That thing called love | MaAn SS |updated pt4a&b pg11&12 / 21.11 - Page 9

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Posted: 3 years ago
#81

https://youtu.be/n6IAPGRzm6c


drama karna ho toh poori tarah se karo🤣

Posted: 3 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: naadhiraa

Waiting for ur update Hinz. subah se intezaar tha.. kab wo gadi aayengi


https://c.tenor.com/723Exz1Rs9wAAAAC/anupama-anupama-serial.gif



aww tere liye kuch bhi🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
#83

Tu jaldi next part post kar😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
#84

Eagerly waiting yaar hinziiii for d next part 🤗🤗🤗😍😍

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Posted: 3 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: hinz

Disclaimer: This is only part of the update, picture main baaki hai😳



Part 4:



“accident? kiska?“ asked GK worriedly when he heard Devika scream on the call.


Anu started shaking incessantly and hit her back to the wall...


“Anuj.....” she gasped in fear and started imagining the worst of scenarios.


“kaka woh Anuj ki gaadi ka uss pahadi wale mandir ke paas accident ho gaya hai aur...”


Before Devika could finish Anu ran out of the door...

Devika yelled “Anu ruk, mai bhi aati hoon” but she didnt wait…

By the time Samar got a grip of the situation and ran after his mum, she had got into a cab and taken off...




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Flashback: half an hour before the accident



Waking up the loud ruckus at the foot of the mandir, Anuj rushed to see what the chaos was all about…


He saw some flower vendors fighting over the space they occupied near the mandir. Just as Anuj climbed down the stairs to help solve the dispute, he felt his phone vibrate in his coat pocket. It was the driver calling to say he was there with the documents.


Anuj went down to get the file from him and leaning on his car he pulled out his phone again to call Devika to say he’d received the documents when the brawl got intense. Anuj handed the file and his phone to the driver and ran to save the lost toddler when he noticed a truck speeding down the hill towards the mandir.


BOOM...CRASH...CHAOS!!!!!



“Madam yahan mandir ke paas bada accident ho gaya hai... aur Anuj sir apna phone mere paas chod gaye hain”



end of flashback



*******


“Anuj, aapko kuch nahi ho sakta, aap bilkul thik hai...mujhe pata hai”

she kept assuring herself and repeatedly asked the cab driver how much longer they had left to reach the mandir...


She hated the traffic and wished she could fly to reach where he was.

Praying with all her heart, she kept talking to herself to keep strong.


His smiling face kept flashing in front of her eyes and she wondered if she could ever forgive herself if the worse had happened to him.


“nahi, aisa nahi ho sakta, Anuj mujhe chod ke kahi nahi jaa sakte”

trembling with fear she chanted mantras to invoke her Kanhaji and was sure he would’t let anything bad happen to Anuj, her love.


“love?” for a split second she stopped fearing...though it wasn’t the right time or place to introspect but Anu unintentionally rejoiced for a moment on reaching a win to the ongoing battle she’d been fighting within herself.


“Madamji yahan se aapko paidal hi jana hoga, aagey rasta blocked hai, shayad koi accident hua hai” said the cabby breaking her eternal momentary trance.


Anu quickly paid him and frantically checked for shortcuts to get to the mandir...


She felt a surge of energy within her...with all her inner demons looking for refuge, she felt as though she was given a new lease on life and she couldn't wait to tell him how she felt.


The sudden fear of losing him lugged her down when she reached incident site...


With tonnes of questions and their answers playing havoc in her head she desperately searched for that one face that could bring her peace....


Her entire world came to a standstill and she fell to the floor when she spotted his red car.


Unable to react or process her thoughts, she bravely watched the crushed car being towed away...Her heart sank deeper when she saw a casualty being put on a stretcher and carried into an ambulance, the colour of jacket matched the one she saw him in that morning...



Devastated, she dragged her lifeless body up the mandir’s porch to have a one to one with her Kanhaji ...she couldn't fathom how he granted her, her love and snatched it away the very next instant...how could he be so cruel when she venerated him day and night and believed he would never do her any wrong...how could he take away the one thing she wanted the most in her life in that moment. how could he take away her Anuj!!!




