bang on post dear ❤Originally posted by: shridharg
Hello everone,
hope you guys are doing fine....i took a break from watching ATBA ...current story got into my system in such way that i had dizziness for few days and the thoughts all the time and too much of ranisa and her dialogues uff...Too much negativity.....i got to know the show going off air long back maybe in june...and this show being very close to my heart was quite heartbreaking...last episode i watched was the nandini's wedding..thought of watching episodes from beginning their nok-jok..friendship ...
And TRP's same since many weeks now...there are no good punch lines for any of the characters...no scope for viewers as no one listens to them what they want from the show...i am in love with this show...
it had unique story at the start...now it's diff...where the characters are not executed properly...like
Dikvijay ,since start he had one dialogue relax hum baitke baat kartein hai...nothing else...whatever the situation might be....
RM..always shouting at wrong people and wrong timing too...and just maintain family fame ...
DV and RM are in quarantine zone since beginning...maintained their social distancing from the situation where they were supposed to take stand being elders in the family .....they have nothing to do with what happens in the family...strong characters are missing ...to bring back TRP..
vikram ..very less dialogues for him ...the connection... Vikram veer rani nandini kiara birju was soo good ..could have been made better story using their relations...strong characters are missing again...to bring back TRP..
Nandini...made her character with no brains...but her costumes are very pretty...she looks fabulous in every episodes...
veer...made promises many times but kept them hardly few...he is soo charming ..very talented sinks in every character very well ...made his character very weak many times ...the name VEER the sound of it is missing under so called RANISA...
.......and till now he bought a pen , an admission form, and books and please dont count that shell necklace... some stuff for studies.... for RANI since they got married ..him being doctor and belongs to royal famiy ..kanjus makhi chuse ....soo much more is missing...AGAIN
Rani....for first 6 -7 months she was like always bhauji....and for a week bring back hubby from jail...got kidnapped....become slave to kiara...for a month in goa...shocking makers gave her same costumes after her kidnap ..who brought those dresses ..it was perfect time for veer to take her shopping ..change of costumes but no no no...Her role could have made stronger in goa ..exams, veer and her relation growth, costume change , romance ,nok jok...definitely trp's would have topped...All we got to listen was kiara's bukwas..for a month veer rani vikram majboori...no logic...applied by writers...
At least new love story either kiara /vik....birju nandini along with veerani ...later on some misunderstaning will do ....seriously kiara memory loss for a month...ranisa entry ..rift apart veerani...right after kidnap...too much to take...after veer's realisation he promised rani to redo everything next moment he's in dilemma after ranisa kept choice....why ...what about rani/wife's pride where ranisa crushed it with using birju's name....and after accident he left rani in baliya what was veer's excuse too much sedatives..? RANI coming back was understandable ...but veer leaving her what was he thinking even if ranisa was against ....what was the plan that he will go meet her later....tell her his majboori...veer's confused soul....even after knowing how ranisa can stoop down to her lowest level..still want to be puppy....what on earth the writers are upto...
Rani's costume change ....first set lehnga choli diff colours...next same pattern saree diff colours ...whole sale market offer definitey....or cost cutting.. or namesake royalty.....just like the car she used to give demo....brakes fail one drive and bhoom....Next....makeup and her hairstyle makes her look sad or old i am confused...no growth in rani's character/role still.... after baliya 2..while talking to veer she said i want to do everything right (by the way she was looking very tired and dull cant believe it was her first new look... saree colour could have been darker with extra makeup and bindi suits her) ...she still believes ranisa is very good but uses diff methods to prove her point ....OMG she did destroy veer and rani's relation using birju's name ...veer's almost near death experience ..saw his blood on road ...she have this opinion about ranisa....HATS OFF TO THE WRITERS and bringing TRP down gracefully...
she used to take rickshaws not cars veer never bothered to ask when she went to meet lawyers and so....writers?
vikram....his silence about his mom's wrong doings in goa /baliya 2 and not discussing that with DY AND RM ...i know they in quarantine since beginning but for TRP...bring him out from comfort zone...
