MaAn OS: A little thing called Love! - Page 2

Just adorable 🥰🥰🥰

“Phere lene?” ❤️❤️❤️

Waiting to read this, but saving it for Sunday Riya! Hugs!

Haayee🥺🙈....this one is sooo freaking beautiful 🥰❤️....You just write the bestest one shots😍..keep writing more dear☺️...

Hey dear..

I sent your story to my mum... and she was so happy reading it.. she has asked me to convey her love n blessings to you.. and asked to keep writing these beautiful pieces.. full of emotion !!!

Originally posted by: snehaz16

Hey dear..

I sent your story to my mum... and she was so happy reading it.. she has asked me to convey her love n blessings to you.. and asked to keep writing these beautiful pieces.. full of emotion !!!

Hey sneha,

I'm so humbled with the blessings and love from you mom. Thank you so much for your lovely gesture! ❤️❤️

Really means the world to me.

I have a knack of adding philosophical analogies and poetic language in my serious stories! 🤭

I'm already working on my second novel which I presume will go live by the second half of this year! I'm shaping this story for the sake of my readers only who had invested their love and time in this.

I was just losing my motivation and was limping thorough the process but this message provided me the much needed push!

Many thanks for this! ❤️❤️

Give a really warm hug to your mom from my side when you meet her next! 😍😘

Beautifully written. The blend of melancholy and hope in your words was so poignant. I absolutely loved the poetry. Loved how you wrote of the way ANUj was written in the diary. While I visualised Anuj as GK, I have to confess that the beauty of your thoughts didn't allow me to see RG in the same way. They have ruined her character way too much :(

If I may paraphrase your words,

Kya haseen nazare hain iss raaste pe,

Jo tere alfaaz ki chaukhat pe jaa ke theherta hai

Originally posted by: tanu90

Hey Ritu!

Thanks for the tag! 🤗

Absolutely loved this OS! ❤️❤️❤️More like loved the Anu in this OS! Shayar Kapadia ki sangat ka gehra asar hua hai! 😳Her keeping track of time since she first met him (down to minutes), her understanding his shayari (what a soulful poetry at that!👏👏👏) and then writing one for him, MaAn holding hands and Anuj's casual mention of how he would look as a groom... There were so many magical moments but these happen to be my most favourite ones! ☺️Keep writing dear! Look in forward to reading more of your stories!

Love,

Noorie

Hey, Noorie!

Thank you so very much, dear! You always come up with such beautiful comments for me! I'm so humbled. ❤️❤️

Shayar Kapadia is proving to be a significant influence for her (atleast in my stories) 😍 thanks for mentioning your best moments.

Keep reading!

Originally posted by: Amy211307

how cute and awesome.. love love love it 💗💗💗

Thank you so much! ❤️❤️

Originally posted by: snehaz16

Such a sweet story dear...

It brings a content smile on my face... like actually Anuj got what he yearns for... what he truly deserves...

Taking some lines from your story..

zindagi me ho na ho

Dil me tera hona kaafi hai..

He was always in love with her.. but to have someone who reciprocate your love is the best feeling of life.. thanks for giving My Anuj that feeling...

Finally Anu enters in his jindgi to stay there permanently !!!

Ur OS is love.. so pure.. so magical...❤❤❤

Thank you so much, dear! ❤️❤️❤️

Anuj as a character is a great inspiration to write! I hope I could do a little justice to a significant moment in this character's life. I'm glad it came across well! 🙂🙂

Originally posted by: chat_3

Thank you for the tag❤️. First of all the prompt scared me for a minute, before reading further as my mind thought it would be a tragic story.😲 well, the genre was fluff so had to switch the mood as per the requirement. 🤭

However, I appreciated how broken relationships can be a symbolism of lost ones as it was for Anu 😭. Hopefully Vanraj might be as well dead for her. 😡 oh you bet! In all my stories

I appreciated the description of the atmosphere, such as the set-up of selfie stand, the lights etc. you can almost picture it. So glad to know! For me writing is showing more than telling. ❤️

Not sure how I feel about Anu getting diary indirectly through Kaka , but happy with the results. 🤗 I knew I was taking the risk with that but story had word limitations so had to cramp in the info somehow.

The interaction between the characters, the emotional vulnerability, their joy and sorrow description 👏 thank you so much ❤️

The command on the flow of the story, I have no words 😊. One can say, you have "glut" talent.🥳

A new word, I learned from this story too.😎 🤣🤣Happy to help! And you applied it as well.

Lastly, thanks for not including Muku. Tired of her in the show and appreciate this screenplay story without her 3rd wheel. 🤣 To be honest, this was written when we got BTS of Christmas track, Mukku was not that much established as a character back then, so didn't include her.

Thank you so much for your lovely words! Means a lot to me. ❤️🤍❤️🤍