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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome start dear...😊

i like the starting part the intro...😊

so friends new ff is come...😛
Edited by kaveriw2008 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22

Been feeling lost, can't find the words to say

Spending all my time stuck in yesterday

Where you are is where I want to be

Oh next to you... and you next to me

Oh I need to find you... yeah


Chapter 2

"Kehte hai, jinhe banaya hai ek duje ke liye woh bichar k bhi mil jaate hai'."

ETF head quarters

Riya walked in as Rathore, Shree and Chotu were leaving and stopped on their track!

Shree stared at her in awe where chotu and rathore were wondering who she was. Observing that they have Guns and of course chotu, she knew they're ETF members.

"Riya Mukherjee.. Sir" unsure of whom to say this to, she looked at three of them while saying her name.

"Oh! Welcome Riya. I believe I can call you by your name?" Said rathore. "wah! Ladki ki liye itna chivalry!" murmered chotu so that only shree'd hear.

"Sure Sir." Smiled Riya. "well, he seems fine not like typical kharus boss." Riya thought.

"Btw, I'm Sameer Rathore. ETF chief." Rathore introduced himself while going for a handshake.

"Main Chotu." Smiled chotu widely. "chotu?!?" riya thought and giggled a little.

"Aur main hu Shreekant desai. But tum mujhe pyaarse Shree bula sakte ho." Said shree with a *Rahul-naam to suna hoga!* look!

"aab tum aa hi gayi ho toh kaam karle thora? I assure you Gossip k liye humhe pay nehi kiya jaata" Rathore bawled suddenly. Well, they have some of their precious time on this useless introduction. Aur pata nehi Raute aab tak kya kya samjha chukka hoga murda ko! Rathore grinned on his own thought. He left while giving his trademark look to three of them.

"I take my words back. Yeh kharoos hi hai!" Riya said loudly. Then looked at the other two, biting her tongue. "ooops, sorry."

Shree and Chotu looked at each other and nodded in agreement and said smiling, "You are in! Humari dosti pakki hai." Riya laughed but her laughter was cut by rathore's shout. She hurriedly grabbed the badge and gun chotu handed her, murmured a quick thank you and left. She got into the car with Rathore as he had to brief her about the case. Chotu and Shree followed then in a different SUV.


Crime Scene

A lady on her late 20's was brutally murdered and the murderer left her body lying on a deserted street. She had some horrifying cuts all over her body and the worst part was, it was visible that she was abused before being murdered.

Arjun was observing the area around it. A deep forest that ends at a different part of the city. Beside that there were few houses and shops around that area. Arjun went to talk to a nearby shopkeeper.

Two SUV stopped near the crime scene. All four of them got out of the SUV and went near the corpse. Riya felt like throwing up but somehow controlled herself. She took her diary out to take notes and bending out a little to scrutinize the dead body. How ruthless!, she thought.

At the same time, Rathore had spotted Arjun. And they discussed about the case. Raute had found out that the chai wala had heard a car coming at night but didn't bother to look out as it was a highway and cars pass by here pretty often. So, no luck with that. Arjun said he was going to the neighborhood to ask if anyone of them have seen anything.

Meanwhile, Riya went near the car to grab a pair of rubber gloves. Arjun was coming that way as well. Riya was searching for gloves when suddenly Arjun noticed a girl barging in their SUV. Arjun paced up and caught her hand while turning her to face him. Before he could yell at her for assaulting ETF's stuff and before she could use one of her karate technique, their eyes fell on each others faces. And it was like the world has stopped rotating.


Millions of emotions went through them at that moment. Love, concern, happiness, wonder, anger, you name it! It was pure bliss! After all, they met again after 5 years! 5 years, a long time!


They both teared up and couldn't say anything. They were just staring at each other and making genuine gestures that speaks how much they have missed each other and longed for one another. But suddenly, the reality hit them. No, she can't be here, he thought. And turned away from her. "oh hell! This is not him. Just one of my bhootiya imagination" she notioned.

"Raute, riya, tum dono waha kya kar rahe ho?" came Rathore's voice.

"Raute?!" Riya whispered horror-strucked and turned back to see Arjun staring at her shocked.

