FF: Fire and Water (Ch. 26-A Updated on Pg.145!)

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ValleryRose

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Hey you commented!!!
(Just now replied to you..lol)
Checked it just now!

Thanks a lot dear...!
😆 I'll make sure I PM you for the next update!

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kaveriw2008

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Posted: 12 years ago

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wow dear this is so amazing ...i wish ki avantika thik ho...

dear i have doubt are u sure that its only a ff...dear this is really a book you should...publish this...

love Fire and water...love ariya...

thanks for the pm dear...

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ValleryRose

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: kaveriw2008
wow dear this is so amazing ...i wish ki avantika thik ho...

dear i havedoubtare u sure that its only a ff...dear this is really a book you should...publish this...

love Fire and water...love ariya...

thanks for the pm dear...

Thank you dear.. 😊

This is a book for me not just an FF.. Fire and Water is one of my treasures..
Thank you so much for appreciating my work..

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kaveriw2008

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: ValleryRose

Thank you dear.. 😊

This is a book for me not just an FF.. Fire and Water is one of my treasures..
Thank you so much for appreciating my work..

hardwork will appreciate any how...

and your hardwork is for ariya is love for them...and i love this...

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Mahima

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Posted: 12 years ago

#665

Another gr8 update

The prasad scene was awesome

😃

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ll-Shilpa-ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#666

Another fantastic update, with lots of revelations, loved it.

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ValleryRose

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Thanks a lot for all your comments guys!!!
Will update ASAP! 😉

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Avantika

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Hey.. Thanks for all the previous PM's.. I just read the last 3 Chapters in a go! Needless to say, they were brilliantly drafted.. Also, I love the pace at which the story's progressing.. Perfect!

Chap 17-1: So, Arjun's warming up to Riya.. I hope they put an end to this awkwardness soon.. But then again, life isn't all hunky-dory.. Also, that insight into Riya's past was awesome.. These two sisters definitely shared a beautiful bonding! I wonder how Riya will react when she finds out that Arjun's dead wife was her own Taayi..

Oh and yes! They found Saumya!! 😃 Aww.. poor thing was held captive..

Chap 17-2:

Rathore's family received them all, esp. Avantika.. I wish Rathore and Avantika sort out everything from their past and begin afresh.. And Saumya is too cute.. so many questions!!

Well, that Arjun-Riya terrace scene was brilliantly executed.. So, finally she's mustered courage and spoken up.. He definitely needed that advice.. And well, it was soo gentle-manlike of Arjun to have apologised to her.. Poor fellow is in a turmoil.. I wish he's able to get over his past sometime soon.. Coz he really deserves every bit of Riya's care and love.. 😊

Chap 18:

Another beauty! Sameer and Avantika's past was tragic.. Glad they're together..

Riya's inner turmoil and confusion was aptly described.. 😊
So, he's accepted the prasad! She understands his unspoken words and completes his sentences!! Well, that's a beginning.. 😉
Oh and the best bit was Rathore and Avantika's realisation.. I hope they play cupid now..

OMG! Avantika!! I hope she's safe.. Can't wait to read more.. All in all, 👏👏

Do update soon.. And please PM me when u do..