New SS:Phir Mohabbat Kar Ne Chala Chap1 pg4 3/11

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Warning...: Please don't throw chappals on me because this concept is totally not minešŸ˜† its my di's aka Fiza's concept I'm just a helping handšŸ˜³šŸ˜‰ I hope you all like this I really hope if not for me then please do like it for my sisteršŸ˜‰ nahi toh sabko ek ek karke pitungi *just kidding* I seriously want to tell you guys I don't intend to hurt anyone reminding what happened recently in the show I know we should move on and that is what this here is about? I guess! I love you allšŸ¤— Last thing This is a JOINT SS...!
Wait yaar don't run.. read this!!!
Phir Mohabbat Kar Ne Chala...

Prologue

"Mujhe Pyaar dikhana nahi ata?
Mujhe bato'n ka jaal bnana nahi ata?
Kash k "Wo" samjh jati bin kahe?

Arjun read this as a smile crept on his face, and a sudden sadness that hit him as he read the last line

Mujhe Mohabbat ko lafzo me kehna nahi ata"

He anxiously closed the book and paced around in his lodge room.

He remembered their first meeting 'hmmm pagal' he muttered under his breath. He looked out of his window to find a mother and her teen daughter friendly arguing over boys. It was quite loud he could hear their conversation clearly in his balcony. Arjun once again remembered the incident where Riya had become upset in the end of Kanika murder case.

Ye mujhe kya ho raha hai he thought to himself with moist eyes. He glanced at the study table he saw the pink pen, he picked it up and twirling around his fingers glanced at the 'ETF dairy' once again. Riya's ETF dairy to be specific. He opened the first page

'Please don't touch'

'Shreee I know if you touch my dairy' Tumhara murder karungi mai. Arjun read the words in bold.

He twirled Riya's pen around once again, when suddenly Arjun felt he had to pen down something important in her dear dairy.

For You:

'Tujhe apnane k liye bhi ye pachtaye'
Tujhse bhichad kar bhi maan pachtaye
Ye kaise daal daal mai fas gaya hu mai'
Abh apnana chahu toh bhi tu na mil payegi'
Ese bhichde hai jaise kabhi na mil payege hum!!!
Kya kabhi hum mil payege??????????? '

Arjun wrote these few lines in Riya's incomplete diary, he had found a day after her demise.

Why Riya? He questioned his mind as he sat on the couch.

*Flashback

'Sir, mai apke jaise bana chahti hu ek din' Thinking about that he dozed off on his couch hugging Riya's ETF dairy close to his heart...

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Alright feedbacks time... Btw guys a short NOTE: The lines written by Riya was found on net... and Arjun's lines/ Poem was written by mešŸ˜† so predictable right! okay I'm not ranting anymore just hit like and comment! PleasešŸ˜‰
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*Index

Prologue - Pg 1
Chap 1 - Pg 4
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww... 😭 riya dead??
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😳haye your title is very endearing and so romantic...
please continue your joint SS😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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anarkali loved prolouge n thank u for being apart of this ss n helping me big hug
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The title is of my fav song ..

OMG i luved d lines ...d one written by u .

Luking fwd to the story ...it sounds interesting


PS: i luvd d siggy u r using..(arjun roshni one ),...its so nice ..nice editing
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sounds realy interesting shru..waiting..

res*

i will edit here when you un res.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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really nice start... luvd it... continue soon...
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hey it is different concept continue
plz send me pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Shru its wonderful .continue soon n pm me when u update

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