"Tum?" He bellowed while yawning at her.

"Tum?" she shrieked as if the earth under her was slipping away.

Chotu, Shree and Rathore looked at them with bewilderment while the duo stared at each other devoid of any knowledge around them.


Precap : Flash Back! Pehli mulakat! 17 ki Riya aur 18 ki Arjun 😉 Woh bhi Exchange program pe! 😲


Do comment and leave your feedback!😊

Edited by despicable_me - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
awesome..loved it 😊
intro of riya to etf ..
so first meeting wid a "tum,tum"
pretty gud 😊
do pm me wen u update..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
Beautiful.this one is surely going to b exciting
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
wahhh...kya baat hai...17 ki riya aur 18 ka arjun ...dono teenager kitane cute lagate honge...

i like ur start of the story with one line of poem...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26

I remember what you wore on the first day.
You came into my life and I thought
"Hey, you know, this could be something"


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Chapter 3


"Tum dono ek dusre ko jaante ho?" came rathore's confused voice. But neither of them replied to their senior but just stared at each others eyes while thinking about the day they met first.

*flashback*

Riya Mukherjee, dressed in casual jeans and tees, signed in with her luggages. Her parents were already talking with the organizers of the event to make sure that their little princess gets everything she'd need. Well, after all, she was Riya Mukherjee, daughter of mr. Piyush Mukherjee, one of the renowned businessman of India. Almost everyone in Kolkata knew who she was and she Hated it!

Yes, she hated being on the front row. She was simple and liked being invisible. Not that she was introvert but she was shy and quiet. But once she gets to like you and gets friendly with you, God bless you my child!

That is why she decided to go on this exchange program. It was an one year full scholarship program where selected students get to go to USA and spend an year there. A very good opportunity to grow up and get to see the world by urself, she'd thought while applying. And there she was going to USA in 15 days with 10 more students coming from various area of India. Now they're having their pre-departure orientation here in Mumbai for 15 days. All the students were placed in different states with an American host family. Riya was going to Maryland.

"Ma" she called to her mom, annoyed. Her mom hurried to her, "haan bolo, kuch chahiye aapko?"
"haan, thori shanti!" Riya said. "Ma, main kuch din baad jaa rahi hu, tab bhi agar aap dono aise hi pareshan rahoge toh kaise chalega?"

"beta, hum aapki liye pareshan hai, isiliye yeh sab.." She was cut by Riya screaming out for her Dad. "Baba!"

Her father came rushing to her. If there was one person mr. Piyush feared in this world, it'd be his daughter, his life, Riya!

"Kya hua?" he asked concerned. "Yeh hua hai" riya said pointing at her father's concerned face. "Aap itni pareshan kyu ho rahe ho. Bhorosha rakho amar proti!" She said.

"Dear, if I didn't trust you enough, I'd never let you do this. It's just you are my little princess and I want the best for you." He said cupping his daughters face.

"I know baba. But don't make it so hard for me." She hugged her dad. Gosh, staying away from them will be so hard.

She went inside the hall where their introduction orientation was being held. All the other participants were already sitting inside and the orientation was about to start. So, she didn't get any chance to talk to anyone. But alas, she did not get unnoticed by the boys. They were ogling at her. She was after all, what people said, Aphrodite, the goddess of beauty.

Noticing the attention, she quickly grabbed the sit assigned for her. The next sit next to her was empty as that participant didn't come yet. Next to that sit, a girl wearing salwar-kurta was sitting. She looked at riya and smiled. In reply, Riya flashed one of her dimple smile at her. One of the organizer was about to start the event when someone opened the door and entered. Everyone had their eyes on the door as he entered.

"He's ' well, handsome." That's what Riya thought. "Okay, may be devilishly handsome!" she corrected herself after hearing all the girls going gaga over him and she could literally hear the girl next to her gasp. He was tall and perfectly in shape. Typical heartthrob of movies, she thought.
"no matter how handsome he is, he's late!" Riya turned away and faced infront.

To her dismay, the sit next to her was occupied by the same person that has turned every girls present in the hall go lala (maybe, including her). "Hi" he whispered to her giving her a tug at her heart.

