Love me like you do |MaAn TS| Updated Part 2 Pg 3 - Page 4

Originally posted by: DJ_3

This was lovely Hina👏. The dialogues were poignant and the use of their names alone to convey so much emotion. 😳

I feel it was a bit outside your comfort zone too, as you mentioned the ending seemed abrupt. However, I believe it helps writers grow. 👍🏼

exactly, I felt it needed a better ending but like I was telling Mini, I did write a part of the story that felt right but not for the audience here plus erotica is not my thing, I’ll leave to the wattpad people😳

Originally posted by: hinz

dude I wrote this whole wattpad worthy chunk of the story but fir socha nahi yaar bohot ho jayega😳

Save Kiya na? Daalde Wattpad pe!

Atleast PM karde :)

Hina jaanu 😘😘😘😘 Love you for writing such a beautiful piece ❤️ ❤️❤️❤️

”ek minute” and ran to get the aarti ki thaal.

She looked at him lovingly as he circled the thaal around her and got her to do the grehpravesh saying “ab koi vighn nahi hoga, humari nayi zindagi mein tumhara swagat hai Anu!”

Kya baat hai jee 👏👏👏👏👏 Yeh likhke dil pinkie pinkie kar diya tu ne 🤣🤣🤣

Originally posted by: 10Messi

Itni der say tu. Yaha vyast thi....

Or sharma ji ki saari dewatering toot hi gayi aakhir 🤣😂🙈

Maza agaya yrrr... Kiya likha hai... dkp ko bhej dete hain tumhara name agey ki story tumse likh wale.... ...

😆

nahi yaar, I was busy with work stuff

ye toh kal likha tha but I had to make some changes before posting

khair thanks❤️

Originally posted by: Miniwatch

Save Kiya na? Daalde Wattpad pe!

Atleast PM karde :)

Save kiya bhi hai aur nahi bhi😳

I wont feel comfortable chatting to you guys after that isliye cant DM, kabhi anonymous account banaungi wattpad par time miley toh😉

yahan mooh dekhane ke layak na rahungi phir🤣

Originally posted by: hinz

exactly, I felt it needed a better ending but like I was telling Mini, I did write a part of the story that felt right but not for the audience here plus erotica is not my thing, I’ll leave to the wattpad people😳

No worries, I tried to write a scene in T-thread and had a hard enough time. 🤣

I think the story suits the couple, as we expect a certain vibe from them 😆

Originally posted by: hinz

exactly, I felt it needed a better ending but like I was telling Mini, I did write a part of the story that felt right but not for the audience here plus erotica is not my thing, I’ll leave to the wattpad people😳

Hina, mujhe bhi laga ki tu ne apne aap ko restrict karke likha tha. U know when you write there is a free flow of words…here u wanted to say more but nahi bhi karna hai…that confusion was there in you mind. I wanted to ask while I commented phir socha nahi poochti. But since I saw your this comment, I just said it.

Originally posted by: hinz

Save kiya bhi hai aur nahi bhi😳

I wont feel comfortable chatting to you guys after that isliye cant DM, kabhi anonymous account banaungi wattpad par time miley toh😉

yahan mooh dekhane ke layak na rahungi phir🤣

Kuch nahi hota behan dal do wattpad par. Ek say ek tharki hai...

Originally posted by: arya212002

Hina, mujhe bhi laga ki tu ne apne aap ko restrict karke likha tha. U know when you write there is a free flow of words…here u wanted to say more but nahi bhi karna hai…that confusion was there in you mind. I wanted to ask while I commented phir socha nahi poochti. But since I saw your this comment, I just said it.

Arya🤗🤗🤗 my people so get me

arey kuch bhi feel hua bolneka re baba

Originally posted by: hinz

Arya🤗🤗🤗 my people so get me

arey kuch bhi feel hua bolneka re baba

I didn’t want to comment on the OS thread because it could cloud other peoples’ opinions too. I thought I will PM you and say that. Par usse pehle comment dekha toh phir yehi pe post kiya.