Ariya SS: Jab tak hai Jaan..(Epilogue) 29/10

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hiddenpearl

@hiddenpearl

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Tat was really emotional...her letter for everyone touched my heart Yaar...well written...thank god she is safe...can't wait to read more...how she is going to react when she wil know tat they all red her letter...and now arjun knows tat she loves him...and good part is arjun want her too...hey buddy...had tears in my eyes while reading this ...loved it...pls update the next one soon

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despicable_me

@despicable_me

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#92

So, I was in a restaurant & I was howling like a baby while reading this which was quite embarrassing for my very own kharus samjhe ya samjhau...☺️ but ah well, who cares! 😛

This is terrific. Had goosebumps reading this! ⭐️ You are heck of a writer! 👏

Update soon! Pileeez ❤️

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Niki

@luvzindagi

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Hey Avantika Di,
Have I ever told you that you are an Absolutely AMAZING writer...
You know taking people's leave is the most difficult task when you know that you are dying, I have seen my grandfather do it and have experienced his pain...
And you have done it on Riya's behalf so beautifully, that I couldn't help but let my tears run down my cheeks... You were Fantastic in portraying every emotion, her friendship with Shree and Chotu, her request and respect for her senior, and her care and her unconditional and undying love for Arjun...
You created magic in describing every bit of this update...
And Finally thank you so much for saving her...
Lastly can I request you one thing? I know this was the last part of this SS, but it will be great if we can get a happy epilogue for this one... specially after Arjun realized his love for her and she is alive
Its just a request...
Thanks for the PM

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JennyPenny

@JennyPenny

Elite

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Gosh. kept telling myself, it;s a fan fiction, it's a show, these are characters, then imagined Shaleen-Sana enacting this scene to perfection and had tears in my eyes. just brilliant.

I seriously feel like sending this to Gorky which I will. I dont know if he will ever read it, but at least he can draw some inspiration. He needs to be told how amazing this show is and it's the cast that makes the show work.

Listening to this beautiful piece with this story - it's haunting: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fr9hhgoWBeI

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Sara

@immayurfan

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

amazing part
thanks for the pm

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mushiroxx

@mushiroxx

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#96

hey avantika...this was an emotional roller-coaster...👏

all the three letters...they were touching...while shree-chotu's letter that riya wrote for them made me smile...riya really cared for them...
rathore's letter made me cry ...riya understood the soft man behind that no non-sense exterior...😳

n arjun's letter...tears were dripping down my eyes n that too unintentionally...that was fantastic piece of writing...👏

arjun's sobs n him gripping riya n holding her in his arms n lying next to her as if making sure that she is there with him...😭

rathore saw that n he didn't interrupt...he is really arjun's best friend...he understands arjun like no other..👍🏼

riya finally is responding...yaaayyy...can't wait fro her to open her eyes...😛

update soon dear...😉

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Isha

@gilmore

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#97

just wonderful love the letter

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simple_dimple93

@simple_dimple93

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#98

amazing, pm me when u update again

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Hooria

@hooriaa

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#99

Amazing Updates
I Was In Tears Aww Riya Trust Her To Write Letters
True Friend Explaining To Her Friends To Settle Down Get Married
Awwrr
She Managed To Explain To Rathore That Treat Arjun As Arjun Nt ACP Arjun Rawte
The Letter To Arjun Jus Made Me Speechless When She Sed That Far In Another World 2 People Love U The most And Will Be. Praying For U Awwrrr
Finally She Is Alive Thank God Love Ya For This
Arjun's Breakdown Was Jus So Sad
Loved How In Each Letter Arjun Was Mentioned
Update Soon And PM Me Please
Thanksz x