Riya turned to look at the most gorgeous face in this world. Dark hair falling on his forehead, dressed in black shirt, compelling dark chocolate eyes. He was giving one of his smirking to her. Well, she deserves at least his one breathtaking smile when he was going to take something from her. Her sanity!

But before she could say something, the orientation started. Soon enough, they were asked to introduce themselves. One by one, they hosted themselves. The girl next to Arjun stood up and started introducing herself.

"Hey all. My name is Roshni Damsingh Rathore and I am from Mumbai. I'm placed in Maine and I'll be a senior there." She shyly said and sat down while looking at the person next to her who was giving her a smile. [yeah, kill me!]

Everyone clapped and waited for him to introduce himself.

"Good morning everyone. I'm Arjun Suryavant Raute from Mumbai. " giving a nod to roshni. "Raute!!! Naam toh suna hai kahi." Riya wondered.
he continued "And I'm placed in the state of sunshine, Florida." Everyone clapped and few girls were cheering out loud. Girls!, Riya thought and stood up.

"Hey, Good morning. I'm Riya Piyush Mukherjee from Kolkata, India. I am placed in Maryland. Hoping to have a great year ahead." She sat down after giving all of them her dimple smile. Arjun asked her between the clapping "You know you're accent is pretty good." "Well, thank you. I must agree your one is excellent." She whispered him back. He gestured thank you in sign language. "sign language huh!" she smirked.

After the introduction and briefing came the saddest part. Families had to leave and say goodbye. Riya was with her parents when Arjun, with his parents came to them. "Shaadi ka proposal leke aaye kya?" She told herself and chuckled. Mr. Mukherjee and Mr. Raute turned out be childhood friends and they have common business interest that both Riya and Arjun were unaware about. Their parents were started talking and Riya-Arjun just stood there not knowing what to do. They looked at each others and busted out laughing. "parents!" she said. Their parents stopped seeing them laugh. They said bye to each other and giving hugs and final goodbyes.

Mothers being mothers, Riya's mom took Arjun to one side and asked him to take care of Riya and himself as she's stubborn to ask for any help. Arjun promised her that he'll always take care of Riya.

On the other side, Arjun's mom made Riya promise that she'd take care of Arjun and be with him whenever he needs anybody. Riya smiled and assured her.

After the excruciating goodbyes, the students were escorted to their rooms. Riya was in the same room with Roshni. Riya got freshened up and went outside after chatting with roshni for a while.

She was sad. But she couldn't let anyone see it. She chatted with roshni to cheer Roshni up while inside she just wanted to burst into crying. She found the staircase room that no one knew about and sat there quietly. But soon enough, someone sat next to her. She looked upto meet Arjun's eyes which spoke sadness also but he was smiling.

"Tum yaha akeli kya kar rahi ho?" He asked. "Football khel rahi hu." She joked smilingly.

"Kitne goal kiya abhi tak?" he grinned. "ek bhi nehi." She pouted.

He smiled at her cuteness. "vaise main acha khasa khel leti hu. Team mein logi toh fayda tumhara hi hai?" he grinned.

"Hmmm.. aisa kya! Sochne do." She acted like she was thinking. And smiled at him.

"So, miss Riya mukherjee, mujhse dosti karogi?" he asked giving his hand forward.

"Sochlo mr. Arjun Raute!" she chuckled. "Sochliya! Two is better than one!" he said.

And they laughed and started their endless journey to friendship and much more.


So maybe it's true

That I can't live without you

And maybe two is better than one

But there's so much time

To figure out the rest of my life

And you've already got me coming undone

And I'm thinking two is better than one


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Precap : More flashback : Arjun-Roshni, Arjun- Riya

Present: Riya saving Arjun or Arjun saving Riya. Golmaal ghotala!


Okay, so! I dont know how it went. main idhar episode k baare mein soch soch k buddhi ho rahi hu. So pileez, agar acchi nehi hai toh joote saturday k baad marneka!
Dhonnobad!😳


p.s : Happy dushera and shuvo durga puja! 🤗

Edited by despicable_me - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
awsome update
continue soon
send me pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
loved it 😃
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Gracias everyone! ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
nice ...i like it...

want to know more about ariya friendship

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