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elle..

@elle..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Plz sum1 write mine one too which i mentioned above shree chotu rathore teasin arjun abt riya nd no roshni past

Thhnnnx liiziiie

Edited by sweetdoc - 12 years ago

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Lizzie Mathew

@-Lizzie-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

I hav already written about it!!!! Roshni's past is not mentioned

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Good one yaar!
Shree - You look awesome when you smile Aanya.
Arjun passing by turns to look at him
Arjun - Why is the noodle head talking to his laptop? And he has given it a name?
Shree - Aaj raath ko? *smiles naughitily* kyun kya plan hain darling?
Shree hands reached out to his screen and Arjun's eyes popped out.
Shree - Hayye meri chammak challo! Paas aana ek chumma dhoonga.
Arjun flees the place at that and this makes Shree turn.
Shree (through blue tooth , looking at the girls photo in his lap) - Jaan humaari romance ne Arjun sir ko bhi dara diya.

Next - Rathod and Arjun trying to get Riya a b'day gift.

Edited by FeistySoul - 12 years ago

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salta

@salta

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

ETF is present in some police dept. function and Riya and Rathore are dancing together, Chotu has met his dept. store girl in the party, and Arjun is fuming seeing Riya with Rathore…….. Then he spots shree with a girl……

Shree: Excuse me…. Ye rose aapke liye*reveals his dimpled smile*

Girl: *takes the rose and smiles* Thank you very much…. Ye red roses bahut jyada beautiful hain….

Shree:* smiling, hesitant* par aapse jyada nahin…… aur vaise bhi ye aapki dress ke saath kitna match kar rahe hain…..

Girl: Tm bhi bahut jyada cute ho…..tumhare dimples seriously bahut achhe hain……

Shree: Really………. Actually tum to iphone 5 se bhi achhi ho….. anyway tumhe pata hai ki main tumhare liye kuch bahut jyada special karna chahta hoon……..

Girl: Really kya………

Shree: Tum apne sapnon mein jaisa bhi gadget dekhti ho, mujhe bata do main bana doonga…..

Girl: What….?? Tum pagal ho kya??

Arjun comes, smiles and says gadget freak…. Tumhari engagement ho chuki hai…….. machines, chemicals se…. then he held out his hand and said…. "hey sweetheart would you like to dance….." and went on the dance floor with her.

Arjun and Riya cute fight on hygiene ……….

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

nice one, the part shree already being engaged to chemicals and gadgets...

Arjun and Riya alone in ETF office, and have spent hours working on a case, shree, chotu n rathore outside investigating...

Riya: Hmmm, i feel so tired and hungry

Arjun: Riya yeh case tumhare hunger se zyada important hein...

Riya: But Sir, mein agar kuch nahin khaungi, to behoche par jaoungi

Arjun(roll his eyes): ok ok meri maa😆, outside on the road some1 is selling chana puri, i'l go and buy some and its too late for anything else...

Riya: 😕 what???/ Apka dimag to theek hain, mein aur aisi cheez khaoungi???/ never???

Arjun; Riya, you choose its either hunger or hygiene??? Your choice😆

Riya; Lekin sir, woh chana puri mein kha paoungi, bimar to nahin par jaoungi???

Arjun: You are just a hygiene freak Riya????

Riya: Sir...😡

Next: Riya flirting with shree as a joke, arjun comes and gets jealous and drags Riya away...

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Mahi

@_mahi_

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Riya was working on the paperwork and she suddenly dropped her file. The papers were everywhere.🤔

Shree came and helped her gather the papers in sequence.😛

Riya - Thanks Shree. You are always a support to me😃

Shree- *pushing back his glasses*🤓 oh the pleasure is mine Riya.. 😛

Riya - oh really? *she winks at him*😉 is all the PPPLLLEEAAsure yours?😲 *she goes near him*😉 would you mine if i steal some pleasure out of Your pleasure babe😆 *they happened to replay the scene of a comedy movie they had watched together the last weekend*

Just then Arjun walked in..😕 Saw the proximity between Shree and Riya.. and their laugh didnt go unnoticed by the hot cop Rawte.

He remembered all the times when Riya cared about him, his cutting chai, his presence, his anger which affected her the most.. He remembered the way he saved her, carried her in his arms.. 😳

Riya and Shree did not notice their senior until Arjun approached them and literally flew outside the office with riya, within few seconds. And threw her on the couch of his personal cabin.😲

Scenario :: Riya breaking down in Arjun's arms because of her past!!!

