FF- [And I'll try to fix you] *Discontinued*

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#201

The flashback was great...Arjun such a caring friend, cares about Riya so much.
You're an adorable puddle..that was too cute ^_^
Drugs kharidne k liye apni behen ko kidnap kiya...what kind of people live in this world..??
Riya's fyn now..everyone was so worried about her..
It was awesome update..
Loved it..<3

Edited by Princeess07 - 12 years ago

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DEEPZzzz

@DEEPZzzz

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#202

awesome part thanks for the pm

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#203

Di
me cum here dancing
me bad bad girl lol
i will nt try i ll fix u
DISCONTINUED
huh
awesum part ekdum
fb wow!!
case super wala int
pihu nyc name
mentos 🤣
bomb omg!!
punit haila beta drugs aur paise h
pagal
phew riya safe
haye mere bhaiya ka concern u rock di
love u
hugs
ps. tc n enjoy..!

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ehmmbh_luvr

@ehmmbh_luvr

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#204

amazing😃...loved it!😊
the flashback scenes were so cute...couldnt stop grinning😳
the case was really good😃...our super cop is always able to pick up some or the other hint😛
well the moment u decided to send riya all alone i knew kuch to hone wala hai...!
it felt i couldnt breathe for a second when she was diffusing the bomb...i loved arjun's desperation!
tahi yr ek proper conversation kara do na humare hot cop n riya ke beech😃
continue soon...its getting interesting as the story is progressing.

P.S good that u forg ot the stupid idea of discontinuing an amazing story like this😊

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BitterBerry

@BitterBerry

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#205

Fb ws great.
Hotwa really care fr her.
N case was super intresting.
Riya was amazing. Her observation ws fantastic.
I loved this riya of urs.
Thank god she is safe.
Rathod n the whole team cares fr her
loved to see their bond.

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scorp1AN

@scorp1AN

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#206

that was a awesome update... love the flashbacks... hoping for riya and arjun to get together fast... can't see them suffering... lovely update... thank god nothing happened to riya... arjun must have been so tensed and the last line arjun uttered "you are a bad girl", seemed funny but at the same time, it also depicts that arjun is really missing his riya... can't wait to see everything alright between them... please update soon! i am so eager to read the next update already!

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Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#207

Hey its nice concept and nice update wating for ariya romance and plss continue soon i am eagerly waiting to read next update

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573339

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#208

fantastic update :) loved it

flashback was so cute

awww how sweet of riya she out the pillow under his head

and i can literally imagine riya ruffling his hair :)

and then arjun gave her his jacket :) how cute

the case was very interesting

punit is so cheap.. he kidnapped his own sister just for drugs

thank god riya diffused the bomb at the right time

love how everyone was so worried for riya

the last part was super cute when arjun said "You are a bad girl riya"

can't wait to read more

thanks for the pm

continue soon

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#209

Rathod's line cracked me up when he says "In dono ka kuch nai ho sakta.😆.Ho sakta hai bhai,bahot kuch ho sakta hai ,agar Tahi chahe to 😉.Aur aisi serious situation per bhi both are arguing.This is possible only with this two🤪.But what i liked the most in this update is the last line where Mr.Arjun Rawte says "U r a bad girl"😆😆 but that was super cute😊

Edited by ariyaFan - 12 years ago

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neeraja

@life93

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#210

hi dhriti di🤗...awesome...

arjun as a caring friend 😃😃😃...you are bad girl...lovely dialouge...finaly riya saved the kid... puneet kidnapped her own sis for drugs😲😲😲😲...bomb wala secne really scary...