SS: The Guilt (Discontinued NOTE at page 42)! - Page 18

Originally posted by: Moumimon

ohhh...love it...post next part soon...

Originally posted by: rockz.diva

awsomeee dear loved it so much waitng for nxt prt :)

Originally posted by: sbp1971

Mushi I am so glad you decided to continue this story as I hoped that you would. Thank you.

I loved the update especially the part where Riya stayed strong and didn't cave into her teams demands and pleading.

But what happened to make her afraid of shooting?

Waiting for the next part, update soon.

Originally posted by: littlebrat

want to read further so update soon... appreciate your writing skills👏

Originally posted by: Radhika Shah

Great...

Originally posted by: fasa

superb part

eagerly waitng for next part

plz update soon

Originally posted by: Queen.Bee

fab chapter.. update soon!!!

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

mushi kamaaal hai yaar ...kya entry mari hai tune

awesome likha hai yaar...OMG OMG OMG

arjun and riya face-off...hey dear please update kar na

isse padhane ke baad to mein aur currious ho gayi hoon ki ab aahe kya hoga/...

Originally posted by: arul01

that was excellent... now arjun wants answers from riya... i wonder why she quit? she could have stayed on and proved but she quit... there must be something behind that decision! can't wait to know what exactly is that! please update soon! i am so excited to know the reason and also the confrontation! arjun asking questions and what is riya going to answer!

Originally posted by: -sree13-

hi mushy I am realy happy that you dicided to continue..thank you so much.

it was a great part..love the way Rathod,Shree & Chotu is trying to convince her.

OMG Rita is answering firmly to Arjun,realy I am getting impatients to know about Arjun's question.

update soon dear,waiting