To make a good story each and every character should be involved with best and strong dialogues , romance , quality time anyone...no fun within family or friends ...not even between servants nok jok....now a days family functions get together,music,dance, festivals are trendy....to give TRP a boost...
veer has more mood swings than rani since beginning....that couple dance ...rain dance is missing ....at least give that opportunity to jay and champa..our sad soul will be happy for some extent....i love rani jay combo cold war..they are cute..
RANISA...she is a fabulous actor...she dont have to be negative all the time to maintain her position...she can be sweet poison too...since day 1 same dialogues same expressions loud voice...means missiles are targeted at veer and rani day and night...
no strength in careers ..vikram Rani Veer...kiara NGO..
one episode...1..veer's realisation the night he spent with rani and is sorry for just 1 day and boom accident..leaving promises and rani behind..
2... kiara's ...one insult by ranisa ..she realise her mistake and is sorry for what she's done to rani...and now she's nowhere to be seen thank god ...had to see too much of her in goa...she looks cute but her acting is quite boring....she looks very cute in positive roles .....writers brought her role to positive all of sudden....?
costumes ...everyones costumes are same patterns till date only colour diff...except ranisa ..she changed during nandini wedding and pagphera..
There are no casual meetings ..coffee dates to be seen...with casual outfits ...
Dont be greedy you already got rain romance with veer and rani in baliya 1..(u got to see hand touch,shoulder touch,eye romance and the signature step the fall and hold.. finally the lift ...) actually i was expecting veer would get married in front of all the villagers break bullock-cart wheel set fire hold rani's hand song plays in the background ..(MAI MOTI HU MUJHKO PIYA JI).. the wind the leaves floating .. in between she faints veer get hold on her and her blood dripping down from the wound till cheek and lifts her and take pheras...... ranisa's entry...and HE says she's RANI VEER SINGH RAJAWAT ...And says ..dont you dare pointing finger at my wifey ...cut his finger to apply sindoor ...stupid writers got the job done with only veer's dialogues ...that too she fainted for couple of secs....and with less blood dripping from the wound that emotions was missing ...everytime she gets hurt she wakes up so quickly...all the romance and care love go down the drain....for bauji ,stone hit baliya1 ...car accident "she could have been in hospital ..till veer gets bail next day she's in their room all the flashes coming up about court case wakes up in shock veer nowhere to be seen but others trying to calm her and she calls out dacter saab pull the IV ..starts running to veer and bang to veer at the door and the relief seeing him and the song playing he brings her back to bed everyone leaves....but for writers ...she's ready with bandage to roam around...what's the rush put viewers in emotions ..want to see veer's restlessness to wake her up..sit next to her ..do dressing ...feed her... no no no...... dont bother i am up already and present in court room...
Holi scene..RM asking veer to get rani for pooja ..he goes to the ground search for her (song plays in the background
In lamhon ke daaman mein
Pakeezah se rishte haiKoi kalma mohabbat ka..... colours splashing all around.they show rani covered her face with hands wearing coloured bangles...slowly they show her eyes lips.face the payals.... she's running away from colours and the crowd ....looking for veer ... veer is speechless she is wearing beautiful dress the fall and hold as usaual play with her hair clean the colour from her cheek ...and says Rani.. aap bhi na apna dyan nai rakthi kabhi ...and she replies aap hai na hamara dyan rakne keliye hold her hand bring her inside.... writers ruined everything showing them standing next to each other already before pooja...leaving this to be viewer's dream ...
they have soo many stories ..that it could run for at least a year more ...if properly used....VEERANI story have become like old married couples...give it a break....Once RV matter is solved veer should leave the house ...bring on some spice, paint romance with this song playing background...
Ang laga de re
Mohe rang laga de re
Main toh teri joganiya
Tu jog laga de re... they both are superb dancers...
, kitchen romance ,how about hospital .. enough with car rides...get them bike...veer lacks in expressing himself...want to see actual fahmaan now...he will set the episodes on fire....enough with sad veer bring on fahmaan...
Rani was more fun before getting married ...that naughtiness ..teasing veer ..cute fights...i guess writers should re-read from beginning ...
THEY are going to end it with happy ending .....till then hang in....yesterday 7 pm slot was rush on zeetv....compared to colours and star plus....fingers crossed for veerani...and the trp....
I agree with ur each n every word. 🥰🥰
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