the whole conversation

Yaar yeh tho bilkul ri hai says shree

Sirf percentage bolne koi ri nahi ban sak thi says arjun

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting plot hai...
Lavanya and ASR...entry in Arjun...WoW...nice twist in the tale.!!
And did Arjun call Riya as Ri...and he was praising Riya...thats cool too...
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he he laxmi missing...loved it:)
Edited by prava55663 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow yaar intersting story it is
continue soon
send me pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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intresting part...continue soon.. thnx for PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice update Fiza di & Shru 👍🏼
Arjun is praising Riya 8th miracle 🤣
well are we going to have Arjun Lavanya track in future?? that will be interesting..
just one question,do Riya n Lavanya look alike(humsakal)??
great update,continue soon..waiting 😊
Edited by KiSha13 - 12 years ago
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Shru la ko ria bana diya yaar ab yehi ek rasta reh gaya hai shayad
btw superb update loved la's seduction .wating for more
thanks for pm

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