Edited by _mahi_ - 12 years ago

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Arjun was just walking by when he heard sobs in the next room, he opened the door and saw Riya crying like a child...

He couldnt watch her like and went to take her in his arms.

Arjun: Riya, kya huwa, tum kyun ro rahi ho??? Kisi ne kuch kaha????Stop Crying now i say,samjhe ya samjhayoon

Riya: snifff, woh sir muhje ek call aya tha, meri ma ka...😭, n she started crying again

Arjun: Bass karo, kya bacho ti taraf ro rahi ho... Kya huwa tumhari ma ko???

Riya: in between sobs: Woh mere bhaap has always cheated on my mum, and today haad kardi, he threw my mother out???? My mum beared all his betrayals and insult for so many years n now he threw her out for a girl as old as me😭

Arjun: shhhshhh, stop crying... Life never was a fairy tale Riya, sometimes there's love and happiness, sometimes there's pain... You hv to be strong for your mum... Now stop crying and lets go and look for her...

Rathore getting attracted to Riya and trying to flirt with her😆

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salta

@salta

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Rathore: Hello team.. hi riya*giving special attention to her* are you fine now'

Riya: Yes sir'.. I'm quite alright'.

Rathore: It was really very intelligent of you' I mean tumne bahut achhe se calculation karke site par pahunchi'.. that was very excellent'

Riya: *very happy* really sir''. Thanks'.

Rathore: I am really happy with your work'' So aaj raat dinner par chalein'.. what say?

Riya:*too happy* Sir''' really?? Sure'' I mean'' definitely'..

Arjun: * Rathore tum pagal ho gaye ho'.?? Use tumhare saath dinner par jaane ki nahin mere saath shooting ki practice karni chahiye'' samjhe ya samjhaoon SIR ''?

Riya: Wait a minute both'' aaj raat main aur Rathore sir dinner par chale jaatein hain aur kal se main aur Arjun sir shooting par chale jayenge''' what say guys'..

Arjun and Rathore looking at each other but chotu and shree amused and shouts loudly''' ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC'.

NEXT:Rathore is trying to tell Arjun how to propose riya 😊

Edited by meghasingh - 12 years ago

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Lizzie Mathew

@-Lizzie-

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Sameer: Tho tayyar hai???? Ek batt yaad rakho, girls especially riya ko romantic cheez bahut pasand hai

Arjun: Tho Rathode mujhe ab kya karna hai

Sameer: Mujhse propose karo

Arjun: Kya?

Sameer: Sach mein nahi socho mein riya hu or karo

Arjun: Ok...Riya mujhe tumse ek baat karni hai

Sameer: bolo na arjun sir

Arjun: Aaj mein apni feelings tumhe batana chahta hu... Riya ek bullet aur mein ek gun hu???

Sameer: Kya?????

Arjun: Bullet ke bina gun adhhora hai na...vaise mein bhi tumhari bina adhoora hai

Sameer: tum aisa propose karega???? aise??? marenge vo tumhe!!!!!!

Next scene: Arjun teaching Shree to propose to a girl and tells shree to imagine him as the girl he likes... Shree proposes to arjun and the other ETF members see this..

Edited by lizzie_angel - 12 years ago

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elle..

@elle..

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Omg lizzie...bullet aur gun wala point was awsum..

Lemme now try

Shree-nai sir mujse nahi hoga...vo na kr degi
Arjun-shree!!!tum etf ke member hoke itne coward kaise ho skte ho

Shree.-sir dil ki baat alag h..mai pakka kuch gadbad kr dunga

Arjun-ok..imagine me as sneha...nd propose me
Shree-kya...no sir

Arjun-its an order shree...

Shree goes on his knees with a rose on in his hand says-will u be mine forever??

Chotu shree nd rathore watchin frm d glass door...they cant hear but nly see

Chotu-deva. Ye kya ho rha h...
Rathore-ye raute ka dimaag kharab ho gya h kya...mai shree se better hu 🤡

Riya-ye nai ho skta...arjun sir...aaap sirf mere h :(:(:(

Next::arjun nd rathore tryin to woo d same gal(not riya)

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