MaAn OS: A little thing called Love! - Page 3

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Posted: 3 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: EnigmaticSoul

Oh my! 😍

This was an absolute delight to read!❤️🥺

Such a lovely OS!❤️ I am short of words! Thank you so very much, dear! ❤️


The way you have described every little detail! Of the whole ambience of the party, to emotions of these two souls! Lovely!❤️ I believe in showing more than telling through my writing. I'm glad it came across well.


Interesting that GK would go and do something like giving Anu Anuj's diary unbeknownst to him! 🙈 Story's demand! 🙈


Loved both the shayaris!❤️🥺 And how fitting, Anu using Anuj's way of expressing her own feelings! ❤️ Thank you so much! 🤩🤩


And my goodness the teasing part 🤭 ...

Loved the epic reply "Kahan? Phere Lene? 🤭🤭❤️❤️ Uff!🥰


Love,

Riddhi ❤️

Thank you so much for your lovely words. Means a lot to me! ❤️🤍❤️🤍

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Posted: 3 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: HpTheChosenOne

So cute, so adorable yaar 🥰🥰🥰👌🤗

Bohot pasand aya...

Beautiful... aap aise hi likhte raho.. 😍🤩🤗 (aur tag karte raho ...😁 thank you for the tag!!)

Thank you so much dear! I'll definitely try my best! ❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Meghuzz

Hayee its so sweet...🧡

Thank you! 🤩

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Posted: 3 years ago
#24

Awww such a lovely OS! ❤️ Started out so emotional but then you turned it lighthearted and cute 😆 I don't watch the show so I barely know anything about this couple, but this felt beautiful. Thanks for sharing dear 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: arya212002

Riya, it’s a spectacularly fantastically marvelously splendidly beautifully penned piece dear ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ Thank you so much, dear! ❤️



U have weaved an awesome story with your words and I absolutely loved your writing style💕💕💕. You have described the settings and ambience so wonderfully that I felt as if I am there. No wonder your book was the bestseller of the year… you have awesome talent sweetie 😍😍😍 Aww! That's so sweet of you to say that! I'm glad it came across well.


The shayaris were icing on the cake… so perfect in describing their emotions 🤩🤩🤩 Woh toh Meri style ka tadka humesha rahega hi! 😜



Inching closer, he pressed, "So, you find me young and dashing in clean shave?"

Nudging her shoulder, he joshed, "Kaha? Phere lene?"

Anuj teasing Anu🥰🥰🥰… it’s so cute ☺️ ☺️☺️😉😉😉



Enjoyed reading it 😘😘😘 So happy to know that!


Thank you so much buddy! Really means a lot to me! ❤️🤍❤️🤍

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Posted: 3 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: SKCS

Just adorable 🥰🥰🥰

“Phere lend?” ❤️❤️❤️

Thank you so much! ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: Miniwatch

Waiting to read this, but saving it for Sunday Riya! Hugs!

Take your time, bro! 🤩

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Posted: 3 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Iruuu

Haayee🥺🙈....this one is sooo freaking beautiful 🥰❤️....You just write the bestest one shots😍..keep writing more dear☺️...

Aww! Thank you so much for your lovely words! Will try my best! ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Arshi67

Beautifully written. The blend of melancholy and hope in your words was so poignant. I absolutely loved the poetry. Loved how you wrote of the way ANUj was written in the diary. While I visualised Anuj as GK, I have to confess that the beauty of your thoughts didn't allow me to see RG in the same way. They have ruined her character way too much :(


If I may paraphrase your words,


Kya haseen nazare hain iss raaste pe,

Jo tere alfaaz ki chaukhat pe jaa ke theherta hai


Awww! Such a sweet compliment! Will forever cherish this one! 🤩❤️


I know to what extent they have ruined their own creation remorselessly but what say do we have in here! We could just try to preserve some good memories. I'm doing the same. 🤩


Thank you so much for giving a chance to this one! I'm glad you enjoyed it! ❤️🤍❤️🤍

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Posted: 3 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Bee222

Awww such a lovely OS! ❤️ Started out so emotional but then you turned it lightheaded and cute 😆 I don't watch the show so I barely know anything about this couple, but this felt beautiful. Thanks for sharing dear 🤗

Thought so! 😄😄


Thank you for giving it a chance and for your feedback as well. Means a lot! ❤️

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