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Sanchayita

@Love_Arnie

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#131

Loved this one... Rhea's emotions are descripted faboulasly... She shooted being blind-folded... Terrific!
And Rathore n Rawte still had doubt on her... They deserve a good scolding from the commisioner!
The commissioner is a good person... He gave another chance to Rhea...
And the 7 days break... Tell me honestly, is Rhea taking the leave or u're taking these holidays in camaflague???
Don't you dare stop writing... Do u know how awesome r u at writing... U're just superb!
So, please update soon... Thanks a lot for the PM... Take care...

Edited by SanchayitaM - 12 years ago

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Rong_ria

@Rong_ria

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#132

ohh it just hit me,my heart .want next part so badly.update it soon

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#133

Oh nice

I wonder wat is her past

Hope her response is positive

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mitraseth

@mitraseth

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#134

MUSHI!!!!! loved it so much!!!!!👏

All of Riya's emotions...they were portrayed beautifully...the way someone would feel when they accidently hear something like this😭...n d shooting range...just amazing!!! Rathore n Arjun's convo was also excellent...how they discussed Riya's state, without actually wanting to send her away and looking for ways to hold her back...just brilliant!!!👏

It was heartbreaking the way Riya left😭 and u cannot leave us with that!!!! U absolutely have to continue!!!!😊😊

I know how it feels..when I heard the news about Sana, I just went and deleted the file with my update...but U can't just drop it Mushi...when I felt down, I came and read ur SS and actually felt better!!! For all the readers out there, this'll mean a lot...they are gonna feel better for having these SS, FF, OS...so u keep going gal!!!!😊

And please post the next update soon!!!😉😉😉

oh...and...Sorry for the late response...but we'll conveniently forget that😆

Love

mitzzy