*******


When she got no response to her pleas, she slumped on the steps of the mandir, right where he had rested a short while ago....Digging her face between her knees, she cried her heart out until she heard someone call her name...



“Anupama?”





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posting second part to this update in a little while, you can read it together if you like..save the chappals for later...had to bring in some Ekta-ish drama element🤣


areeee yaar hinzee you stopped again at a crucial point!!! Maar dalegi kya???? ... abb tho subah hi i can read.... sighhhh


but, very very well penned!!! aisa jhatka Anu ko mangta hai and aapne wahi diya❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#86

Dude I knew ki tu humare Anuj k saath kuch bura nhi kar skti(don't break my trust ok😂😂😂)

Waiting waiting🤭


Yaha mai befaltu tissue papers ready kar k baithi thi....I thought tera update hai to rulaaegi hi par dekho to...ulta I'm Grinning....wo bhi pata nhi kyu😆

Edited by shrizz - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#87

Again an cliffhanger 😭... please don't doo this to poor us 🥺.... really eagerly, desperately waiting for nxt chapter 😍

Posted: 3 years ago
#88

Teaser pg 1

Part 1: pg 3

Part 2: pg 7

Part 3: pg 9

Part 4a: pg 11




Part 4b:


Lifting her head to confirm that the faint voice calling her name was the one she craved to hear, she went numb with disbelief.

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“Anuj!” she mouthed and staggered down the stairs with her eyes fixated on his precious face.


Each step marking a different emotion as she climbed down the stairs thanking Kanhaji for restoring her faith in him. She felt grateful that he was safe, felt happy to have her companion back and most of all she felt lucky, now that she could love him back...


With happy tears blurring her vision and the loud celebration screaming within her, she stumbled over the last step and landed right in front of him as he caught her just in time like always.


Shocked to see her there, he tried to read her teary eyes and relieved expression.


“Anupama, tum yahan?” he asked in amazement but she said nothing.


“kya hua Anu, tum ro kyu rahi ho?” he asked as her tears started to worry him.


She couldnt get enough of his face and kept staring at him with all her love pouring out of her eyes.



“Anupama tum mujhe pareshan kar rahi ho, hua kya hai tumhe?” he asked fearfully as she crept closer than she already was, making him very uncomfortable.



And with one last wholeheartedly consuming look, she jerked him back when she threw her arms around and pulled him in a thrilling embrace.



The feeling was surreal, she was ecstatic but he was perturbed...and couldn't get himself to hug her back.



“Anupama” he whispered embarrassingly and gently tried to push her arms away to free himself of her immensely strong and devouring grip.



“Anuj, vaada kijiye ke aap mujhe kabhi chodke nahi jayenge” she spoke for the first time in a long while.



Tugging him tighter she said “Anuj mai aapke bina jee nahi paoongi”



He hopelessly wanted to savour her touch but knew it would be wrong to mistake her fear of losing him for love.


She was obviously terrified about the accident he assumed and mentally justified her being there and the hug that he struggled to free himself from.



“Anu mai thik hoon, mai kahi nahi jaa raha, mai hamesha tumhare saath hoon” he said it all in one go to calm her down and waited for her to pull away but she didnt.



“Anuj mai aapki hoon..bas aapki.” she announced with all her might and redid her pull on him to make him believe that it wasn’t a dream...


It still felt like a dream to him...he couldn't believe what was happening was real.



With an intense sense of stinging hysteria taking over his body and soul, he waited for her to say that one thing that would put all his doubts to rest... and she did..



“Anuj mai aapse bohot bohot bohot....” he needed to hear no more and pulled her so close and firm that she found it hard to breathe...





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chappals ke liye tayyar!!! please gaaliyo ke sath mein comments bhi de dena, acche ya bure all welcome🤗 thank you so much for patiently putting up with the delays and sorry if you guys have already gone to sleep...maafi maafi


goodnight! kal milte hai with more drama, i think this will be a long story, I have quite a bit planned😳

Edited by hinz - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#90

Behen this song is the definition of dhoom tanan na😂😂😂this song has multipurpose..for Anu madam when she realises her love for humara ladka but she is all guilty😆😆 and for Vanraj realizing he actually married maide ki katori...udtha hua teer leke seene mein lagaya bolo🤣🤣

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